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Coming Back – Chapter 13
Previously
Shane barely gets up. Carmen tries to hold her as much as she can, but the task is harder that she thought.
Carmen : Where’s Marina? Isn’t she supposed to be here?
Shane : Zzzwee Znoo zhe’s gone.
Carmen : Where? I mean .. why?
Shane : Zwee got za littlez fight.
Carmen : (upset) What did you do?
Shane : I wwwas talking to Zenny , zand zhe heard me.
Carmen : (upset) But what did you said?
Shane : (unconsciously) ZzzI love Zenny.
Carmen : WHAT?
Shane : Humm.mmmm
Carmen, upset, leaves Shane there, grabs her stuff and slams the door.
Shane : Baby?
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FUNERAL DAY
JENNY AND SHANE’S HOUSE / INSIDE – LATE MORNING
Shane wakes up, she opens an eye and feels the big headache she got during the night. She puts her hand on her forehead.
***** *****! What have I done? ***** beer! Arrf! Let’s get up.
Shane gets up and go in the bathroom. She opens the pharmacy door and takes two Advil Migraines. She looks at herself in the mirror, her hair is all fuzzy, her eyes are all puffy. She goes in the kitchen and opens the fridge door, she takes a bottle of orange juice and takes a glass. She takes a mouthful and put two slices of bread in the toaster. After two minutes the toasts pops up, Shane grabs them and puts some Nutella on them. She goes and sits at the table. As she’s eating her toasts, she’s lost in deep though.
What will I do? What will I say? I’ve ***** ruined everything that I had, freaking idiot I am!!!! I hurt Carmen so much, what was I thinking! No moron.. I wasn’t thinking I’m to stupid for that! Things goes bad what I do.. I drink.. or even worst.. I use drugs! No I don’t I was doing that, not anymore!! Not anymore!.
After a while, she comes back to reality, she gets up and puts all the stuff in the sink, to clean it later. As she’s walking to her room, she sees the red button on the answering machine flashing.
I missed a call? I was probably still sleeping and I didn’t hear it.. yeah.. probably.
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Hi there! It’s me again,oh no it’s time for the funeral. THis was one of the most touching funerals that I have ever attended. Everyone deals with grief differently. It was nice just like Marina,after futher thought and review not to hold what Shane said against her;also nice of Shane to offer Marina Jenny’s things and ask her to move into Jenny’s house. You know,it’s lucky for me that I live across the street from Wal-mart because I don’t have to go far for those “Puffs”. Thank you again for the lovely chapter. See ya soon…
The ‘funeral of a friend’ tagling proved irresistable.
Jenny, huh?
Ilene, from this author’s keyboard to your ears…
(My bad)
I love this story!!
please go on soon.
and let carmen help shane, I still think they both have a future together.