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FOREVER I PROMISE: Chapter 70
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“Candace drop the gun!!!!” Cruz ordered as she fired killing Candace instantly.
“Call an ambulance!!!” Bette screamed.
Cruz checked Candace to make sure she was dead and called for help on her police radio. Charles helped Joe to a chair and Whit ran to Bette and Tina’s side.
“Whit help us. She’s been shot.” Bette said as she held Tina in her arms crying. Whit held pressure on the wound waiting for help to arrive.
Whit, Cruz, Charles and Joe remained at the scene while Bette and Tina were rushed to the hospital. After giving their statements they were all released. Cruz was placed on Administrated leave until the investigation cleared her for the shooting. Arriving at the hospital Stacey was waiting for them. Whit had called her so she could call Kit and the gang. Shane and Carmen left the twins with the bodyguard, Bryan and arrived at the ER shortly after everyone else.
Bette was released after being cleaned up for her cuts and bruises. She had several stitches but was ok other than the fact that her pregnant wife was in critical condition 3 floors up. Bette entered the ER waiting area to see everyone sitting there.
“Come on, let’s get upstairs. I need to see Tina. I have to know that she’s ok. Stacey please.” Bette said as she pulled Stacey from her seat.
“Bette, Tina’s in surgery.” Stacey said holding onto Bette’s shoulders.
“The baby, what about our baby?” Bette said as her tears took over her emotions.
“We don’t know anything yet Bette. She just went into surgery.” Stacey said.
“Please I need to be near her. Can we at least go up stairs to the waiting area?” Bette pleaded.
“Sure Bette. Come on everyone; let’s go upstairs so Bette can be there when the Doctor comes out.” Stacey motioned for everyone to follow.
Several hours went by waiting for the Doctor to exit the OR. Bette and everyone stood as the doctor approached.
“Ms Porter, Tina is doing just fine. She is in recovery.” The doctor said.
“How is our son?” Bette asked.
“He is in the NICU. Prematurely born infants are deprived of the final weeks within the shelter and warmth of their mother’s body where they are able to thrive, develop and gain weight crucial to their survival. When babies are born too soon, they struggle to fight against many life-threatening conditions. We are just going to have to wait and see Ms. Porter. The chances that your son will make are not very high right now. I’m sorry I don’t have better news for you. But your wife is going to be just fine.” The doctor explained.
“Can I see my wife?” Bette asked as she felt her knees weaken. Whit stepped up to hold her.
“Yes, the nurse can take you up to ICU as soon as Ms. Kennard is settled. The doctor said.
“How am I going to tell Tina about our son? He could die without her ever seeing him. God help me. We can’t lose another child.” Bette said as she leaned on Whit.
“Bette, it’s in God’s hands now. There is nothing we can do. You need to be strong for Tina and your children.
Entering Tina’s room Bette felt her heart breaking. She sat down next to Tina praying for her to wake up and be ok. Feeling she had caused this. It was all her fault Tina had been shot and their son might die.
Without thinking, Bette stood up and left Tina’s room. Walking past everyone she lowered her head.
“Bette, where are you going?” Shane asked.
“Bette, what’s wrong?” Whit said as she stepping in front of Bette to stop her.
“I need to get out of here. All I ever do is cause Tina pain. Now I may have cost her our son. I can’t take this any more. I need time to think. I just need time alone.” Bette said as she walked out of the hospital.
Getting in her car all Bette could think of was how much she loved Tina and her family. She also thought of all of the bad she had caused Tina and her children over the past several years. Driving down the highway Bette could no longer find her happy place any more. Her thoughts were on nothing more than leaving. She had caused all of this pain for Tina the first time she allowed Candace to kiss her. Their lives had never been the same. It all started because they lost their first son. Now once again because of her, their son may die. Bette just couldn’t take any more. So she drove for hours not knowing where she might end up. She just knew she couldn’t turn back no matter how hard she tried.
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well i guess thats a way to leave it. as you are leaving us for a time. maybe never to return. know that thoughts and prayers are there for you. take care.
OHHH GOD NO!!!!!! THIS IS 2 PAINFUL!!!! BETTE HAS GOTTA GO BACK…SEND WHIT FOR HER PLEASE!!!!!!
OCD, I am glad you were able to post. I always look forward to your story. I am sorry about all that’s been happening with you and Petluvr. I hope things will start to improve soon. As usual, I enjoyed this chapter. I love this strong Bette, who will do anything to protect her family. I just hope she learns to forgive herself, and realizes that she needs to be with Tina. Please don’t let their son die, I don’t think I can deal with them facing anymore sadness or drama. Well, until things turn around and you are able to post again, you take care.
I still will keep my eye open for your story even though you may not come back..I hope everything goes well.TAKE CARE..THANKS
sorry to hear things are not going well for you. i have been wondering how you have been for a couple of weeks now. please know that even while your away, my thoughts are with you. take care—you will be missed on this site.
loved reading your story’s and i do hope that some time in the future you can continue, take care and good luck, always keep your chin up and remember you always have friends here.
Hey there, OCD. I root for you. I root for the characters you borrowed and made. Never give up. Stand by the one(s) you love. And please don’t go away.
Hey TK i like your story. u and Petlurv are in my thoughts and prayers. get well soon. take care and good journey.
glad u are back-this is one of my favorvite stories
I would like to thank all of you for your good wishes and prayers.I am getting better by the day. I hope OCD will continue to write. She is my favorite author as well as a good friend. I will miss her and her stories. This was a great way to end the story if you feel like you have to.
Damn Candace is never gone but now she’ll gone forever. This is sad and hope Bette thinking clear and come back to Tina. Post soon please, thanks!
K
Great chapter although heart breaking. I hope things get better for you soon. LIfe is a bitch, trust me I know. I hope and pray everything turns out good for you. HOpe you continue when you can.
i hope and pray that you both are going to be o.k. i know life does’nt always turn out the way we want it to, but i hope it gets better…and i just want you to know, although alot of us don’t comment on each chapt. of each story doesn’t mean we don’t enjoy them, and appreciate the time and talent it takes to write them…i luved both your writing and your story!!!!!please take care of yourself!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
OMG! OCD this is really Intense WHOA! I’m really happy that your back to write Thank you that was so Intense at all Please make them happy Please and I’m hope that everything is good for you and Petluvr Thanks Please continue post soon.
Thanks for posting. I hope everything works out for you as well as Petluvr it sounds like a terrible situation for her and my heart goes out to you both. Take care and hope all works out.
Noooooooooooooooo she has to go back
Wow OCD. We were just talking about your story last night at the east coast get together.My thoughts and prayers are with both of you.I hope one day you may return not only to the site but the story as well.KTF!
This totally sucks right now!!!!!!!!!!! But I hope you get the rest you need and things work out!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Super happy to see a post from you TK…but very sad to see you go for the time being. I do hope you will join us again in the near future. As always a super chapter with drama TK….and you better make Bette get her ass back beside Tina again……..all the best whishes to you TK….