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You and me – Part five
Oh, hey Clive”, Shane greeted the young men surprised.
“Okay, that’s a really nice greeting”, Clive complained grinning.
“Sorry”, Shane smiled. “What are you doing back here? I haven’t seen you since.since last time.”
“I just wanted to get out of my place and see how youre doing”, he answered. “Don’t you want to introduce me to your friends. I didnt meet them the last time.”
“Yeah, sure. That are Tina, Dana, Alice and Carmen”, Shane introduced everyone.
The other just nodded to Clive.
Shane felt uncomfortable. He once was her best friend. But that was before he left her alone on the street without saying a word and fucked everything up. He seemed to be so wrong in her world now.
Carmen laid a hand on Shanes leg. She could feel that there was something going on in her girlfriends mind.
Clive noticed the intimate touch with a disgust look at his face.
“So, I saw that this place here has a new owner. What happened to the old one?”, Clive continued with his small talk.
“She moved to Italy”, Shane answered, not wanting to make a longer conversation with Clive.
“I’ll go out of here. It was really nice to meet your friends, Shane”, Clive said good bye to the others. “Can I talk to you outside”, he asked Shane and looked at her intensively.
“Okay”, Shane affirmed and stood up. She didnt want to go outside with Clive but she was glad that he stopped the conversation in front of her friends.
Tina looked distrustful at Clive.
“We want to go, too Shane. We’ll be outside in five minutes”, Tina shouted over to Shane who nodded in agreement. Shane smiled a last time over to Carmen and left the Planet with Clive.
“Who was that?”, Carmen asked and looked outside the window, trying to see Shane somewhere out there. She didnt like this guy.
“I think I saw him one time with Shane, but that’s a long time ago. That’s all I know about this guy”, Alice spoke.
“I don’t like him”, Dana mentioned and the others agreed without saying a word.
“Is this Latina your girlfriend?”, Clive asked while they were making their way out of the Planet.
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I hope Carmen runs after Shane! Great chapter.
Thanks for the update, I really like it! It’s so hard when life decide to punch you in the face like that! Poor Carmen, poor Shane! I would also like to know, you already told me that english is not your first language, I wonder what is your first language.. where are you from. By the way, english is not my first language either, french is.. I’m from Montreal, Canada. Once again, great chapter, I can’t wait for the next one!
Please update soon. The suspence is killing me, I need more. By the way, GREAT ChAPTER!!!!!