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Sharmen: I Gotta Go…Part17
Chapter 39
It was the next day. They had set up dinner with Carmen’s mom and her immediate family, just so that the story didn’t have to be retold, and retold, and retold. Because sometimes that resulted in confusion. Especially in Carmen’s gabby family.
“So, are you going to tell me what sparked this?” Shane asked, trying to sound as comforting as she possibly could. Carmen’s eyes flashed with anger. She hated thinking about what would happen if the outcome of tonight ended horribly. She would have too many decisions to make. She didn’t want to think about it.
“My mom called. She wanted to know why I hadn’t been at home for a couple of weeks and the lie was on the tip of my tongue. The one I always used. That I had a boyfriend, but I just I just couldn’t. It would have been like I wanted us to be something other than what we are, and I don’t. So I blubbered away and then I finally just said that she’d find out tonight. She was really worried and anxious about it, but I told her it would be okay. I told her and I didn’t even believe it myself,” Carmen said. She looked like a lost puppy and Shane contemplated on pulling the truck over, but they were almost there and they had to get there on time. “Sorry I didn’t tell you before,” she added softly.
Shane stroked the side of her head lovingly and shook her head forcefully. “Please don’t be sorry. And try to stop worrying. This doesn’t have to be a bad thing.”
At Shane’s words, Carmen seemed to realize that maybe this didn’t have to be a horrible experience. Think of how wonderful it would be if her mother totally accepted it. Christmas dinner’s with Shane and her family. Family picnics and get-togethers. Having dinner with her mother and her girlfriend without having to hide anything from anyone. It would be amazing.
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“Could you pass the hot sauce, Mami?” Raul asked. Mercedes didn’t look up from her meal as she passed it over, wiping her mouth with her napkin. It was a small dinner for the Morales’, Shane, Carmen, her grandmother (who Carmen was very close to), Raul and Justise. Shane was silently relieved that Mariah wasn’t there, she really did freak her out.
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(74 votes, average: 3.55 out of 5)
F#*%ing EXCELLENT! I loved it. For a minute there I thought Shane was going to a dealer. Its so typical and sweet of Shane to take matters into her own hands. Glad it worked out for them. Also liked how you wrote Mercedes, as a conflicted mother who loves her child but doesn’t understand her lifestyle. I could go on & on w/ praise but I’ll stop short by once again stating Great Job. Post soon
great chapter, so many ups and downs. great stuff
I love this story. Thanks for keeping it real…. I’m excited for the next chapter already.
Post again soon. Great story. Can’t get enough of carmen and shane.
I’ve been hooked on this story from chapter one,it’s great.Post more soon please.
another amazing chapter…i love this story!! please post soon.
I’ve just read your story as always. It’s greatest post. You rock!
you got me worried awhile! for a moment i thought they were over =)
I just discovered your story, and read all 17 parts over the past 3 days. I am so into this things its ridiculous, you are such an imaginative writer and you usually wrap things up at the end of each part so we don’t walk away with someone being totally pissed at someone else and we’re hanging on the edge, yet we still have that degree of wondering. I give you props for that, its a hard thing to do, and I look forward to more!
amazing!!! this was awesome, really!!! good job!
Oh My God…. Can you believe I actually thought you were going to break them up again cuz if you would have that would have been like so messed up anyways this story is like so freakin’ cool the whole time I’ve been reading it, it has had me at the edge of my seat I totally love it. You are an amazing writer and should really continue this story till the end which I hope isn’t any time soon :P
But please do continue your great work and if it’s not too much to ask update soon Please I’m dying to know what’s going to happen to them next :P
Great, Amazing story. When is the next chapter?