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Coming Back – Chapter 8
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Previously
Marina : (to Jenny) Baby, what happen? It was the perfect evening, everything was so beautiful, you were so beautiful. It’s been a long time that I haven’t told you this but.. I love you, I love you since the first time I saw you, since the first time we met. Personally, the first time I saw you was kinda magic, I was so hypnotise by you, your beauty, your elegance, the way you moved, your smile, your bleu eyesthat everything else just disappear for I see just you. (She, once again, starts crying) Since that moment, this tinny second, I knew it was you, you are the one. The one that will make me happy. The one that will love me as I am and for who I was, am and will be. The one that I’ll love until I can’t breath anymore, until it hurts me to love you (pause) I now realise all those lost years that I wasn’t where I should’ve been, and that is here with you. I realise this now because I decided to play the idiot part in the story of life. Yes, an idiot,.. a plain idiot for letting you go when it was the moment that I was supposed to be there and said “yes, I love you with all my heart”. I’m so terribly sorry baby I love you, I love you so muchAnd I’ll never leave you behind, I’ll never turn my back on you ever again (she cries).
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JENNY AND SHANE’S HOUSE – AFTERNOON
Shane and Carmen are sitting on the couch. Carmen is leaning on Shane.
Carmen : Love you baby.
Shane : Love you too.
(silence)
Carmen : What do you think she has ?
Shane : I.. I don’t know. (uncertain)
Carmen looks at Shane, she gets the TV remote and turns off the TV set. Shane is lost in thoughts, she’s starring at nothing, her eyes look empty. Carmen looks at her and gets up.
Carmen : I’m gonna get prepared.
Shane : Umm ?? (coming back to reality) Sorry what ?
Carmen : I’ll get prepared, I’m working tonight.
Shane : You’re working ?
Carmen : Humm yeah.. you remember that contract I got with “Drugstore Club” in Santa Monica ?
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yeah I think shane and jenny have a really deep conection because they both went to a lot of shit.
But hey, shane and carmen are the real deal.
Great update!!!!
Hey there, long time no see but I’m so glad to see you back here. Both Jenny and Shane are have lead broken lives and it stands to reason that Shane would have these feelings for Jenny;however, I think that Shane probably feels this way because she has finally found someone that needs her. I don’t think that she’s inlove with Jenny,I think that she feels that Jenny is the little sister that she always wanted and never had.She wants to protect Jenny from everything and everyone including Marina eventhough she knows that Marina would never hurt Jenny intentionally. Shane is just feeling helpless right now. CC once again you have done a wonderful job with the ladies inner thoughts. Please post again,soon.