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Bitter Endings, Sweet Beginnings: Part Four
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There
was a small pause then Helena, keeping her eyes focused solely on her
children, watching them with clear love and affection, murmured, “I
longed for siblings as well. It was I, not Winnie, who insisted on
adopting a brother or sister for Wilson. I didn’t want him to grow up
alone in this world.” Her jaw clenched slightly and Helena continued in
low and even tones, “I know that despite my wealth and supposed power,
he will suffer some degree due to my sexuality. That others might
reject him or tease him… somehow I felt it wouldn’t be quite so bad
if he had someone there with him. Although,” Helena gave a soft and
caustic laugh. “It does mean Jun Ying must suffer the same. I suppose,
in the end, I was only being selfish.”
“Hey,”
Alice said quietly, reaching out to clasp Helena’s arm and squeezing it
tenderly when the other woman met their eyes. “You weren’t being
selfish. Can’t you see how happy they are?” She turned to nod at the
children who were still in conference, Jun Ying making small gestures
with her hands as she explained something to Wilson. “Those kids love
their life and nobody that’s really selfish could make them that happy.”
“Perhaps
you’re correct, darling,” murmured Helena, watching her children. Her
eyes lighting up in a smile as they burst into quiet laughter and
nodded their heads in emphatic agreement about a particular movie.
“Perhaps?
Darn tootin’ I’m correct,” Alice chuckled, poking Helena lightly in the
stomach and grinning when the British woman released an unladylike
yelp. Helena started to reply when the writer took notice of Wilson
standing on his tip toes to retrieve a movie for Jun Ying. “I’ll go
help them,” said Alice with a grin, jogging over and playfully lifting
Wilson up to reach the movie. Making Wilson laugh in delight and Jun
Ying follow suit.
Helena
remained watching them until she heard a male voice say to her, “Sorry
about the wait.” She turned in the voice’s direction and saw it was the
bleached blonde man from behind the counter. “I’m the only one working
until two o’clock. Can I help you guys find anything?”
“I
must confess, I don’t have an answer to that question,” said Helena in
amusement. She nodded to Wilson, Jun Ying, and Alice. The children were
holding a movie together, utterly transfixed by Alice who was most
likely explaining the movie’s plot to them as she appeared to be
enthusiastic storytelling mode, waving her hands in crazy loops. “We’re
shopping for the children’s favorite films so they might have them at
both my home and that of my ex.”
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WOW!….ur talanted. this story is Sexci & swt..o how i luv it!..it’s turning out great but damn you keep making me wait…Hell it’s worth the wait..hopefully expecting more sexual tension…Keep up the great wrk..please Post Soon!..
Dreiser please don’t make us wait so long again for another chapter! Really really good.. Like your style of writing, very similar to Sulks yet a little different.. please update soon..
I love how people think Helena being civil, nice and sweet is surprising when you see how good she was to the Blob. But whatever!
Anyway. You know I think this chapter kicks all kinds of ass, but I totally loved the first scene in the video store with the kids all well-behaved and Alice doing that dance and aw.
Hee. And during the movie marathon,
DAMNATION!
I hit “enter” before I could finish my thought somehow, but you’re used to that from me from our chats.
Anyway. So I loved how cute Helena was during the movie marathon, half-hissing in Alice’s ear and finding her not amusing anymore, only not really, lo. I, too, reject Twinky Winky is gay.
Ah, and the Mormons or Girl Scouts line. DUDE! You KNOW my thing with them! Salty Mormons and Nefarious Cookie Plots! Ah! And that reminds me of this South Park episode I saw recently…anyway. Aw, that part where Helena hoped Winniw wouldn’t embarass her in front of Alice like she did with Tina? Awww. It killed.
And Winnie. You know I want to punch her, but now I want to squash her too, like the cricket I left trapped under a cup when I left my office.
The “The writer was so terribly kind to her it was hard not to think of her romantically. But Helena tried to stop as Alice wasn’t in the right place for such things and she had enough of falling for women who were unavailable to her to attempt it one more time. Even if the woman was someone as special as she found Alice Pieszecki to be.” was so good, seriously. I think it just nailed who Helena is as a person.
And you know, Winnie and her reasons for taking the kids to Disneyland were exactly what I thought they would be when you revealed them. Because she never seemed particularly interested in them on the show. She sucks ass.
And the under-the-bed scene. Ahh, God, that killed. Hee. I knew all the cute bits were coming up, like “you’re in my spot” or Alice trying to be gentlemanly, but when they came, it still killed me. And Helena’s blush when Alice told her why she can’t come out yet.
Hee. Jun Ying the card shark. Ah!
And the Tatu thing. You already know my opinion on that, lol.
Ah. I loved this chapter so much. It just kicked all kinds of ass and was so true to who Helena is.
Hooray for our Helacious dinghy with the super spy and the super cute writer, lol
*Love* it.
Nothing makes my day more then seeing that you have updated your story. It’s even nicer when it’s been less then a week since your last update. It’s kind of like finding a twenty dollar bill in your pocket that you didn’t remember having, just makes you day. GREAT STORY. But everything you write is great. Can I be the President of your Fan Club. LOL Deb
Makes me almost like Helena, Love the interaction she has with her children. Alice does such a wonderful job with them. Under the bed part was so cute. Just to keep the children from hearing the mommies. thanks
You’ve done the impossible. . .I ALMOST like Helena. When will she finally share her feelings with Alice?
Yeah Helena being civil, nice, and sweet! Oh my amazing.