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FOREVER I PROMISE: Chapter 69
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“Cruz needs to make sure when she gets here Bette, but I have this strange feeling it’s her.” Tina said sitting down next to Bette.
“Tina I’m certain they would have notified me if she got out early or something.” Bette said rubbing Tina’s shoulders as she leaned over and kissed her sweetly on her lips. “I’m sure everything will be ok honey. Besides, Joe and Charles are the best. Nothing is going to happen to our children.” Bette said pulling Tina into her lap.
“I will feel better once Cruz checks honey. That’s all. I just need to know that she is still locked up.” Tina said leaning back in Bette’s arm giving her another kiss.
“Nothing is going to happen, Tina. I won’t let it.” Bette said.
“Well one thing is going to happen, Porter. After the Twin’s are asleep you are going to wash the hallway wall. I warned you that they would go wild with that paint again.” Tina said.
“But Tina, it’ll come off with water I promise. Believe me; I learned my lesson after they painted my face the last time and it took days to get it off.” Bette said laughing.
“You’re right. You did learn your lesson. You were so cute though I couldn’t get mad that time either.” Tina said now laughing with Bette.
“Yea, you thought it was funny until you fell asleep and they painted faces on the tops of your feet.” Bette laughed as the door bell rang.
“I’ll get it honey. I’m sure it’s them.
Tina headed for the door but was stopped by Bryan who was assigned to the front of the house. Another team member has already checked out Whit and Cruz before allowing them near the door, but they still had to get past
“WOW, that’s even better than when they painted your face Bette,” Whit giggled.
“Smartass.” Bette replied.
“Bette, are you thinking what I’m thinking?” Whit said seriously staring at the painting
“As a matter of fact, Tina said it first. She thinks its Candace.” Bette said looking at Cruz, Whit and Tina.
“But it couldn’t be. She’s in prison.” Whit said.
“Actually she’s not.” Cruz spoke softly.
“She’s not what?” Bette asked.
“She was transferred to the same Mental Hospital that Jeffrey escaped from 3 months ago after she had a nervous breakdown in prison.” Cruz said waiting for all ***** to break loose.
“I cannot believe this. Do they know if it was her or not that escaped with Jeffrey?” Bette asked.
“Yes, it was her. Apparently she tricked Jeffrey into breaking out by promising him ice cream and a little friend to play with. That’s the best I could get from him today.” Cruz said.
“Why did you wait so long to tell us?” Whit asked with a bit of anger in her tone.
“Cruz, it’s ok. I knew it was her. I also know that you were on your way to tell us. So calm down Whit. You know Cruz would not keep anything from us.” Tina said.
“Have there been any leads as to where she might be now?” Bette asked.
“No, nothing so far. They found Jeffrey’s brother’s old car and processed it to confirm her fingerprints were found in the car. Detective Clements has warrants for her arrest and an APB out as well. We will find her I promise. In the mean time Charles and his team are following up on some leads they came across.” Cruz replied.
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Please let Petluvr know that she has lots of people who are thinking of her, and praying for her…and while you are at it, tell yourself the same thing, because it is very much true. Take care of yourself!
glad to hear that Petluvr is out of danger and on road to recovery. most impt do take care and thanks for posting.
It is great to hear that PTis doing better and out of danger. I think that it is a blessing that you had reasearched and written about strokes and therefore was able to spot the warning signs. It is amazing how God brings us the things and information that we need to get us through life. We just have to pray and be vidgulant. Please know that both of you are in our prayers. I have been montering your progress theough your comments on other stories.
To the story–I love this update. It is nice to see Bette and Tina interact with the children as thier love continues to grow. I alos love the other couples, and parings (Cruz&Alice, Whit&Stacey, and Kit&Charles). Your stroy just has so much flavor and dementions. The last post when the kids were playing with Bette’s feet while she was sleeping was priceless. Much love to ypu and PT and post as soon as you can. Be strong.
looks like t’s got te gift-1st the dream-now knowing that it was cj
love and prayers coming to the pair of you. btw great update. thanks
TK hope Petluv get better and better and take care of yourself too…and about the story is Helena helping Candance? cuz she has no money to be by herself ok hope b&T family stay ok..great chatper
Hey TK – It’s good to see you back. It’s so good to hear that PT is on the road to recovery….Stay strong my friend, the thoughts of a lot of people here are with you.
candyass is like a bad penny…. she is always popping up… another great chapter…
my best to PT and you …please take care of your self…
Hope your friend is doing bettet,you’ll are in my prayers. God speed. love this story,Kids are so wonderfulHope Candace is caught soon before she can do to much damage. Thanks
Hope your friend feels better, OCD. And you, too. Wishing you all the best.
Thank you very much for posting. Take your time. We’ll always be here.
Hey TK am gald to hear you are doing better and Prtluvr is recovering. you are both in my prayers. great update on your story. take care
hi, just wanted to say that i’m thinking of you guy’s, stay strong and look after yourself, email me at snoopross@rock.com if you wanna talk, kinda been in the same situation as you before. great chapter.
I so enjoy this story and wish you could post more offten but under the surcumstences I can understands the lack of writting. I wish you both the best and Petluvr will be in my prayers. Take care of your self and thanks for the update.
She will recover!
Hi TK i been a fan of your stories and this is my first time posting i hope you and petluv are ok. You are an excellent and very talented writer keep it up girl i alwayz love your stories. It took me about a month to read all your chapters and my girlfriend was getting all mad at me cuz i was like i gotta see what happens nxt so im glad im all caught up much Love thanx for your stories
Thanks for the update. You both will continue to be in my prayers. Thanks for the story, I love it. Oh boy, Candace just will not give up.
TK – give my best to Petluv and I do hope she is feeling better. What a chocker. Hope you are doing ok as well with everything going on.
Back to the story…very nice updat TK but short. Now I can feel more drama to come…..so bring it on. I need some inspiration to my story. Post soon
K
Great update. Hope all gets better for you. Can’t wait for more.
You and PT are in my prayers..I hope she is feeling better. Please get some rest yourself. Thank you for the update. Can’t believe Candance…she just won’t stop. Personally, once she’s caught would love for Tina to knock a little sense into her on Bette’s behalf. ;-)
MY PRAYERS ARE WITH YOU BOTH…THANKS FOR TH UPDATE ON THE STORY AND BOTH YOU PT..
It was a plesant surprise to see your post. Continued prayers go out to Petluvr and yourself. I second your comment to refrain from stroke stories. My mom just had a stroke Wednesday so this is getting too close to home.
Great story update. Candace! She needs to be placed in a room with Tina & Whit. They would turn her into mulch.
Damn that crazy bitch Candace couldn’t go way huh, well let see where are she hidden. Post soon please, thanks! I hope Petluv get better soon and you are stay strong my friend, we will prayed for you. Thanks for the update!
Oh gosh I’m so shocked (still am so shocked) when petluvr told me thru IM that she had stroke. I missed out your story a lot to miss your notes. Can you pls help me to give her a hug and wishing her all the best? Thanks and OCD… I’m wishing you best of luck too, pls do take care of yourself too, ok?