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FOREVER I PROMISE: Chapter 70
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Finally approaching Candace, Bette stared at her. “Candace, what in God’s name has happened to you? Do you hate me that much that you would harm an innocent young woman like that?” Bette asked.
Candace looked up at Bette and smiled. “I knew you’d come.” Candace said.
“Candace please. This has got to end. I never loved you. I never had feelings for you. It was all a mistake. I am married and very happy with Tina and my children. I have gone on with my life Candace. We, Tina and I are expecting another child soon. Don’t you see? I never gave you another thought after you went to jail. It was where you belonged.” Bette said as she tried to hold her temper back. Seeing this woman again, Bette was no longer afraid of her. Bette was filled with anger that Candace would dare to harm her son or her family.
“Bette, you never stopped loving me. I see it in your eyes. I am the only one that ever really gave you what you wanted.” Candace said with a smirk.
With that said Candace released her handcuffs with the key she had hidden in the back of her jeans. Before anyone could move Candace had Bette around the neck with one arm and the pointed edge of the handcuff to Bette’s right eye.
“Don’t move or I will kill her! No surgery will save her this time once this pierces her brain.” Candace said as everyone backed off.
“Candace, don’t hurt me please. You said you loved me. Please honey don’t hurt me.” Bette said playing with Candace’s mind. Feeling the handcuffs sharp edge move from Bette’s eye she elbowed Candace in the stomach.
Candace fell back a few feet and then with a sudden forward movement lunged at Bette full force. Bette stepped to the side and hit Candace square in the stomach with her right knee sending her to the floor. Her kickboxing lessons from Joe had paid off.
Bette’s years of rage and anger that had been pent up for Candace was now released. Bette grabbed her by the back of her head and started beating Candace in the face with her fist. Joe and Charles started towards Bette but Whit made them stop.
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well i guess thats a way to leave it. as you are leaving us for a time. maybe never to return. know that thoughts and prayers are there for you. take care.
OHHH GOD NO!!!!!! THIS IS 2 PAINFUL!!!! BETTE HAS GOTTA GO BACK…SEND WHIT FOR HER PLEASE!!!!!!
OCD, I am glad you were able to post. I always look forward to your story. I am sorry about all that’s been happening with you and Petluvr. I hope things will start to improve soon. As usual, I enjoyed this chapter. I love this strong Bette, who will do anything to protect her family. I just hope she learns to forgive herself, and realizes that she needs to be with Tina. Please don’t let their son die, I don’t think I can deal with them facing anymore sadness or drama. Well, until things turn around and you are able to post again, you take care.
I still will keep my eye open for your story even though you may not come back..I hope everything goes well.TAKE CARE..THANKS
sorry to hear things are not going well for you. i have been wondering how you have been for a couple of weeks now. please know that even while your away, my thoughts are with you. take care—you will be missed on this site.
loved reading your story’s and i do hope that some time in the future you can continue, take care and good luck, always keep your chin up and remember you always have friends here.
Hey there, OCD. I root for you. I root for the characters you borrowed and made. Never give up. Stand by the one(s) you love. And please don’t go away.
Hey TK i like your story. u and Petlurv are in my thoughts and prayers. get well soon. take care and good journey.
glad u are back-this is one of my favorvite stories
I would like to thank all of you for your good wishes and prayers.I am getting better by the day. I hope OCD will continue to write. She is my favorite author as well as a good friend. I will miss her and her stories. This was a great way to end the story if you feel like you have to.
Damn Candace is never gone but now she’ll gone forever. This is sad and hope Bette thinking clear and come back to Tina. Post soon please, thanks!
K
Great chapter although heart breaking. I hope things get better for you soon. LIfe is a bitch, trust me I know. I hope and pray everything turns out good for you. HOpe you continue when you can.
i hope and pray that you both are going to be o.k. i know life does’nt always turn out the way we want it to, but i hope it gets better…and i just want you to know, although alot of us don’t comment on each chapt. of each story doesn’t mean we don’t enjoy them, and appreciate the time and talent it takes to write them…i luved both your writing and your story!!!!!please take care of yourself!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
OMG! OCD this is really Intense WHOA! I’m really happy that your back to write Thank you that was so Intense at all Please make them happy Please and I’m hope that everything is good for you and Petluvr Thanks Please continue post soon.
Thanks for posting. I hope everything works out for you as well as Petluvr it sounds like a terrible situation for her and my heart goes out to you both. Take care and hope all works out.
Noooooooooooooooo she has to go back
Wow OCD. We were just talking about your story last night at the east coast get together.My thoughts and prayers are with both of you.I hope one day you may return not only to the site but the story as well.KTF!
This totally sucks right now!!!!!!!!!!! But I hope you get the rest you need and things work out!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Super happy to see a post from you TK…but very sad to see you go for the time being. I do hope you will join us again in the near future. As always a super chapter with drama TK….and you better make Bette get her ass back beside Tina again……..all the best whishes to you TK….