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Drowning – 25
So when Dana had explained her actions, though she didn’t quite understand how Dana had gotten so jaded, what Dana said did make perfect sense to Shane. And Shane wasn’t really the one to give her advice to make it better or to question it for that matter.
But when that letter showed up and she saw Dana’s reaction, she knew that there was no way that it wasn’t related to all that was going on. It had to be involved in some way and if she let herself be honest, it scared her. She wasn’t sure what was in that letter, but whatever it was had scared the ***** out of Dana. Though people thought that Dana was a little child like at times, Shane knew better. Dana had her head together, she thought through everything. She didn’t react blindly. If she was reacting like that, there was a reason. And if something could make her react like that, suddenly the idea that Dana left Alice out of fear wasn’t so strange, it was just a very different fear. There was no way it wasn’t related. Shane wasn’t sure what it was about, but she knew she would do whatever she could to make sure her friends were ok.
So when she walked into the living room and saw Alice and Dana tangled under a blanket together, their limbs awkwardly sticking out she smiled. Angry Alice must have turned into emotional Alice and Dana could never let emotional Alice stay upset. It just wasn’t in her.
Shane quietly walked through the living room and made her way to the bathroom. She peeled off her clothes and jumped into a hot shower. She let the water run over her hoping that the memories of Carmen and the sadness she felt would be wiped clean with the stream.
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Tina woke up without an alarm clock and without the noise of a toddler rummaging through the house. She lifted her head and looked around trying to get her bearings. As she sat up, her head cleared up a bit and she remembered where she was and more importantly, where Cara was. Cara was at Julia’s.
“Fifteen more minutes….” She mumbled to the empty room, glad for the rare morning that she could actually get a few extra minutes of sleep. She lay back down on the bed and pulled the covers up over shoulders, not so much because she was cold, but because she wanted the comfort that only being wrapped in a blanket, hiding from the day in front of you could bring.
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(68 votes, average: 4.13 out of 5)
It was a lot of reading, but I’m totally enjoying it!! Love the way you wrote Tina and Shane and shed some light on their feelings and emotions on the different situations. Excited to see where you’re going to take the stalker plot…especially with Alice leaving and Dana staying behind. Can’t wait for the next post
YAY!
Great update, i really like how u write both shane’s and tina’s feelings too. Now is shane gonna save the day or what? pls post soon.
Great stuff. Please keep them safe and here’s a shameless plea to reunite B&T…please reunite B&T.
Thanks for the update. I have nothing but positive vibes from your story…yeah,I realize that doesn’t make exact sense…whatever *rolls eyes* Thanks again
I love your story and I can’t wait to see how it will all end but I hope that noone has to die but if they do I would still love it please post soon
Welcome back. Great update!
i really loved the way you described tina’s feelings. great insight when you wrote this: “She could be a wonderfully caring person, but it was when needed, not just because” that is so damn right. thanks.
Welcpme baack. Dana is so afraid that Alice will be hurt, Shane the Knight in shinning Armour will be there to help. Dont let Tina leave again. please.
Oh how my heart raced when I saw that you posted lol. The insights into Shane was great, her fears and reason were understandable. The stalker plot got me on the edge, what’s gonna happen now that Alice is leaving? Pls post soon
that stalker better not go out to DC and get alice. great update. i wouldn’t think you were having trouble writing at all if you didn’t tell us!
Great update to your story! I was so excited when I saw that you posted an update. Can’t wait to see what happens with the stalker. :)