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    Letting Go – chapter 16

    Story written on September 4, 2005 by smile12345.
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    Tina’s “answer” to Eric’s proposal, Bette’s going to make a move.

    Chapter 16:

     

    “Eric, I…”  Tina couldn’t finish her sentence, her head fell back and her body collapsed.

     

    As Tina lost consciousness, her body and her legs gave up on her.  Without time to react, Eric immediately stood back up and caught Tina in his arms.

     

    >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

     

    Bette sat on her couch unsure what to think or what to do as she let out a sigh.  She pulled her bracelet out from her sleeves and began swinging it back and forth with her fingers.

     

    “Tina,” Bette whispered while watching her charm swinging like a pendulum.

     

    “Tina, who’s Tina?” Bette’s whisper wasn’t as quiet as she thought it was.  Kelly had walked out of her bedroom finding Bette staring at her bracelet, “Shouldn’t you be whispering Cecilia’s name?” Kelly continued.

     

    “Speaking of, why the ***** did you tell when my break was?” Bette would’ve thought Kelly knew better than to release her information without her permission, even if it was to someone she knew.

     

    “I thought you would’ve been happy to see her?” Kelly replied with an apologetic “oops” tone.

     

    “I am, but not in that way.  Do you know how awkward you’ve made my afternoon today?”  Bette mind replayed the images of the day from seeing Cecilia, to Tina’s jealously, to Tina’s aggressiveness, to Tina’s kiss, and finally to Tina’s cold shoulder.

     

    “Awkward?  Does this have something to do with Tina?  Who’s Tina?  Why didn’t you tell me you were dating someone?  Are you dating someone?” Kelly was full of questions and she couldn’t ask them fast enough.

     

    “Holy *****, chill out, Kel!  I’m not dating anyone.”

     

    “Then why were you staring at your bracelet whispering Tina’s name?   Who’s Tina?”  Kelly knew Bette too well, and never has she once heard Bette mention someone’s name the way Bette just did with so much emotion: happiness, anger, fulfillment, resentment, joy, and heartache all filled into one single name, Tina.

     

    “You know Eric?”  Bette looked at Kelly and asked in a sarcastic tone while her eyes gave an “obviously, of course you do,” look.

     

    “Yeah…” Kelly replied prolonging her answer not sure where Bette was getting.

     

    “Yeah,” Bette kept her eyes on Kelly while changing her tone to a solid reply while nodding her head. 

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    2. Hey, hahahaha… I still don’t believe that someone could actually burnt down a toaster… it must be smth wrong with the toaster ;P
      I’m soooooooooooooo eager wanting to know what happen next!! Maybe I can get somemore spoilers?
      You’re still working so hard? I thought you’re only working during weekends since your school started? Get more sleep…
      Hahahah… ok, so that’s mean you can get more fake nails from now on? Hahahaha… But wouldn’t the nails hit another key too? Hahahah
      :S It’s late now…

    3. Hey Smile Thanks for posted again I just really enjoy reading on it it’s really entertained LOL! really nice anyway yes my MOM live near Fairfax Dr. VA. and I just won’t to visit her anyway this is getting better I hope Tina get up and go to her Woman LOL! come on Tina get up hurry up Bette waiting for you LOL! Hey smile Still wonderful Story I Love it Please continue post soon Thanks!!

    5. Hi smile! Sorry so long between comments–I’m still reading and loving your story, I just run into periods of slackardness–I know that’s not even a real word but it suits what I suffer from *sighs*….I hope you can find the time to post an update soon cause I don’t want Bette to get too tired of waiting on Tina to get off her arse and open that damn door!!! And…I’m a little concerned about that beautiful bouquet wilting and all…hurry Tina! Thanks for writing and sharing!

    7. I love your story so much. You post whenver you can. I love albeez comment ” eric needs to fall into a manhole or something” LMAO. Thanks again for the great chapter

    10. at lealst she wasnt a complete wuss. poor bette needs to call her and let her know shes outside. and hellno heehee, eric needs to fall into a manhole or something. post soon .

    11. Good chapter. Come on Tina just get up and see who’s at the door if Eric then don’t open and see Bette open immediately. Anyway hope they will see each other. Post soon plesae, thanks!

    15. Smile, thank you for the compliment you left in your AN….you made me “smile!”

      After walking Ms. Kennard out the door, Joanna ran into Tina’s room, and loudly said “Okay, she’s gone now, tell me what happened!”

      I can only imagine Joanna practically pushing mom out the door so she can find out whats up with Tina. Sometimes, its not easy making a parent leave…..especially when they’re just as nosey……I mean, curious! LOL

      yum-may! – Smile, this sounds like a Dana word, up there with crisp-pay!!

      Anyway, unless I read this wrong, Tina answered that she was OK, which means that she still hasnt given Eric an answer to his proposal. Did he walk away thinking that her yes was “HIS” answer?

      Smile….make Tina say no to Eric…….make Tina get out that damn bed……if these things dont happen in the next chapter, you better run and hide!! LOL

    16. Great update smile… Go get some sleep so you can give us another update when your are rested.. Is Rested even a English word.. I don´t know…hope you understand… But I am so looking forward to the next chapter…I still trust you;-)….Post soon

    22. I completely understand you being tired; I’m working full time as well as doing school part-time, trying desperately to finish my Engineering degree. But I’ve got to tell you that I am completely addicted to this story, I find myself checking 3 of 4 times a day for new posts. I truly hope that you can find the time to continue. And good luck with school!

    23. ohh how I’ve missed this story!!!!!! And I foresee in my crystal ball that the knocking ain’t gonna stop, in fact it’s gonna become louder and more insistent LOL (r my hints working?). PLEASE POST SOON!!!!!!

    24. This chapter had me rolling on the ground laughing! My roommate thought I was NUTs! I love Joanna, she cracks me up. Please post again soon. . and let Tina get off her lazy a** and answer her door! Sheesh!

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