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    From Above…Ch.6

    Story written on August 31, 2005 by lou2282.
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    B&T arrive in The Big Smoke…

     

    Tina stands amongst what must have been hundreds of candles burning brightly in the darkness. She looks at me and her face is opennot the closed emotionless face of the last few hours. She walks over to me and stands close to me but without touching.

     

    “You’re such a fool Bette Porter…” I am Tina, anything you sayjust don’t make me feel any worse than I already do

     

    “One day, you’re going to stop and think before you wade in with your ‘I don’t care attitude’ and realise that other people have stuff to say tooyou wouldn’t let me extend on our conversation on the plane because of your damn pride and now look where it’s got youyou’re so miserable.”

     

    I nod and take her advice by keeping my mouth firmly shut.

     

    “What did you write on the plane Bette?”

     

    No, noplease don’t make me say itI’m hurting Tina, don’t do this to me.

     

    “Tplease” I beg but it’s no good. She shakes her head and waits for my response to her question.

     

    “Ioh godI told youTinaplease don’t make me do thisit’s cruel”

     

    I get a blank stare from Tina and I know that I have to continue.

     

    “I. wrote that. I was in love with you Tina”

     

    I sobI can’t help it. Tina doesn’t move to comfort me and I know now that I have lost her.

     

    “Then what did you say after that?”

     

    “Tina, please!” I beg, sob, shout.forgetting that she has created the most romantic setting and not associating that with what she’s making me do.

     

    “Bette, if you know what’s good for you, you’ll answer me”

     

    “I said that I hoped that’s what you were going to write to me” help me Tina, I can’t breathe when I think about losing youhelp me Tina please

     

    The woman who was my angel not so long ago but who I barely recognise now is holding out a piece of notepaper to me.

     

    “I wrote it whilst you were asleep”

     

    My shaking hands open it and I begin to read.

     

    Bette,

    You look so beautiful sleeping, like an angel from above. Although I can tell it’s not a peaceful sleephopefully, your sleep tonight will be better having read this

    I wasn’t going to tell you that I love you, that’s true. I was going to tell you that I worship and adore you at a level that I feel goes beyond love. I want to spend every minute of my life loving you and making you feel like the most special person in the world. You are my angel and I can’t bear the thought of my life without youyou light up my life in a way that I can’t explainI love you with every beat of my heart and with every breath I breathe. Your declaration of love was all I needed to hear and like you, I needed to express myself in a certain way. This is it Bette. Lets not waste anymore of our vacation with silly misunderstandings. Come and make love to me.

     

    Yours Always

     

    T x

     

    In the time I had taken to read the note, Tina had undressed and was laid on the sofa. Needless to say I did not hesitate getting over there and covering her with kisses and salty tears. My angelI love you

     

    “My angel” I whisper, “I love you.”

     

    We spent the rest of the night making the heavens move

     

     

    TBC

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    2. The cab driver runs his leering eye over me and says “You can give it to me if you want, darling…”

      I was drinking something and missed my mouth on this comment…….Ahhhhhhh mannnnnn!! LMAO

      This is it Bette. Lets not waste anymore of our vacation with silly misunderstandings. Come and make love to me.

      DO THE DAMN THING TINA!!!!!!!!!!!!

      We spent the rest of the night making the heavens move…

      Thank you Lou….you can rest assured that their heavens werent the only ones moving!!

      BTW….BEAUTIFUL note that Tina wrote to our insecure Bette!!

      After this post, I dont mind if you take a minute….and I do mean a “minute” to yourself. -_-

    3. Oh, you get me here !! A part of me was right but you did it more beautifully than I even dreamed about – … and, like Bette, I was pretty dying all along until you finally relieved “us” ! How touching was Tina’s written answer…
      And how I loved to endly see our fragile Bette expressed loudly what she never stopped to only think all along the last chapters.
      No wonder I can so deeply relate to her about that… Words are so powerful and if one sometimes finds hard to let them go away on paper instead of keeping them in mind only, how harder can be the “final process”, letting them loudly expressed…

      So you fully satisfied my romantic heart with this mutual declaration of love surrounded by candlelights.
      You also pretty dealt the final blow to me with your last line : “We spent the rest of the night making the heavens move…”

      And, at last, on a very personal way I couldn’t deny currently, there’s a line in this chapter that brang me a delicate feeling of melancholia : “I retreat back into my world of silent declarations of love”.
      That was marvelously said – and so rightly. One needs to look in an emotional mirror from time to time, so… thank you for that too.

    4. OMG! I missed this Story it’a really Amazing and I just catching up to read WHOA! your really got my attention and to read this Beautiful Story WOW! another Wonderful Story that I missed anyway I Love it Please continue post soon Thanks.

    5. yes. there is a god in heaven who heard our pelase of just one more. go and mark your books. and btw why does school start on a thursday. just cuz you work doesnt mean you can forget us. were your students also. say multitasking 3 times and it happens. post soon.

    7. wow jsut got caught up on reading your chapters. this chapter was amazing. sometimes it is easier to write then to say what is in our hearts. very well done.

    10. That was sooooooooooooooooo good. Our poor Bette, jumping to conclusions, being all insecure. The note, fantastic, damn, I don’t know if I would have made it through the whole thing before heading for the sofa. Can we maybe have a bit more tonight please.

    13. That was so good,need more and more. The driver almost got Bette stired up. calling her darling Bette is a little shy but I think with Tina she will never be… thanks

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