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Bitter Endings, Sweet Beginnings: Part Four
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Upon
walking into the store they received a greeting from a man in his early
twenties with bleached blonde hair who was standing behind the counter.
He looked like he wanted to say more but the phone rang and he sighed
quietly then answered it with a cheerful, “Thanks for calling Suncoast
in Glendale. My name is Dave, how can I help you?”
“Look at all the movies, Mummy,” said Jun Ying, tugging on Helena’s hand, a smile on her face and in her voice.
“I
know, sweetheart,” Helena replied, returning the smile and resting her
hand lightly on the top of Jun Ying’s head in an affectionate gesture.
She looked to Wilson who stood at her right side and touched the back
of his head with her free hand. “You see anything you fancy, darling?”
Peering up at Helena and grinning largely, Wilson pointed at a nearby
wall and said, “They have Batman toys. Batman’s cool because he fights
all the bad guys and wins.”
“And
he looks hot while doing it,” remarked Alice with a chuckle. Then she
formed an impressed expression and said, “Wow. Check out their
children’s section, huh? It’s huge.”
This
caused everyone to follow Alice’s line of vision and look at the
section for children’s movies which was very impressive indeed spanning
a good portion of the store and taking up at least twelve rows.
Simultaneously, Jun Ying and Wilson looked up at Helena with shining
eyes and Helena smiled encouragingly at them. “Now are you sure you
remember all your favorites?” she asked fondly, her voice slightly
teasing.
“Mummy!” Jun Ying and Wilson cried with identical exasperation.
Chuckling
softly, Helena lightly touched the back of their heads and said, “Go on
then, babies, and we’ll see if we might manage to locate them.”
Grinning
happily, the children moved in a strangely brisk walk, taking very
obvious care not to run as they headed over to the children’s section.
Alice and Helena lingered back for a few moments to observe them. Their
heads were ducked together in conference, apparently discussing their
variety of movie choices. Wearing a wistful expression, Alice murmured,
“I wish I had that as a kid, you know?” She looked at Helena and smiled
at her confused expression. “I’ve never been really close with my
brother and sister. They’re a few years older than me and never much
got involved in my life. As a kid I always kind of wished for another
sibling that was closer to my age because I thought they’d be more
inclined to spend time with me.” Alice laughed wryly after saying this
last sentence.
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WOW!….ur talanted. this story is Sexci & swt..o how i luv it!..it’s turning out great but damn you keep making me wait…Hell it’s worth the wait..hopefully expecting more sexual tension…Keep up the great wrk..please Post Soon!..
Dreiser please don’t make us wait so long again for another chapter! Really really good.. Like your style of writing, very similar to Sulks yet a little different.. please update soon..
I love how people think Helena being civil, nice and sweet is surprising when you see how good she was to the Blob. But whatever!
Anyway. You know I think this chapter kicks all kinds of ass, but I totally loved the first scene in the video store with the kids all well-behaved and Alice doing that dance and aw.
Hee. And during the movie marathon,
DAMNATION!
I hit “enter” before I could finish my thought somehow, but you’re used to that from me from our chats.
Anyway. So I loved how cute Helena was during the movie marathon, half-hissing in Alice’s ear and finding her not amusing anymore, only not really, lo. I, too, reject Twinky Winky is gay.
Ah, and the Mormons or Girl Scouts line. DUDE! You KNOW my thing with them! Salty Mormons and Nefarious Cookie Plots! Ah! And that reminds me of this South Park episode I saw recently…anyway. Aw, that part where Helena hoped Winniw wouldn’t embarass her in front of Alice like she did with Tina? Awww. It killed.
And Winnie. You know I want to punch her, but now I want to squash her too, like the cricket I left trapped under a cup when I left my office.
The “The writer was so terribly kind to her it was hard not to think of her romantically. But Helena tried to stop as Alice wasn’t in the right place for such things and she had enough of falling for women who were unavailable to her to attempt it one more time. Even if the woman was someone as special as she found Alice Pieszecki to be.” was so good, seriously. I think it just nailed who Helena is as a person.
And you know, Winnie and her reasons for taking the kids to Disneyland were exactly what I thought they would be when you revealed them. Because she never seemed particularly interested in them on the show. She sucks ass.
And the under-the-bed scene. Ahh, God, that killed. Hee. I knew all the cute bits were coming up, like “you’re in my spot” or Alice trying to be gentlemanly, but when they came, it still killed me. And Helena’s blush when Alice told her why she can’t come out yet.
Hee. Jun Ying the card shark. Ah!
And the Tatu thing. You already know my opinion on that, lol.
Ah. I loved this chapter so much. It just kicked all kinds of ass and was so true to who Helena is.
Hooray for our Helacious dinghy with the super spy and the super cute writer, lol
*Love* it.
Nothing makes my day more then seeing that you have updated your story. It’s even nicer when it’s been less then a week since your last update. It’s kind of like finding a twenty dollar bill in your pocket that you didn’t remember having, just makes you day. GREAT STORY. But everything you write is great. Can I be the President of your Fan Club. LOL Deb
Makes me almost like Helena, Love the interaction she has with her children. Alice does such a wonderful job with them. Under the bed part was so cute. Just to keep the children from hearing the mommies. thanks
You’ve done the impossible. . .I ALMOST like Helena. When will she finally share her feelings with Alice?
Yeah Helena being civil, nice, and sweet! Oh my amazing.