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FOREVER I PROMISE: Chapter 70
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“I SAID, SHUT UP *****!!!!” Candace screamed as she slapped the young brunette across the face.
“Why are you doing this to me?” The young girl cried.
“I told you Bette, I would have you and I would be your last lover.” Candace spat.
“But my name is Kim, not Bette. Please untie me. I promise I won’t tell anyone.” Kim said.
“You’re not going anywhere Bette Porter. You belong to me.” Candace said as she tightened the ropes to the foot of the bed.
There was a loud crashing sound as the bedroom door flew open. Charles and Joe ran into the room and grabbed Candace placing her in handcuffs.
“Are you ok ma’am?” Joe asked as he untied the young frightened woman and covered her naked body with a blanket.
“She’s crazy!! She kept calling me Bette somebody.” Kim said as she looked around the room for her clothes. “I just want her out of here and away from me.”
Handing Kim her clothes Joe and Charles left Kim’s apartment escorting Candace to their vehicle.
“Whit we’ve got Candace and we are on our way to the warehouse. No she didn’t give us any trouble, but she was about to rape some young kid. Ok I understand. We’ll be waiting.” Charles said as he closed his cell phone.
Arriving at the warehouse Charles and Joe led Candace to a chair where they restrained her until Whit arrived. Hearing the door open Charles turned to see Bette heading for Candace.
“Bette wait! She can’t hurt you any more. It’s over. She’s going back to jail or the mental hospital. Don’t do anything stupid that would land you in jail yourself.” Charles said holding Bette at arms length.
“Where did you find her?” Bette asked through clinched teeth.
“We tracked her from a bar to the apartment of a young woman named Kim. Strangely enough she looked like you Bette. Apparently Candace thought she was you and was attempting to beat and rape the young woman when we arrived.” Joe explained.
“Is the woman ok?” Whit asked.
“Yes, frightened and bruised but she was ok when we left her.” Charles answered.
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well i guess thats a way to leave it. as you are leaving us for a time. maybe never to return. know that thoughts and prayers are there for you. take care.
OHHH GOD NO!!!!!! THIS IS 2 PAINFUL!!!! BETTE HAS GOTTA GO BACK…SEND WHIT FOR HER PLEASE!!!!!!
OCD, I am glad you were able to post. I always look forward to your story. I am sorry about all that’s been happening with you and Petluvr. I hope things will start to improve soon. As usual, I enjoyed this chapter. I love this strong Bette, who will do anything to protect her family. I just hope she learns to forgive herself, and realizes that she needs to be with Tina. Please don’t let their son die, I don’t think I can deal with them facing anymore sadness or drama. Well, until things turn around and you are able to post again, you take care.
I still will keep my eye open for your story even though you may not come back..I hope everything goes well.TAKE CARE..THANKS
sorry to hear things are not going well for you. i have been wondering how you have been for a couple of weeks now. please know that even while your away, my thoughts are with you. take care—you will be missed on this site.
loved reading your story’s and i do hope that some time in the future you can continue, take care and good luck, always keep your chin up and remember you always have friends here.
Hey there, OCD. I root for you. I root for the characters you borrowed and made. Never give up. Stand by the one(s) you love. And please don’t go away.
Hey TK i like your story. u and Petlurv are in my thoughts and prayers. get well soon. take care and good journey.
glad u are back-this is one of my favorvite stories
I would like to thank all of you for your good wishes and prayers.I am getting better by the day. I hope OCD will continue to write. She is my favorite author as well as a good friend. I will miss her and her stories. This was a great way to end the story if you feel like you have to.
Damn Candace is never gone but now she’ll gone forever. This is sad and hope Bette thinking clear and come back to Tina. Post soon please, thanks!
K
Great chapter although heart breaking. I hope things get better for you soon. LIfe is a bitch, trust me I know. I hope and pray everything turns out good for you. HOpe you continue when you can.
i hope and pray that you both are going to be o.k. i know life does’nt always turn out the way we want it to, but i hope it gets better…and i just want you to know, although alot of us don’t comment on each chapt. of each story doesn’t mean we don’t enjoy them, and appreciate the time and talent it takes to write them…i luved both your writing and your story!!!!!please take care of yourself!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
OMG! OCD this is really Intense WHOA! I’m really happy that your back to write Thank you that was so Intense at all Please make them happy Please and I’m hope that everything is good for you and Petluvr Thanks Please continue post soon.
Thanks for posting. I hope everything works out for you as well as Petluvr it sounds like a terrible situation for her and my heart goes out to you both. Take care and hope all works out.
Noooooooooooooooo she has to go back
Wow OCD. We were just talking about your story last night at the east coast get together.My thoughts and prayers are with both of you.I hope one day you may return not only to the site but the story as well.KTF!
This totally sucks right now!!!!!!!!!!! But I hope you get the rest you need and things work out!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Super happy to see a post from you TK…but very sad to see you go for the time being. I do hope you will join us again in the near future. As always a super chapter with drama TK….and you better make Bette get her ass back beside Tina again……..all the best whishes to you TK….