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Coming Back – Chapter 13
Marina : Shane, please. Get up. (slowly)
Shane : You don’t underst
Marina : I do. Believe me.
Shane : I need her,(sniff).. more than you can imagine.
Marina : I need her too, I miss her too.
Shane : I know but
Marina : Listen Shane.. Hemmm.. Jenny.. I now realise all the time I have lost because I was an idiot, an idiot cause now I won’t see her anymore except in my mind, but you want to know ?! I just realise that all this time I got with her is now priceless because I won’t see her, and all fight over her are today useless because she’s not here anymore to judge all of this. I know you just realise that you might love her, and you know what, I respect that but I won’t fight with you because I’m your friend. I know Jenny was in love with me and I was in love with her, and I also know that you felt something for her, but today I want her to rest in peace, so I want all this to finish, because it is.
Shane : But,
Marina : Please Shane it’s over, I really like you but, all of this is over.
Shane looks down and cries silently. Marina takes Shane’s arm, Shane gets up. Marina and Shane looks at the coffin, sadly. On the background, Carmen is walking towards the coffin, she hold a single white rose in her hands. She walks by the coffin, and wipe a tear. She stands on Marina’s side. Carmen puts the rose on the coffin. Shane looks at her, but she doesn’t know what to say, she wanna talk to her.
Carmen : Bye Jenny.
Carmen wipe an other tear. Marina looks at Carmen, then at Shane.
Marina : (to Shane) I’ll go see Bette and Tina, I’ll be back okay ?
Shane : (to Marina) Okay.
Marina goes on the other side of the coffin and starts talking to Bette and Tina. Carmen and Shane are standing side by side in silence. After a while, Shane opens her mouth to try to talk to Carmen.
Shane :
Carmen : I don’t wanna talk to you.
She turns and leave. Shane stands alone, watching the coffin, crying silently. After a while, she walks to Marina. Marina walks towards her.
Shane : I’ll leave okay, I think it’s better that way.
Marina : I’m sorry Shane.
Shane : It’s okay, thanks. I just wanna tell you that if you want Jenny’s half, I’ll be pleased if you come live in the house. This half is yours.
Marina : Thanks, I really appreciate, I’ll think about that.
Shane : Kay
Marina : I’ll give you a call tomorrow.
Shane : Okay bye Marina (she looks at Bette, Tina, Alice and Dana) Bye Ladies.
Group : Bye.
Shane : Bye Marina.
Marina : (looks at the sadness in Shane eyes) Bye Shane.
Shane walks towards the coffin and puts two red roses and a single white one on it. She wipes her tears.
Shane : Goodbye Jenny.
Shane walks back to her truck, then drives back to the house.
JENNY AND SHANE’S HOUSE / INSIDE – LATE AFTERNOON
Shane enters in the house and goes straight in her bed room. She goes at her desk and opens the drawer. She flips over some sheets and pieces of paper. She finally stops on one which is written on it :
Jeff
Cell : 906-556-3669
She grabs the phone and dials the number, after a little while, it’s ringing. Someone picks up at the other end.
To Be Continued
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Hi there! It’s me again,oh no it’s time for the funeral. THis was one of the most touching funerals that I have ever attended. Everyone deals with grief differently. It was nice just like Marina,after futher thought and review not to hold what Shane said against her;also nice of Shane to offer Marina Jenny’s things and ask her to move into Jenny’s house. You know,it’s lucky for me that I live across the street from Wal-mart because I don’t have to go far for those “Puffs”. Thank you again for the lovely chapter. See ya soon…
The ‘funeral of a friend’ tagling proved irresistable.
Jenny, huh?
Ilene, from this author’s keyboard to your ears…
(My bad)
I love this story!!
please go on soon.
and let carmen help shane, I still think they both have a future together.