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Drowning – 25
Previously For the first time since this conversation started, Dana approached Alice. She put her arms around her and felt Alice flinch at the initial contact, but she was relieved when Alice relaxed in Dana’s arms a few seconds later.
“I’m so sorry Alice.”
”No, Dane. This isn’t your fault.” Alice replied with a shaken voice. As she took a breath in to continue she felt a sense of anger rise within her. This was no ordinary anger. This was the anger of someone who felt a deep betrayal. This was the anger of a person whose sense of safety had been destroyed and needed to feel the anger so that the fear didn’t settle in.
“Dane, we will take care of this. You can’t seriously think this is your fault? Like you took this psycho off of her meds? But this I can tell you, we are not going to give up our lives and let her win. We can’t.” Alice said in a voice that resonated both the fear and anger in her. “We can’t, Dana.”
Dana just held Alice tight. Wanting so very badly to believe her, but knowing that it would never be that simple.
Chapter 25
Shane walked into the house after spending the night at her salon. When Alice had come in the night before, she looked ***** bent on a mission and Shane thought that maybe Dana needed to deal with that so she made an excuse of a date and left.
When Alice got there, she was seriously drunk and seriously angry. From the conversations that she has had with both Alice and Dana, she didn’t think Dana had to deal with angry Alice. And angry Alice is a force to be reckoned with. She doesn’t show her face often, but when she does, whatever is in her way had better move lest it not be mowed down.
The whole thing made no sense to Shane. At first, she bought into the story that Dana was giving about leaving due to fear. Shane could so understand that mentality. She herself had ended her relationship with Carmen, years later for the same fear. People questioned her about it. People said it didn’t make sense. But to Shane, it made perfect sense. She and Carmen had been great for years and Shane was happy. For possibly the first time in her adult life, she was happy, She woke up with a smile on her face and went to bed the same. When she went out with Carmen and their friends and drank, it was jut for fun, not to escape from life. It was definitely a new and different experience in her life.
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It was a lot of reading, but I’m totally enjoying it!! Love the way you wrote Tina and Shane and shed some light on their feelings and emotions on the different situations. Excited to see where you’re going to take the stalker plot…especially with Alice leaving and Dana staying behind. Can’t wait for the next post
YAY!
Great update, i really like how u write both shane’s and tina’s feelings too. Now is shane gonna save the day or what? pls post soon.
Great stuff. Please keep them safe and here’s a shameless plea to reunite B&T…please reunite B&T.
Thanks for the update. I have nothing but positive vibes from your story…yeah,I realize that doesn’t make exact sense…whatever *rolls eyes* Thanks again
I love your story and I can’t wait to see how it will all end but I hope that noone has to die but if they do I would still love it please post soon
Welcome back. Great update!
i really loved the way you described tina’s feelings. great insight when you wrote this: “She could be a wonderfully caring person, but it was when needed, not just because” that is so damn right. thanks.
Welcpme baack. Dana is so afraid that Alice will be hurt, Shane the Knight in shinning Armour will be there to help. Dont let Tina leave again. please.
Oh how my heart raced when I saw that you posted lol. The insights into Shane was great, her fears and reason were understandable. The stalker plot got me on the edge, what’s gonna happen now that Alice is leaving? Pls post soon
that stalker better not go out to DC and get alice. great update. i wouldn’t think you were having trouble writing at all if you didn’t tell us!
Great update to your story! I was so excited when I saw that you posted an update. Can’t wait to see what happens with the stalker. :)