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Drowning – Chapter 21
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“I do trust you Dana. The day I saw that you and Alice were going to get together, which was before you got rid of Tonya, mind you, I was glad. I knew you would always be good to her and Alice needed that. I knew you would be good together. It’s just that I can’t understand what would make you walk away from all that you guys have together.”
Dana just shrugged her shoulders, “Shane, I appreciate it, but I don’t know what else to say other than to trust me.”
“You know if I understand, I can help make Alice understand.”
“I know, but Shane, I really don’t want to talk about it, ok?”
Shane dropped it, knowing if she pushed, she would shut Dana down totally. Even though she didn’t get it, she knew her friend was hurting and she wanted to make sure Dana knew she wasn’t alone., “So you and Tina are doing dinner tonight?”
“Yup. Want to join us?”
“Nah, I’ve got a date. You hang out with T. I’ll catch up with you guys tomorrow.” Shane was still holding out hope that Tina could talk to Dana. Even if she couldn’t get her to change her mind, because Dana could be a very stubborn woman, maybe she’d get a little insight into what behind this. Seeing Alice and Dana together, it was obvious that she loved Alice. All of Dana’s explanations lacked anything concrete to help make anyone understand. It made no sense.
“Hey Dane, I had no mail, did you bring it in?”
“Oh yeah, sorry. It’s on the kitchen table.”
“No problem. Thanks for bringing it in for me.” Shane walked over to the table and rifled through her mail. She picked up one and looked at it. “Dane, this is for you? Who would send you mail here? That’s strange, there’s no stamp on it, hmm.”
She walked over to Dana to hand her the letter. As she walked closer she saw that Dana was trembling. “What’s wrong? Dane? What’s going on?”
Dana didn’t answer, she sat on the couch with her hands shaking and tears beginning to fall down her cheeks. She carelessly took the letter from Shane and started to shake her head and began to murmur, “I can’t believe she found me. I did what she asked.”
“What was that Dane?”
Dana just sat there, staring at nothing, “I don’t understand. I did what she asked. Why won’t she leave me alone? Why?” She said to herself over and over.
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What?, Who? damn post soon! I have to say that I really like Julia, difficult situation for her. Thanks.
Way with the cliffhangers -lucia! Whatever Dana has done, I think I’m dreading it more than she is. You really write all these characters well; I even care about Tina in your story, which I don’t so much in the show, and Julia is a nice one too. Awesome that you manage to keep this and your other fic going at the same time, so different from each other but both so good.
holy crap! what’s wrong with Dane! I didn’t think it would be anything serious, sounds like it’s gunna be totally awesome. I hope she tell’s Shane. Yoda’s good with advice lol!!! Update soon!
Wow! Great chapter… can’t believe you stopped there. LOL. I love how you are developing Dana. She is my favorite and you are just making me love her more. So Dana has a “stalker”, I knew that she loves Alice to much to simply walk away b/c she’s scared of losing her friendship. But she would walk away if someone has been threatening to physically hurt Alice. Come on Yoda you can get her through this. :)
I am starting to really like Julia a lot, especially after she tells Tina “No, lie to me, please, yes, honestly.” LMAO.
So…how long will Julia have to suffer i slience? Tina could move back to L.A. to be with Julia. Bette could develop a relationship with Cara. All would be right with the world, almost.
man..u know u are on my favorite writers list right? this was a great chapter it was like i was watchin a soap oprea and a big even just happened finally some light on why dana is doing this….thanks for the great chapter lookin forward to anything that u post next cause u talented like that
Hmmm, I wonder which phsyco ex this is…lol
Just when I thought it can’t get any better, it just did! Like lights, Dana is my favorite and you write so beautifully. You got me so curious now about that mysterious letter, please don’t keep us hanging for too long.
Lucia…I’ve read this story from the start, and this is def one of my top 5 ever!!!! Your story telling is amazing, and I love the suspense with Dana. She is my absolute fav, and this is a great storyline for her. Please post soon
Dana what is going on with you…Tina needs to move on i feel really sorry for Julia, I hope Julia is able to tell Tina how she feels about her and Cara adores her…looking forward to the next post.
Thank you.
Can’t wait to see who it is and what the letter says…post soon!!!
OMG what a twist. i HATE cliffhangers. god post soon *****
like others, i wish Julia can solve her “problem” and she make it happen with Tina. i love them together :) Yoda’s help is needed but i think Alice could help Dana too – unless it’s the way lights said.. Alice in danger :/ please, continue soon. *mumbles* cliffhanger after cliffhanger..