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    Sharmen: I Gotta Go…Part17

    Story written on September 5, 2005 by CasperFanFirst.
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    Truths are told, Shane heads back to where it all began… and doesn’t come home.

    “Okay Carmen. Tell me please,” Mercedes obviously couldn’t keep her usually calm composure for much longer.

    Carmen instinctively reached for Shane’s hand under the table. No one noticed thankfully.

    “Now, Mami?” Carmen gestured with her eyes to her brother and sister and grandmother. Mercedes got the point but ignored it.

    “Yes. Now.” And it was final, there would be no arguing, it was now or never. No one noticed that Carmen’s grandmother sat back watching like a hawk with loving, knowing eyes. She was placing pieces together and had the finished puzzle before Carmen even explained. But she kept quiet, spooning corn into her mouth and watching.

    “Okay, well. There’s something that I’ve been wanting to tell you about me for a long time. And I hope when I do, you’ll still see me the same way you do now,” Carmen said what she had recited in her head, though it was much harder to actually speak it then it was to think of the right words an hour ago. “I’m-” She couldn’t say it. She couldn’t. She was vaguely aware of a numb feeling in her left hand and looked down. Shane’s ring clad hand was squeezing hers under the table. She looked up to Shane’s piercing green eyes and saw unending love there. It would all work out eventually. She knew she could not go on lying to her family.

    “I’m *****. A-and Shane. She’s my girlfriend, and I love her very much.” Carmen could say nothing else. It was up to them now. Shane smiled subtly at her when she looked into her eyes again for support. Her mothers face was blank, her grandmothers was smiling knowingly she couldn’t have known could she? Raul was grinning with his mouth open like a perverted fool and Justise had her eyes squinting, obviously in shock, and thinking as to how she felt about this. The silence rang out for what seemed like hours and Shane’s mind was racing. Should she say something? She didn’t know what to do. She felt like a completely incompetent idiot.

    Mercedes cleared her throat and her eyes went dark. “How long have you known you were ***** Carmen?” She asked. Her voice void of all emotion, her eyes dead. Carmen seemed to know this was the end and started to push her plate away.

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    1. F#*%ing EXCELLENT! I loved it. For a minute there I thought Shane was going to a dealer. Its so typical and sweet of Shane to take matters into her own hands. Glad it worked out for them. Also liked how you wrote Mercedes, as a conflicted mother who loves her child but doesn’t understand her lifestyle. I could go on & on w/ praise but I’ll stop short by once again stating Great Job. Post soon

    9. I just discovered your story, and read all 17 parts over the past 3 days. I am so into this things its ridiculous, you are such an imaginative writer and you usually wrap things up at the end of each part so we don’t walk away with someone being totally pissed at someone else and we’re hanging on the edge, yet we still have that degree of wondering. I give you props for that, its a hard thing to do, and I look forward to more!

    11. Oh My God…. Can you believe I actually thought you were going to break them up again cuz if you would have that would have been like so messed up anyways this story is like so freakin’ cool the whole time I’ve been reading it, it has had me at the edge of my seat I totally love it. You are an amazing writer and should really continue this story till the end which I hope isn’t any time soon :P
      But please do continue your great work and if it’s not too much to ask update soon Please I’m dying to know what’s going to happen to them next :P

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