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    Letting Go – chapter 16

    Story written on September 4, 2005 by smile12345.
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    Tina’s “answer” to Eric’s proposal, Bette’s going to make a move.

     

    “Alice, where’s Tina?” Bette asked when she entered Alice‘s classroom and Tina was no where to be seen.

     

    “I don’t know, I’m sure she’ll be here later, “Alice said.

     

    Tina was going to be there, but she made sure she wouldn’t arrive until class was about to start, therefore, avoiding Bette since she had classes of her own to teach.  When their lunch bell rang, Tina left successfully avoiding Bette again.

     

    “Damn it, Alice, why does it seem like she’s avoiding me?” A frustrated Bette asked.

     

    “That’s because she is,” Alice answered, “but she looks more upset than you are, her face is pale, it’s like she passed out or something.”

     

    “Is she okay?” Bette’s eyes were filled with concern when she asked.  All she wanted to do was find Tina and make her feel better.

     

    “Don’t know, she looks kind of sick, I just told her to go home and get some rest.”

     

    “So she went home?” Bette asked.

     

    “I guess, why, you want to see your girlfriend? You miss her that much?”

     

    “Shut-up, Al,” Bette gave Alice a “smart-*****,” expression for her remark.

     

    “Well, here’s her address, go visit her after school.  Bring her some flowers or soup, yum-may!” Alice said while pulling out a piece of paper with Tina’s address written on it.  Alice had previously copied down Tina’s address from the school file. 

     

    “Oh, her number’s on there too!”  Alice continued excitedly pointing to that piece of paper she handed Bette.  She got Tina’s number by saying she’ll call her to update her on tomorrow since she wouldn’t be here for the rest of the day.  “How old are you?  Why am I asking for numbers for you?”

     

    Bette formed an innocent smile, and her eyes widening giving her a shy look that anyone rarely saw from Bette Porter.  Who would’ve ever thought the so confident Bette Porter would ever have a moment like this, would’ve even had an expression so cute.  That was a more predictable look for Tina, never for Bette, but Tina brought it out of Bette.

     

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    As soon as the final bell rang, Bette was going to be on her way to Tina’s apartment, and she knew exactly where it was.  Flowers, yes, she bought Tina flowers, a mixed bouquet with flowers representing love, friendship, anticipation, waiting for love, eternity, everything she felt for Tina was represented in there.

     

    Soup, should she buy her soup?  Was soup too overrated?  Everyone brings everyone soup when they’re sick.  Maybe she would make her soup, make her soup?  What was Bette thinking, she can’t even toast a piece of bread without the toaster catching on fire, and she didn’t want to give Tina food poisoning.  Okay, maybe she’ll just see what Tina wanted, and she’ll go back out and buy it for her.

     

    With what seemed like hours of driving, Bette finally arrived at Tina’s apartment building.  She got out of the car with the bouquet of flowers in her hand, and took a deep breath.

     

    ‘Breathe, you’re just checking up on her, making sure she’s okay.  Okay,’ Bette exhaled, straightened herself up and walked towards Tina’s apartment complex.

     

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    Tina had been up late night chatting away with Joanna, and upon arriving back home, she went straight to sleep.  She didn’t want to think about Eric’s proposal, she would deal with it or avoid it until she could no longer do so.  Tina’s body and mind was exhausted, but she wasn’t able to fall fully asleep, she was tossing and turning, while half sleeping.

     

    A knock on her door forced Tina to open her eyes, and Tina let out a sigh.

     

    ‘Great, Eric…maybe if I don’t answer, he’ll go away…’ Tina pulled her covers up closer to her face and slid further into her bed determined to fall completely asleep.

     

    ‘Finally,’ The knocking stopped.

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    2. Hey, hahahaha… I still don’t believe that someone could actually burnt down a toaster… it must be smth wrong with the toaster ;P
      I’m soooooooooooooo eager wanting to know what happen next!! Maybe I can get somemore spoilers?
      You’re still working so hard? I thought you’re only working during weekends since your school started? Get more sleep…
      Hahahah… ok, so that’s mean you can get more fake nails from now on? Hahahaha… But wouldn’t the nails hit another key too? Hahahah
      :S It’s late now…

    3. Hey Smile Thanks for posted again I just really enjoy reading on it it’s really entertained LOL! really nice anyway yes my MOM live near Fairfax Dr. VA. and I just won’t to visit her anyway this is getting better I hope Tina get up and go to her Woman LOL! come on Tina get up hurry up Bette waiting for you LOL! Hey smile Still wonderful Story I Love it Please continue post soon Thanks!!

    5. Hi smile! Sorry so long between comments–I’m still reading and loving your story, I just run into periods of slackardness–I know that’s not even a real word but it suits what I suffer from *sighs*….I hope you can find the time to post an update soon cause I don’t want Bette to get too tired of waiting on Tina to get off her arse and open that damn door!!! And…I’m a little concerned about that beautiful bouquet wilting and all…hurry Tina! Thanks for writing and sharing!

    7. I love your story so much. You post whenver you can. I love albeez comment ” eric needs to fall into a manhole or something” LMAO. Thanks again for the great chapter

    10. at lealst she wasnt a complete wuss. poor bette needs to call her and let her know shes outside. and hellno heehee, eric needs to fall into a manhole or something. post soon .

    11. Good chapter. Come on Tina just get up and see who’s at the door if Eric then don’t open and see Bette open immediately. Anyway hope they will see each other. Post soon plesae, thanks!

    15. Smile, thank you for the compliment you left in your AN….you made me “smile!”

      After walking Ms. Kennard out the door, Joanna ran into Tina’s room, and loudly said “Okay, she’s gone now, tell me what happened!”

      I can only imagine Joanna practically pushing mom out the door so she can find out whats up with Tina. Sometimes, its not easy making a parent leave…..especially when they’re just as nosey……I mean, curious! LOL

      yum-may! – Smile, this sounds like a Dana word, up there with crisp-pay!!

      Anyway, unless I read this wrong, Tina answered that she was OK, which means that she still hasnt given Eric an answer to his proposal. Did he walk away thinking that her yes was “HIS” answer?

      Smile….make Tina say no to Eric…….make Tina get out that damn bed……if these things dont happen in the next chapter, you better run and hide!! LOL

    16. Great update smile… Go get some sleep so you can give us another update when your are rested.. Is Rested even a English word.. I don´t know…hope you understand… But I am so looking forward to the next chapter…I still trust you;-)….Post soon

    22. I completely understand you being tired; I’m working full time as well as doing school part-time, trying desperately to finish my Engineering degree. But I’ve got to tell you that I am completely addicted to this story, I find myself checking 3 of 4 times a day for new posts. I truly hope that you can find the time to continue. And good luck with school!

    23. ohh how I’ve missed this story!!!!!! And I foresee in my crystal ball that the knocking ain’t gonna stop, in fact it’s gonna become louder and more insistent LOL (r my hints working?). PLEASE POST SOON!!!!!!

    24. This chapter had me rolling on the ground laughing! My roommate thought I was NUTs! I love Joanna, she cracks me up. Please post again soon. . and let Tina get off her lazy a** and answer her door! Sheesh!

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