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    FOREVER I PROMISE: Chapter 68

    Story written on July 26, 2005 by OCD.
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    Someone is kidnapped.


     

    “Stacey hang on, Bette is right here.”  Tina said handing Bette the phone.

     

    “Hey what’s going on?”

     

    “Bette, Kacey is tearing the place apart.  Thank god she just went outside on the deck but she is still out of control.  She got served papers today saying that Jennifer’s parents were really alive and they want custody.  Jennifer’s parents were given temporary custody as the court case between them and Whit works it way through the system.  Bette, help her please.”  Stacey said trying to calm down enough to explain.

     

    “Hey calm down Stacey, I’m on my way ok.  I’ll be there shortly.  Call me on my cell if things change or get worse ok.”  Bette said kissing Tina good-bye as she ran out the door.

     

    Tina remained on the phone with Stacey to keep her calm.  Whit had lost every bit of her Irish temper and the house, now the deck and beach were feeling her wrath.  Bette finally got there stopping long enough to hug Stacey then she ran out onto the beach looking for Whit.  She couldn’t get very far because she still needed her forearm crutches to get around for the most part. 

     

    “WHIT!!!!  Where are you?  It’s Bette, Whit.  Come on buddy where are you?”  Bette yelled as she searches the waters edge finding a single crutch bent and tossed aside. 

     

    Bette walked a bit further and saw another crutch in the same condition.  Then she saw Whit sitting on the sand staring out at the ocean.  Bette walked over and sat down beside her and there they just sat.  Not a word spoken for some time.  They just watched to ocean waves as they came onto the beach and then withdrew. 

     

    “Jennifer’s parents were never dead Bette, they’re still alive and they want my children.”  Whit finally said.

     

    “Whit we will fight this.  We’ll hire the best lawyer there is to get Dylan and Brittney home.  I promise you this buddy.”  Bette said as she placed her arm around Whit’s shaking shoulders.

     

    “Was everything a lie?  She told me her parents were dead.  Did I ever really know her Bette?  I fell like so many years of my life with Jennifer was all a lie now.  I don’t know what to believe.”  Whit said as she cried softly never one to show her emotions.

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    2. My thoughts and prayers are with you and Petluvr. You need to take care of yourself, too. Here’s my crime solving thoughts, I think that Jennifer’s parents are behind the kidnapping!!!

    3. TK,
      You and Petlvr are in my thoughts and prayers. Wishing you both all good things and a full recovery.
      I am humbled by the brilliance of your storytelling especially in these difficult times.
      If you need anything then just let me know and I will endeavor to help you however I can.
      You have yet again set up a very intriguing plot line. I am equally puzzled and enthralled by this turn of events. Who is this mysterious woman and is she behind the re-emergence of Jennifer’s parents? Is this all a bit of subterfuge to cover up her true plan?
      I hope you can share the answers with us all real soon.
      Baited breathe until then.
      Thank you for this marvelous mystery,
      Your Loyal Fan.

    7. Hey, girl. Just hang in there. Be strong. We all root for you and wish you the best.

      When you look into an abyss, the abyss also looks into you.—Friedrich Nietzsche

      So, um… how about looking towards the horizon and seeing forever?

    11. OCD I’m sorry to hear about Petlvr and hope she will go through and get well soon! Good chapter. Damn who the hell is that and why that crazy basterd have to kidnap Bette’s son, and glad Jordon is ok. Please post soon, thanks!

    12. OCD, I am sorry about Petlvr. I know how hard it is to live through what you are experiencing now. Try not to ignore your health during this. She will need you later, also.

    15. Im so sorry abpout Petlvr. I hope you both get well and I will keep u in my prayers. That was crazy shit. I loved it!!!Great update as usual.

    16. OCD I am sorry to hear about Petlvr’s stroke. As you have researched this topic you know she is going to make it. It will take some time but with your Love, therapy and plenty of prayers she will get better. Now don’t neglect your own health issues during this crisis. We can wait for the next chapter under these circumstances.

    19. OMG!! Excellent as always and I am so sorry to hear about Petlvr I hope she makes a speedy recovery and you take care of yourself I haope you are feeling better..We are saying our prayers for you both…

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