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Coming Back – Chapter 13
She presses the “play” button.
Answering machine : You have ONE new message at 9:30 AM Hi Shane it’s Marina. Hum.. Just to remind you that the funeral are going to be at 1:30 PM. I know things are not going so good for you but I hope to see you there, please, for Jenny. Hum.. and please I really want to talk with you, if you want, please. Bye. Beeeep.
After the message, Shane was still fixing the answering machine. She finally presses the “erase” button and goes in her room. As she enters in her room, she looks at the clock, it’s 12:30. She takes some black pants in the wardrobe, with a black long-sleeves shirt, a dark purple tie and a black trench-coat. She puts all that on her bed. She also gets from the wardrobe a pair of black “Docs”. She puts the “Docs” at the end of the bed and go take a shower.
CEMETERY – AFTERNOON / RAIN
Shane parks her truck in the cemetery entrance. She takes her time to relax a little, and goes in the cemetery. She walks, in the rain to the small group of people beside the tomb. She stays on the other side of the coffin, she doesn’t want to get mix with the other peoples. She looks at the coffin, the tears falling on her cheeks are melting with the cold rain falling on her face. Her hair is all wet, but she doesn’t matter, actually she haven’t notice. She stands there for minutes, minutes is a short time comparatively to all the years to come that Jenny will not be in her life anymore. In all this time, she’s totally lost in deep though, all saddest each more than the others. Her though were so hard to feel that she finally falls on her knees, crying so loud and screaming.
Shane : Nooo..o..o..oo!! Why? You can’t I need you.
Marina sees her and go on Shane’s side and put her arms around her. Shane is crying so hard. Marina wipes a tear on her own cheek.
Marina : Shhhh
Shane : Jenny!! Jenny please come back..k..kk
Marina goes in front of Shane and looks at her in the eyes.
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Hi there! It’s me again,oh no it’s time for the funeral. THis was one of the most touching funerals that I have ever attended. Everyone deals with grief differently. It was nice just like Marina,after futher thought and review not to hold what Shane said against her;also nice of Shane to offer Marina Jenny’s things and ask her to move into Jenny’s house. You know,it’s lucky for me that I live across the street from Wal-mart because I don’t have to go far for those “Puffs”. Thank you again for the lovely chapter. See ya soon…
The ‘funeral of a friend’ tagling proved irresistable.
Jenny, huh?
Ilene, from this author’s keyboard to your ears…
(My bad)
I love this story!!
please go on soon.
and let carmen help shane, I still think they both have a future together.