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You and me – Part five
“What? What are you doing. Clive wait”, she shouted, but it was to late he already reached them.
Tina saw Clive walking towards them and got worried as she noticed the panic look in Shane face who was still standing at the same place.
“Hey”, Clive greeted the group and turned his face to Carmen.
Carmen wanted to say something but Clive didnt gave her a chance to say something.
“Do you know that your girlfriend was a little street *****. That she was tricking around Santa Monica Blv. giving everyone a hand job who pays enough. Do you.”, Clive couldn’t say more cause Shane bumped him to the ground and landed on top of him.
“Stop that Clive. Why are you doing this to me”, Shane shouted, who was already wet from the rain.
Alice ran over to Shane to help her, at first. Tina and Dana followed.
“I think they should know with who they are dealing with”, Clive said grinning punching his fist into Shane’s belly to get her off from him.
Shane was thrown next to him by his punch and hit her head at the wet concrete.
“***** off, you ***** *****”, Alice screamed angry and bumped him hard but he just laughed and turned away.
“After you explained everything to your friends, I’ll see you at the streets again, Shane”, Clive shouted to Shane, just laughed hysterical and walked away.
“Shane. Shane can you hear me? Are you okay”, Tina asked Shane and tried to lift her up.
Shane moan and held her head.
“God, you are bleeding, Shane”, Dana exclaimed.
There was a wound at Shanes forehead, which was bleeding constantly.
Shane felt dizzy.
“Whats going on”, she wondered.
“Clive! Carmen!” This two persons crashed immediately back in her mind.
“Carmen”, Shane whispered and tried to get up.
Carmen was just standing there, soaked like the others. She just stared into the air.
What had this guy told her?
Was it true?
Why did Shane something like this?
She never had a family.
Grew up in foster care.
No that can’t be true.
The other acted so strange as they told her how they got to know Shane.
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I hope Carmen runs after Shane! Great chapter.
Thanks for the update, I really like it! It’s so hard when life decide to punch you in the face like that! Poor Carmen, poor Shane! I would also like to know, you already told me that english is not your first language, I wonder what is your first language.. where are you from. By the way, english is not my first language either, french is.. I’m from Montreal, Canada. Once again, great chapter, I can’t wait for the next one!
Please update soon. The suspence is killing me, I need more. By the way, GREAT ChAPTER!!!!!