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A Walk on the Wild Side – Chapter 23
She had turned around then, her eyes shimmering with tears, wanting so much to express the love she felt for this amazing woman that had freed her heart from the shackles that had held it captive for so long. “T” She had started to say, only to be silenced by Tina’s finger pressed against her lips. “Shhhhh” she had said shaking her head, a smile gracing her lips. “NO words baby, not tonight.”
Tina had slowly led her to the bed, where they had made love, slowly and tenderly all night, each of them expressing their feelings not with words, but with kisses, and gentle caresses.
As Bette remembered the perfect night they had spent, their bodies wrapped together in the throws of lovemaking, she felt her breath quicken, Licking her lips, she could almost taste Tina’s sweet lips against her own. Oh God what have I done she groaned to herself. She felt for Tina’s pillowcase in her pocket, and quickly removing it she bought it to her face sniffing deeply.
“It is hard to say goodbye, no?” Vual said, interrupting Bette’s thoughts.
Bette sighed wondering how last nights magic had been replaced by this mornings disaster.
“You will look after her, wont you?” Bette replied, looking across at Vual sadly.
Vual laughed softly, “That is funny Bette, I was planning to ask the same of you!” He said, his deep velvety voice filling the Land Rover.
Bette turned away, unable to meet his gaze. “I owe you an apology” she said regretfully. “I referred to you as the hired help this morning,” she explained. “That was wrong of me. I know what you did for Tina when she was attacked, and I know that you are a good friend.” Bette turned her head, looking into Vual’s Deep concerned eyes.
“I accept your apology” Vual replied, unaffected by Bette’s admission. “I have known Tina a long time. She is my employer and she is my friend.” Vual paused for a moment. “Part of me is sad that you will take her away from us, but a bigger part of me is happy that she has found love.” Vual stated matter of factly.
Bette stared at Vual, shocked that he had guessed the special relationship the two women shared.
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(57 votes, average: 3.33 out of 5)
Haven’t read this yet so I can’t comment on this chapter yet… but I’m definately noticing a pattern of posting in the middle of the night!!! LOL
I’m sure its another great chapter .. I’ll be back! (original comment here…huh?)LOL
rb..I do love your story. If it takes a week for another post..I will be here waiting.
You did good!
Oh so sweet…. I just love reading about women in love. How does one ever explain the depth of a feeling between two women….there are no words to express that but…you do a damn fine job of coming close.
Damn T can you get any more mushy?? LOL
And how come there wasn’t any live animals in this chapter?? When Bette gets back to LA she better go to the zoo or something. LOL harold and kumar, you should see that movie when your high one night it’s fucking funny.
CROO only if your high. its not funny if your not. lol. thats one way to say airport good byes. i like your way much better. ;). you dont need to apologize. you post when you can. i mean of course, wed love more, but whats a girl to do. I.Love.This.Story. it just makes me smile. thanks girl.
Ah, I have a big, goofy grin on my face after reading this. So worth the wait!
yay!
Damn beautiful and amazing and so sweet, love what Bette and Tina have for each other and they love so strong and glad they talk and work it out. Ok please post soon, thanks!
Love this so glad Bette when back, Tina was waiting. Will Tina take a month to get to the USA. Bette will be a crazy woman without Tina, but she will have Tina present to remember her happy days with her .
Your writing touches my heart…my soul. And, every time I finish reading a new chapter, I feel like I am stepping out of your incredible painting, back into real life…can’t I just stay in the painting for a little while longer?
I so love your story.
WOW AMAZING chapter…I could almost swear I’m a fly on the window of the Land Rover just watching this unfold.
I guess I just love the sappy stuff. Post when you can I know it will be incredible … this one was definately worth the wait!!!!
THANK YOU!
Yay I’m caught up! Awesome chapter, tbsaver. Sorry for not responding but I’ve been on vacation. No worries, I went back and commented on each one. :) Thank you for letting Bette and Tina have a proper good-bye, and thanks for not giving us a cliff-hanger!
i really love the story, pls post more..mabuhay ka bete n tina!
I really like your storytelling. Please continue. Thanks.
Great chapter! I loved the discription painting (I was close to picking it =)
awesome…! pls do post soon…
Hey TB you are safe for now…that left me all warm and fuzzy…so very sweet.
Thank you.
Now that’s the kind of good-bye that just makes me sappy. Glad that Vual gave Bette the present. He’s one smart guy. Thank goodness they have him looking out for both of their best interests.