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From Above…Ch.6
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My chest grows tight and tears burn in my eyestoughen up Porter, you can’t cry because she doesn’t feel the same as you, ***** it’s only been about two weeks since you first set eyes on her
The silence between us is unbearable. I feel embarrassed, rejected, head fucked andplease love me Tina, I’ll make you so happy. I retreat back into my world of silent declarations of love. The trip I was looking forward to only minutes ago is now threatening to become an absolute nightmare. Tina makes a few attempts to talk to me, bring me round a bitexplainbut I cut her off and put on a brave face.
“Tina, you really don’t have to explain yourself, I was just being a silly, over-sensitive foolI got too caught up in the momentI didn’t mean it so lets just drop it yeah?” I think she might have got the hint there Porter, what a smooth talker you really areway to make the situation worse.
Tina sighs dejectedly and returns to her book. The note pad lays cradled in her lap, abandoned. I feel tempted to tear up the page on which I bared my soul, rip it into tiny shreds so it looks like my heart feels. Think of all the girls you’ve done this to over the years Porteryou’ve got some apologetic phone calls to make when you return to L.A.
I recline my chair and forget about the sexual references made about it by the two of us, a different two of us, no less than an hour ago. I fall into a fitful sleep and only wake when I hear the pilot’s voice. I sit up and see London’s lights looming in to view through the dark night.
We land at London Heathrow and I try to put on a brave face, trying to salvage the trip before it has even began.
“So, you ready to try ‘London baby’!” I say in my best cockney accent. It doesn’t come out exactly right and I sound like a poor mans ***** Van *****.
“Sure am” Tina replies, but she looks distracted and the small bubble of excitement I have got from stepping out onto the British soil is burst as I am reminded of what a fool I have made of myself.
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Oh my goodness that was utterly amazing! Wow. I felt the emotion in the moment. Please continue!
The cab driver runs his leering eye over me and says “You can give it to me if you want, darling…”
I was drinking something and missed my mouth on this comment…….Ahhhhhhh mannnnnn!! LMAO
This is it Bette. Lets not waste anymore of our vacation with silly misunderstandings. Come and make love to me.
DO THE DAMN THING TINA!!!!!!!!!!!!
We spent the rest of the night making the heavens move…
Thank you Lou….you can rest assured that their heavens werent the only ones moving!!
BTW….BEAUTIFUL note that Tina wrote to our insecure Bette!!
After this post, I dont mind if you take a minute….and I do mean a “minute” to yourself. -_-
Oh, you get me here !! A part of me was right but you did it more beautifully than I even dreamed about – … and, like Bette, I was pretty dying all along until you finally relieved “us” ! How touching was Tina’s written answer…
And how I loved to endly see our fragile Bette expressed loudly what she never stopped to only think all along the last chapters.
No wonder I can so deeply relate to her about that… Words are so powerful and if one sometimes finds hard to let them go away on paper instead of keeping them in mind only, how harder can be the “final process”, letting them loudly expressed…
So you fully satisfied my romantic heart with this mutual declaration of love surrounded by candlelights.
You also pretty dealt the final blow to me with your last line : “We spent the rest of the night making the heavens move…”
And, at last, on a very personal way I couldn’t deny currently, there’s a line in this chapter that brang me a delicate feeling of melancholia : “I retreat back into my world of silent declarations of love”.
That was marvelously said – and so rightly. One needs to look in an emotional mirror from time to time, so… thank you for that too.
OMG! I missed this Story it’a really Amazing and I just catching up to read WHOA! your really got my attention and to read this Beautiful Story WOW! another Wonderful Story that I missed anyway I Love it Please continue post soon Thanks.
yes. there is a god in heaven who heard our pelase of just one more. go and mark your books. and btw why does school start on a thursday. just cuz you work doesnt mean you can forget us. were your students also. say multitasking 3 times and it happens. post soon.
K
Great chapter, just excellent. Glad they are on the same page now. Love it.
wow jsut got caught up on reading your chapters. this chapter was amazing. sometimes it is easier to write then to say what is in our hearts. very well done.
Great chapters can’t wait for more!!
Great chapter.
That was sooooooooooooooooo good. Our poor Bette, jumping to conclusions, being all insecure. The note, fantastic, damn, I don’t know if I would have made it through the whole thing before heading for the sofa. Can we maybe have a bit more tonight please.
aawww Lou that was so sweet! You had me going after the last post, but I am glad T clarified herself.
aww…WOW..OMG that was unbelievably BEAUTIFUL!..Post sOON!!!
That was so good,need more and more. The driver almost got Bette stired up. calling her darling Bette is a little shy but I think with Tina she will never be… thanks
Those were two great chapters! thank you for the story.
That was amazingly beautiful!! Had to read the note over and over and over….
hmmmm. i am really loving this story…. and now i must read on
that was so sweet!!
great!!!!!!!!!! post soon
Damn that was beautiful and amazing, love it. Post soon, thanks!