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Drowning – Chapter 21
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“We did. It was probably one of my favorite weekends. It was perfect, minus the small water tantrum, which even that, to be honest, wasn’t that bad.” Julia was staring out at the water, with a reflective smile on her face.
“How can you say it wasn’t that bad. She’s my daughter and even I can admit, it was horrible.”
“The screaming was horrible. But when I went to pick her up, because she was scared that you were going to walk her down to the water again, she quieted down, put her head in the crook on my neck, and” Julia dropped her head and started to play with the sand, “This sounds so corny, but it was like all was right in the world. Whenever I hold her, I just get this sense of peace. I don’t know, it’s stupid. I don’t know how to explain it.”
Tina scooted closer to Julia and put her arm around her friend and rested her head on her shoulder, “It’s not stupid, Jules. Anyone who has ever truly loved a child can understand it, we’ve all felt it.” She lifted her head and lightly kissed Julia’s cheek, “Thank you.”
Julia looked down at Tina, “For what?”
“For loving my daughter like some parents can’t love their own. You really are good to herand me.”
“You never have to thank me for loving her. It’s impossible to know her and not love her. Besides, she’s a chick magnet. I met a lot of women with her.” Julia stated, a wicked grin, spreading across her face.
Tina playfully slapped Julia’s knees, “Nice try, Michaels. If you met so many women, what did you strike out or something, because I don’t remember hearing about them?”
“What makes you think you would have heard? If you did, you might not like me using your daughter to meet them.”
“Hmm, so between dinner five nights a week and almost every weekend together, you somehow found time to date and not tell me about it. Nice try. Face it, you’re just a mush who’s hooked on my daughter, with no MO behind it.”
“Maybe. Maybe.”
They sat in a comfortable silence for a while, quietly cuddling on the beach, watching Cara and the water. After a few minutes, Julia turned to Tina and saw her eyes filling with tears.
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What?, Who? damn post soon! I have to say that I really like Julia, difficult situation for her. Thanks.
Way with the cliffhangers -lucia! Whatever Dana has done, I think I’m dreading it more than she is. You really write all these characters well; I even care about Tina in your story, which I don’t so much in the show, and Julia is a nice one too. Awesome that you manage to keep this and your other fic going at the same time, so different from each other but both so good.
holy crap! what’s wrong with Dane! I didn’t think it would be anything serious, sounds like it’s gunna be totally awesome. I hope she tell’s Shane. Yoda’s good with advice lol!!! Update soon!
Wow! Great chapter… can’t believe you stopped there. LOL. I love how you are developing Dana. She is my favorite and you are just making me love her more. So Dana has a “stalker”, I knew that she loves Alice to much to simply walk away b/c she’s scared of losing her friendship. But she would walk away if someone has been threatening to physically hurt Alice. Come on Yoda you can get her through this. :)
I am starting to really like Julia a lot, especially after she tells Tina “No, lie to me, please, yes, honestly.” LMAO.
So…how long will Julia have to suffer i slience? Tina could move back to L.A. to be with Julia. Bette could develop a relationship with Cara. All would be right with the world, almost.
man..u know u are on my favorite writers list right? this was a great chapter it was like i was watchin a soap oprea and a big even just happened finally some light on why dana is doing this….thanks for the great chapter lookin forward to anything that u post next cause u talented like that
Hmmm, I wonder which phsyco ex this is…lol
Just when I thought it can’t get any better, it just did! Like lights, Dana is my favorite and you write so beautifully. You got me so curious now about that mysterious letter, please don’t keep us hanging for too long.
Lucia…I’ve read this story from the start, and this is def one of my top 5 ever!!!! Your story telling is amazing, and I love the suspense with Dana. She is my absolute fav, and this is a great storyline for her. Please post soon
Dana what is going on with you…Tina needs to move on i feel really sorry for Julia, I hope Julia is able to tell Tina how she feels about her and Cara adores her…looking forward to the next post.
Thank you.
Can’t wait to see who it is and what the letter says…post soon!!!
OMG what a twist. i HATE cliffhangers. god post soon *****
like others, i wish Julia can solve her “problem” and she make it happen with Tina. i love them together :) Yoda’s help is needed but i think Alice could help Dana too – unless it’s the way lights said.. Alice in danger :/ please, continue soon. *mumbles* cliffhanger after cliffhanger..