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    A Walk on the Wild Side – Chapter 23

    Story written on August 21, 2005 by tbsaver.
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    A Picture paints a thousand words

    A Walk on the Wild Side – Chapter 23

    Vual looked over at the brooding brunette nervously. Bette sat, arms crossed, a look of thunder clouding her delicate features. Vual flinched at yet another exasperated sigh that escaped Bette’s pouting lips.

    Goddamit she thought. I can’t believe she is staying here and letting me go to the airport by myself. What? Can’t afford to waste any of her precious time on seeing me off? She questioned sarcastically.

    Bette clenched her jaw, Typical! She thought. I wait all these years to find my soul mate and she can’t even be bothered to see me safely onto my plane. Bette clenched her fists, wanting nothing more than to slam her hand on the dashboard in frustration.

    Doesn’t she realise I needed this? Doesn’t she realise that I needed to spend every last second I could with her, to store up these memories to last me until she joined me once again?

    We didn’t even have time to talk, not properly she thought.

    She thought back to last night. How perfect everything had been.

    They had watched the last remaining embers of their camp fire slowly turn cold, the gentle breeze occasionally sending small sparks flying into the air. Even then, they had not returned to the comfort of Tina’s studio, preferring to lay on their backs, counting the stars above them. Tina had slowly turned onto her right side, propping her self up with her hand.

    Bette had felt Tina’s stare without having to turn her head. Bette had wanted to return the blondes loving gaze, but suddenly had felt frightened. In just a few short hours she would gaze upon this face for the last time before she left. She had needed to postpone that moment as long as she could, the irrational feeling that it would be the last time she would see her clouding her mind.

    She had picked up on Tina’s sadness twice during the course of the day, and had brushed it from her mind, thinking that Tina was as sad as she at their parting. Now though she was sensing a hesitancy in Tina, like there was something she needed to say, but couldn’t bring herself to.

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    1. Haven’t read this yet so I can’t comment on this chapter yet… but I’m definately noticing a pattern of posting in the middle of the night!!! LOL

      I’m sure its another great chapter .. I’ll be back! (original comment here…huh?)LOL

    4. Oh so sweet…. I just love reading about women in love. How does one ever explain the depth of a feeling between two women….there are no words to express that but…you do a damn fine job of coming close.

    5. Damn T can you get any more mushy?? LOL
      And how come there wasn’t any live animals in this chapter?? When Bette gets back to LA she better go to the zoo or something. LOL harold and kumar, you should see that movie when your high one night it’s fucking funny.

    6. CROO only if your high. its not funny if your not. lol. thats one way to say airport good byes. i like your way much better. ;). you dont need to apologize. you post when you can. i mean of course, wed love more, but whats a girl to do. I.Love.This.Story. it just makes me smile. thanks girl.

    8. Damn beautiful and amazing and so sweet, love what Bette and Tina have for each other and they love so strong and glad they talk and work it out. Ok please post soon, thanks!

    9. Love this so glad Bette when back, Tina was waiting. Will Tina take a month to get to the USA. Bette will be a crazy woman without Tina, but she will have Tina present to remember her happy days with her .

    10. Your writing touches my heart…my soul. And, every time I finish reading a new chapter, I feel like I am stepping out of your incredible painting, back into real life…can’t I just stay in the painting for a little while longer?

    12. WOW AMAZING chapter…I could almost swear I’m a fly on the window of the Land Rover just watching this unfold.

      I guess I just love the sappy stuff. Post when you can I know it will be incredible … this one was definately worth the wait!!!!

      THANK YOU!

    13. Yay I’m caught up! Awesome chapter, tbsaver. Sorry for not responding but I’ve been on vacation. No worries, I went back and commented on each one. :) Thank you for letting Bette and Tina have a proper good-bye, and thanks for not giving us a cliff-hanger!

    19. Now that’s the kind of good-bye that just makes me sappy. Glad that Vual gave Bette the present. He’s one smart guy. Thank goodness they have him looking out for both of their best interests.

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