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    Sharmen: I Gotta Go…Part17

    Story written on September 5, 2005 by CasperFanFirst.
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    Truths are told, Shane heads back to where it all began… and doesn’t come home.

    “Since I was fifteen,” She muttered quietly. Mercedes finally showed some facial expression as her eyes bugged out. Obviously she had been preparing herself but she hadn’t expected it to be that long. She stood up suddenly. It was obvious to everyone she was angry. She was screaming in Spanish and Shane couldn’t understand. She couldn’t understand all but, “You lied to me!” Carmen bowed her head and excused herself from the table. She tugged Shane’s hand to follow her and they walked to the front door.

    They didn’t know Mercedes was behind them till the yelling started again, this time closer.

    “You! You came into my house as a lie. You lied to me. How much could you ‘love’ my daughter if you’d lie to my face? You encourage this?” It was all the English Shane could make out as Mercedes yelled at her. She hung her head but then remembered she had nothing to be ashamed of. She lifted her head and wrapped her arm around Carmen’s waist. She didn’t realize that Carmen pulled away as she held Mrs. Morales’ gaze.

    “I do love Carmen, very much. I know she’s happy. So am I. So if you want anything less for your daughter, you’ll keep being destructive. But if not, you’ll accept this. Like I thought you would it the first place. I’m sorry, I know this must be hard for you to hear,” Shane said and rested a hand on Mercedes’ shoulder. She then quickly left. Leaving the other woman to think about where she stood. Carmen stood in the doorway, as if being pulled in two different directions.

    Shane looked up when she was at the truck door. She waited but Carmen never moved. She stood right in the middle of the frame. Straddling it with her head down, completely silent and unmoving.

    “Carmen?” No answer. “Are you staying here?” Shane asked. She really wouldn’t be upset if she did. Carmen knew her family, it was her choice whether she stayed and talked it out, maybe she thought it would go better without Shane there. When Carmen still didn’t move Shane shook her head and walked the few strides back up to the door. Mercedes was watching all this quietly from inside.

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    1. F#*%ing EXCELLENT! I loved it. For a minute there I thought Shane was going to a dealer. Its so typical and sweet of Shane to take matters into her own hands. Glad it worked out for them. Also liked how you wrote Mercedes, as a conflicted mother who loves her child but doesn’t understand her lifestyle. I could go on & on w/ praise but I’ll stop short by once again stating Great Job. Post soon

    9. I just discovered your story, and read all 17 parts over the past 3 days. I am so into this things its ridiculous, you are such an imaginative writer and you usually wrap things up at the end of each part so we don’t walk away with someone being totally pissed at someone else and we’re hanging on the edge, yet we still have that degree of wondering. I give you props for that, its a hard thing to do, and I look forward to more!

    11. Oh My God…. Can you believe I actually thought you were going to break them up again cuz if you would have that would have been like so messed up anyways this story is like so freakin’ cool the whole time I’ve been reading it, it has had me at the edge of my seat I totally love it. You are an amazing writer and should really continue this story till the end which I hope isn’t any time soon :P
      But please do continue your great work and if it’s not too much to ask update soon Please I’m dying to know what’s going to happen to them next :P

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