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From Above…Ch.6
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With heavy hearts and heavy bags we climb into the car waiting for us outside the airport, provide by Arnold.
With as much perkiness I can muster I greet the driver,
“Hi there, did Arnold give you the address or do you want me to give it to you?”
The cab driver runs his leering eye over me and says “You can give it to me if you want, darling”
It’s the first thing in the last hour that has made Tina smilewell, more of a smirk really…
“Er, hang on” I say, trying to brush off his suggestive comment and rummaging in my travel bag for the address. “Here it is.18 Hoxton Square, Flat 5, Shoreditch, EC1″
“I know love, I’ve got the keys for it” chuckles the driver as he puts the car into gear and heads off into the London night.
We arrive at the square and I’m impressed by the building that contains our apartmentmainly because there is a very attractive looking bar occupying the ground floor Porter? We squeeze into the elevator and I punch the button for the fifth floor. The door opens seconds later and I let us into our home for the next two weeks. Its then we realise that we have the penthouse.
Tina finally breaks her silence “Ohmy.god”
I’m as dumbstruck as she is. The wall facing us is sheer glass looking out onto the picturesque square below and the apartment itself is sleek and ultra modern.
“This is absolutely amazing” I take in more of my surroundings and realise that everything we could want has been provided for us – candles waiting to be lit’not tonight though’ I think sadly – food, good wine…
“Aggh! No coffee?” Tina shouts in despair, peering into the cupboard I’m looking in.
We search and discover she is righteager to please her and make her my angel again I jump in to save the day
“I saw a store on the way into the square, I’ll just run out and get some…”
And I’m gone.
I return thirty minutes later (the store proved to be a little more difficult to find than i first thought) to a scene that brings me to tears for the second time today.
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Oh my goodness that was utterly amazing! Wow. I felt the emotion in the moment. Please continue!
The cab driver runs his leering eye over me and says “You can give it to me if you want, darling…”
I was drinking something and missed my mouth on this comment…….Ahhhhhhh mannnnnn!! LMAO
This is it Bette. Lets not waste anymore of our vacation with silly misunderstandings. Come and make love to me.
DO THE DAMN THING TINA!!!!!!!!!!!!
We spent the rest of the night making the heavens move…
Thank you Lou….you can rest assured that their heavens werent the only ones moving!!
BTW….BEAUTIFUL note that Tina wrote to our insecure Bette!!
After this post, I dont mind if you take a minute….and I do mean a “minute” to yourself. -_-
Oh, you get me here !! A part of me was right but you did it more beautifully than I even dreamed about – … and, like Bette, I was pretty dying all along until you finally relieved “us” ! How touching was Tina’s written answer…
And how I loved to endly see our fragile Bette expressed loudly what she never stopped to only think all along the last chapters.
No wonder I can so deeply relate to her about that… Words are so powerful and if one sometimes finds hard to let them go away on paper instead of keeping them in mind only, how harder can be the “final process”, letting them loudly expressed…
So you fully satisfied my romantic heart with this mutual declaration of love surrounded by candlelights.
You also pretty dealt the final blow to me with your last line : “We spent the rest of the night making the heavens move…”
And, at last, on a very personal way I couldn’t deny currently, there’s a line in this chapter that brang me a delicate feeling of melancholia : “I retreat back into my world of silent declarations of love”.
That was marvelously said – and so rightly. One needs to look in an emotional mirror from time to time, so… thank you for that too.
OMG! I missed this Story it’a really Amazing and I just catching up to read WHOA! your really got my attention and to read this Beautiful Story WOW! another Wonderful Story that I missed anyway I Love it Please continue post soon Thanks.
yes. there is a god in heaven who heard our pelase of just one more. go and mark your books. and btw why does school start on a thursday. just cuz you work doesnt mean you can forget us. were your students also. say multitasking 3 times and it happens. post soon.
K
Great chapter, just excellent. Glad they are on the same page now. Love it.
wow jsut got caught up on reading your chapters. this chapter was amazing. sometimes it is easier to write then to say what is in our hearts. very well done.
Great chapters can’t wait for more!!
Great chapter.
That was sooooooooooooooooo good. Our poor Bette, jumping to conclusions, being all insecure. The note, fantastic, damn, I don’t know if I would have made it through the whole thing before heading for the sofa. Can we maybe have a bit more tonight please.
aawww Lou that was so sweet! You had me going after the last post, but I am glad T clarified herself.
aww…WOW..OMG that was unbelievably BEAUTIFUL!..Post sOON!!!
That was so good,need more and more. The driver almost got Bette stired up. calling her darling Bette is a little shy but I think with Tina she will never be… thanks
Those were two great chapters! thank you for the story.
That was amazingly beautiful!! Had to read the note over and over and over….
hmmmm. i am really loving this story…. and now i must read on
that was so sweet!!
great!!!!!!!!!! post soon
Damn that was beautiful and amazing, love it. Post soon, thanks!