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Bitter Endings, Sweet Beginnings: Part Four
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The day had been perfectly planned. Well, as much as any
day can actually be planned when you have children. Alice came over at
the promised time of noon and they took the children out for lunch
before going to Sherman Oaks Castle Park for a round of miniature golf
during which Wilson triumphantly claimed the almighty lowest score.
Then they headed home where they would rest their weary feet by resting
on the couch and watching several movies together. The children’s
favorites, of course, something Helena had told them to think over
during the days they were apart and then ask Winnie to please pack them
for the next week.
Only
Winnie didn’t pack the movies. Not because the children didn’t tell
her, because they said they did and Helena knew for a fact they did,
and not because she forgot because Helena talked to her only the day
before about this. She didn’t pack them either out of carelessness or
just sheer vindictiveness.
Either
way, the children’s favorite movies simply were not there and suddenly
their perfectly planned day was not so perfect or planned anymore. When
they discovered the movies weren’t in the large bag Winnie had hastily
packed, the way the children’s faces fell had nearly broken Helena’s
heart. Something that Helena suspected Alice felt similarly affected by
because the first thing the blonde did was to immediately cheer them up.
Tickling
their sides lightly and saying it wasn’t a big deal because didn’t they
know who their mom was? She was the lady who hated sad faces more than
any other lady on the planet and she bet if they looked sad enough she
would take them out to rent those favorite movies then and there so
they could watch them right away. Then she pulled Wilson and Jun Ying
in close for a hushed conference, all of them moving away moments later
to peer up at Helena with huge puppy dog eyes and adorably pathetic
expressions.
And
naturally, Helena agreed to this request but instead of renting the
movies she suggested they purchase them instead. That way the
children’s favorite movies would always be available to them when and
if they ever felt the impulse to watch them. Her children didn’t tend
to indulge in television too much, at least if she could help it.
Helena far preferred to spend time playing with them than sitting them
in front of a television set. Though she knew Winnie felt differently
and because of this they had developed favorite shows and movies.
Something that Helena certainly wouldn’t deny them the pleasure of
seeing, should they want, while spending time with her. This led to
their spontaneous shopping expedition at the Suncoast Motion Picture
Company inside of the Glendale Galleria.
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WOW!….ur talanted. this story is Sexci & swt..o how i luv it!..it’s turning out great but damn you keep making me wait…Hell it’s worth the wait..hopefully expecting more sexual tension…Keep up the great wrk..please Post Soon!..
Dreiser please don’t make us wait so long again for another chapter! Really really good.. Like your style of writing, very similar to Sulks yet a little different.. please update soon..
I love how people think Helena being civil, nice and sweet is surprising when you see how good she was to the Blob. But whatever!
Anyway. You know I think this chapter kicks all kinds of ass, but I totally loved the first scene in the video store with the kids all well-behaved and Alice doing that dance and aw.
Hee. And during the movie marathon,
DAMNATION!
I hit “enter” before I could finish my thought somehow, but you’re used to that from me from our chats.
Anyway. So I loved how cute Helena was during the movie marathon, half-hissing in Alice’s ear and finding her not amusing anymore, only not really, lo. I, too, reject Twinky Winky is gay.
Ah, and the Mormons or Girl Scouts line. DUDE! You KNOW my thing with them! Salty Mormons and Nefarious Cookie Plots! Ah! And that reminds me of this South Park episode I saw recently…anyway. Aw, that part where Helena hoped Winniw wouldn’t embarass her in front of Alice like she did with Tina? Awww. It killed.
And Winnie. You know I want to punch her, but now I want to squash her too, like the cricket I left trapped under a cup when I left my office.
The “The writer was so terribly kind to her it was hard not to think of her romantically. But Helena tried to stop as Alice wasn’t in the right place for such things and she had enough of falling for women who were unavailable to her to attempt it one more time. Even if the woman was someone as special as she found Alice Pieszecki to be.” was so good, seriously. I think it just nailed who Helena is as a person.
And you know, Winnie and her reasons for taking the kids to Disneyland were exactly what I thought they would be when you revealed them. Because she never seemed particularly interested in them on the show. She sucks ass.
And the under-the-bed scene. Ahh, God, that killed. Hee. I knew all the cute bits were coming up, like “you’re in my spot” or Alice trying to be gentlemanly, but when they came, it still killed me. And Helena’s blush when Alice told her why she can’t come out yet.
Hee. Jun Ying the card shark. Ah!
And the Tatu thing. You already know my opinion on that, lol.
Ah. I loved this chapter so much. It just kicked all kinds of ass and was so true to who Helena is.
Hooray for our Helacious dinghy with the super spy and the super cute writer, lol
*Love* it.
Nothing makes my day more then seeing that you have updated your story. It’s even nicer when it’s been less then a week since your last update. It’s kind of like finding a twenty dollar bill in your pocket that you didn’t remember having, just makes you day. GREAT STORY. But everything you write is great. Can I be the President of your Fan Club. LOL Deb
Makes me almost like Helena, Love the interaction she has with her children. Alice does such a wonderful job with them. Under the bed part was so cute. Just to keep the children from hearing the mommies. thanks
You’ve done the impossible. . .I ALMOST like Helena. When will she finally share her feelings with Alice?
Yeah Helena being civil, nice, and sweet! Oh my amazing.