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    FOREVER I PROMISE: Chapter 69

    Story written on August 7, 2005 by OCD.
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    REVENGE

    Previously

     

    Cruz called Whit’s cell and explained her findings.  Jeffrey had the mind of a 6 year old so there was no way he came up with this on his own.  Most importantly Jeffrey didn’t know how to drive but Josh said blue car.  They found the car in the garage but who drove it?

     

    Jeffrey Clayton had been committed to the Mental Hospital after his brother died and he had no other family members to take him in.  He had warrants for his arrest after escaping from the Mental Ward.  But how?  He doesn’t have the mind to come up with an idea like this.  Someone else was behind this Whit and Cruz decided.  That was the person they had to find.  Until they did, no one was safe because they were not certain who the real victim’s were. 

     

    FOREVER I PROMISE: Chapter 69

     

    Questioning Jeffrey was very hard until Cruz sat down beside him and spoke to him as she had Jordan.  She asked easy questions that a 6 year old could answer.  Jeffrey kept saying that a woman help him leave the big building where he slept.  She promised him ice cream if he did her a favor.  Using his strength to escape the hospital and take the little boy from the home where she dropped him off at he would in turn get all the ice cream he wanted. 

     

    From what Cruz could gather from Jeffrey, they had followed the little boy to Dana’s.  But he wasn’t sure where they started, Whit’s home or Bette’s home?  So Cruz still had not idea which child was the intended victim.  In the mean time Bette had hired Joe and Charles’s team to provide 24 hour bodyguard service for both families.  Whit didn’t like the idea.  Being a cop she felt she could protect her own family, but if it meant protecting Josh and Stacey so she could investigate and find this mysterious woman, she gave to Bette’s fussing.

     

     

    Bette and Tina’s

     

    Tina was working from home today because she just didn’t want to leave the twin’s.  She knew that Charles and his team would protect them but not like a mother could.  Tina just had this strange feeling that it wasn’t over. 

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    1. Please let Petluvr know that she has lots of people who are thinking of her, and praying for her…and while you are at it, tell yourself the same thing, because it is very much true. Take care of yourself!

    3. It is great to hear that PTis doing better and out of danger. I think that it is a blessing that you had reasearched and written about strokes and therefore was able to spot the warning signs. It is amazing how God brings us the things and information that we need to get us through life. We just have to pray and be vidgulant. Please know that both of you are in our prayers. I have been montering your progress theough your comments on other stories.

      To the story–I love this update. It is nice to see Bette and Tina interact with the children as thier love continues to grow. I alos love the other couples, and parings (Cruz&Alice, Whit&Stacey, and Kit&Charles). Your stroy just has so much flavor and dementions. The last post when the kids were playing with Bette’s feet while she was sleeping was priceless. Much love to ypu and PT and post as soon as you can. Be strong.

    6. TK hope Petluv get better and better and take care of yourself too…and about the story is Helena helping Candance? cuz she has no money to be by herself ok hope b&T family stay ok..great chatper

    7. Hey TK – It’s good to see you back. It’s so good to hear that PT is on the road to recovery….Stay strong my friend, the thoughts of a lot of people here are with you.

    9. Hope your friend is doing bettet,you’ll are in my prayers. God speed. love this story,Kids are so wonderfulHope Candace is caught soon before she can do to much damage. Thanks

    10. Hope your friend feels better, OCD. And you, too. Wishing you all the best.

      Thank you very much for posting. Take your time. We’ll always be here.

    13. I so enjoy this story and wish you could post more offten but under the surcumstences I can understands the lack of writting. I wish you both the best and Petluvr will be in my prayers. Take care of your self and thanks for the update.

    15. Hi TK i been a fan of your stories and this is my first time posting i hope you and petluv are ok. You are an excellent and very talented writer keep it up girl i alwayz love your stories. It took me about a month to read all your chapters and my girlfriend was getting all mad at me cuz i was like i gotta see what happens nxt so im glad im all caught up much Love thanx for your stories

    17. TK – give my best to Petluv and I do hope she is feeling better. What a chocker. Hope you are doing ok as well with everything going on.

      Back to the story…very nice updat TK but short. Now I can feel more drama to come…..so bring it on. I need some inspiration to my story. Post soon

    19. You and PT are in my prayers..I hope she is feeling better. Please get some rest yourself. Thank you for the update. Can’t believe Candance…she just won’t stop. Personally, once she’s caught would love for Tina to knock a little sense into her on Bette’s behalf. ;-)

    21. It was a plesant surprise to see your post. Continued prayers go out to Petluvr and yourself. I second your comment to refrain from stroke stories. My mom just had a stroke Wednesday so this is getting too close to home.

      Great story update. Candace! She needs to be placed in a room with Tina & Whit. They would turn her into mulch.

    22. Damn that crazy bitch Candace couldn’t go way huh, well let see where are she hidden. Post soon please, thanks! I hope Petluv get better soon and you are stay strong my friend, we will prayed for you. Thanks for the update!

    23. Oh gosh I’m so shocked (still am so shocked) when petluvr told me thru IM that she had stroke. I missed out your story a lot to miss your notes. Can you pls help me to give her a hug and wishing her all the best? Thanks and OCD… I’m wishing you best of luck too, pls do take care of yourself too, ok?

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