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    Letting Go – chapter 16

    Story written on September 4, 2005 by smile12345.
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    Tina’s “answer” to Eric’s proposal, Bette’s going to make a move.

     

    Eric was worried, and the last thing he wanted to do was leave, but he didn’t have much choice considering how firm his future mother-in-law was being.

     

    Eric leaned down and gave Tina a kiss on her forehead, “When she wakes up, please tell her to call me, and tell her I’ll be over tomorrow as soon as I’m off work.”

     

    “Will do, drive safely Eric.” Ms. Kennard said.

    “I will, have a goodnight, and please tell me when she wakes up.”

     

    Tina had fainted at the restaurant, but it wasn’t for long.  She became too conscious too quick, and when she awoke, she found herself in Eric’s arms asking her if she was okay.  Tina wasn’t ready to face Eric, she wasn’t ready to say “yes,” to his proposal, but she wasn’t ready to say “no,” either.  The only thing she could do was say “yes,” to her being “okay.”

     

    “Eric, please, take me home, I don’t feel so well.  Don’t worry, I’m fine, I just need some rest.”  Tina knew she was fine, but she was terrified to be awake.  The only thing she could do was pretend to sleep while he drove her home, and she would do so until he left her apartment, until her mother left her apartment, and until her sister came home.

     

    Tina’s sister, Joanna, finally made it home, and Tina had been anxiously awaiting her arrival so her mom could leave and she could finally stop pretending to be asleep.  When Ms. Kennard heard their apartment door open, she quietly left Tina’s room and searched for her other daughter, Joanna.

     

    “He WHAT, and she WHAT?” Joanna asked, as her mother tried to explain what happened during dinner.

     

    Ms. Kennard and Joanna were now in Tina’s room watching her sleep.  Tina peeked to find Joanna, and when Joanna saw that Tina wasn’t really sleeping and using her eyes and mouth to point to the door meaning telling her mom to leave.  Joanna was now urging their mother to go back home.

     

    “Mom, I’m here, go home!!!  Enjoy the rest of your anniversary, she’s fine!”

     

    Ms. Kennard hesitantly left too, finally leaving the two sisters to be alone.

     

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    2. Hey, hahahaha… I still don’t believe that someone could actually burnt down a toaster… it must be smth wrong with the toaster ;P
      I’m soooooooooooooo eager wanting to know what happen next!! Maybe I can get somemore spoilers?
      You’re still working so hard? I thought you’re only working during weekends since your school started? Get more sleep…
      Hahahah… ok, so that’s mean you can get more fake nails from now on? Hahahaha… But wouldn’t the nails hit another key too? Hahahah
      :S It’s late now…

    3. Hey Smile Thanks for posted again I just really enjoy reading on it it’s really entertained LOL! really nice anyway yes my MOM live near Fairfax Dr. VA. and I just won’t to visit her anyway this is getting better I hope Tina get up and go to her Woman LOL! come on Tina get up hurry up Bette waiting for you LOL! Hey smile Still wonderful Story I Love it Please continue post soon Thanks!!

    5. Hi smile! Sorry so long between comments–I’m still reading and loving your story, I just run into periods of slackardness–I know that’s not even a real word but it suits what I suffer from *sighs*….I hope you can find the time to post an update soon cause I don’t want Bette to get too tired of waiting on Tina to get off her arse and open that damn door!!! And…I’m a little concerned about that beautiful bouquet wilting and all…hurry Tina! Thanks for writing and sharing!

    7. I love your story so much. You post whenver you can. I love albeez comment ” eric needs to fall into a manhole or something” LMAO. Thanks again for the great chapter

    10. at lealst she wasnt a complete wuss. poor bette needs to call her and let her know shes outside. and hellno heehee, eric needs to fall into a manhole or something. post soon .

    11. Good chapter. Come on Tina just get up and see who’s at the door if Eric then don’t open and see Bette open immediately. Anyway hope they will see each other. Post soon plesae, thanks!

    15. Smile, thank you for the compliment you left in your AN….you made me “smile!”

      After walking Ms. Kennard out the door, Joanna ran into Tina’s room, and loudly said “Okay, she’s gone now, tell me what happened!”

      I can only imagine Joanna practically pushing mom out the door so she can find out whats up with Tina. Sometimes, its not easy making a parent leave…..especially when they’re just as nosey……I mean, curious! LOL

      yum-may! – Smile, this sounds like a Dana word, up there with crisp-pay!!

      Anyway, unless I read this wrong, Tina answered that she was OK, which means that she still hasnt given Eric an answer to his proposal. Did he walk away thinking that her yes was “HIS” answer?

      Smile….make Tina say no to Eric…….make Tina get out that damn bed……if these things dont happen in the next chapter, you better run and hide!! LOL

    16. Great update smile… Go get some sleep so you can give us another update when your are rested.. Is Rested even a English word.. I don´t know…hope you understand… But I am so looking forward to the next chapter…I still trust you;-)….Post soon

    22. I completely understand you being tired; I’m working full time as well as doing school part-time, trying desperately to finish my Engineering degree. But I’ve got to tell you that I am completely addicted to this story, I find myself checking 3 of 4 times a day for new posts. I truly hope that you can find the time to continue. And good luck with school!

    23. ohh how I’ve missed this story!!!!!! And I foresee in my crystal ball that the knocking ain’t gonna stop, in fact it’s gonna become louder and more insistent LOL (r my hints working?). PLEASE POST SOON!!!!!!

    24. This chapter had me rolling on the ground laughing! My roommate thought I was NUTs! I love Joanna, she cracks me up. Please post again soon. . and let Tina get off her lazy a** and answer her door! Sheesh!

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