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What is love? – Chapter 21
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The morning after the show at Bette’s gallery
Bette awakened first and looked at the woman she had made love to last night until they were exhausted. Tina began to murmur and Bette knew she would soon see her eyelids flutter and then her eyes would open. When Tina’s eyes opened, she always looked for Bette before she looked anywhere else. Bette loved to be awake first and see that. Tina knew that Bette was usually awake first and would be looking at her eyes.
Bette had missed seeing Tina do that in the morning. And Tina had missed seeing Bette.
“Hi, baby.” Tina said looking at Bette and Bette leaned over and kissed her softly. She pulled back and looked at Tina.
“How did you sleep?” asked Bette.
“Perfectly.”
“Me, too.” Bette said, thinking that it had been a long time since she had slept so well.
“Wanna play some more?” Bette grinned.
“I’m kind of sore.” Tina grinned and bit her lower lip. “Besides, we have lots to do today!”
Tina rolled over, hopped out of bed and headed for the bathroom. As she reached the door she turned. Bette hadn’t taken her eyes off Tina and thought that everything that should jiggle, jiggled and everything that shouldn’t, didn’t. Tina smiled at Bette’s appreciative gaze.
“I’m going to take a shower,” she held up one finger, “alone.” And she closed the door.
Bette grinned, threw on some casual clothes, her robe was in the bathroom and she was going to play fair with Tina. She went to the kitchen, started the water boiling in the teapot and got out several pieces of bread. She leaned against the counter after she put the bread in the toaster.
She loved it that Tina was so happy and light-hearted this morning. Last night after they had finished making love, Tina crawled into Bette’s arms and started crying. Bette had held her close and tried to comfort her not knowing the reason for the tears. Sometimes Bette was afraid that she had been too rough physically and had hurt Tina, but if so, Tina never admitted it.
“I was coming back, anyway,” gasped Tina between sobs. “It hurt to be with you, but it hurt more not to be with you. You could have had me back without saying you loved me.”
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Great story chapter Pancha enjoyed it greatly. Pancha couldn’t Tina say I Love YOu before anytime she wanted? I don’t understand, what have I missed? Thanks for the post.
oh pancha you… trying to make things very sweet its sickening… heh, just kidding, I love sweets! I also want to see more of Bettes being-dragged-along adventures… like going to bed bath and beyond or something, shes so hopeless but still seems so lovable to tina… yup.
how great was this chappy?? i was laughing at bette, being befuddled. laughing at tina, measuring and testing. bette trying everywhich way to get tina not mad at her. oh this was just great. and the sex wasn’t bad, ahahahaha. thanks
I love to see a peevish(?) Tina + a doting(?) Bette. Yes, I agree they have a lot to learn to complete the definition of love. So we need a lot of more chapters from you. =P
Great chapter Pancha.Wasn’t expecting the NC 17 but I loved it.
what Tina mean is that now i love you is not just 3 words cuz her and Bette are feeling at the same time “i love you” have a meaning cuz everytime she say she will hear i love you too..right???..lovely and funny chapter love it..thanks your great :o)
yea was there something that was holding Tina back frim sayin her ‘i love you’ s?!
I love happy beginnings! Great chapter.
This chapter is funny and a little crazy about Tina. Damn the love scene is hot and love it. Ok post soon please, thanks!
“And Bette stayed inside her lover and moved inside her lover until Tina was spent.”
Now, that is almost biblical in its cadence.
Queen James Version. Ha ha ha.
I luvs me some scripture…
Pancha, I want to lean over and kiss the keyboard that your fingers had trod upon.
Yes, this was a mighty tasty chapter.
“Can’t get enough of it good”
“Kiss Miss Remington Selectric Underwood good”
That’s before most of y’alls time…Heavy metal…
I think I need to go shopping for a bigger bed. Thanks for the post pancha
wonderful chapter, funny and sweet, just the way i like my B&T to be…thank you
Great chapter keep on posting!!!
Are they living now with each other? I thought they just got back together? Great story as always though!!
I just read all your last 3 chapters, and WOW i was rooting for Bette to finally say I LOVE YOU and mean it.. the bed huanting was fun, i was just doing the same thing last week, although i’m the one who needs a new bed, my best friend was Tina and i was Bette..
I think it how Tina teased Bette was so sweet.. ok i better stop, but i’m so happy for both of them.. =D
you are good…!!real good.!
Too, too, good. No, far too good. I love it. Thank you.
Repetitive as I may be sounding, I must tell you again just how delightful and compelling your quirky, vulnerable Tina and doting Bette are. Here is something that you capture subtly that I particularly appreciate: the fact that Tina was the first one to fall, the first one to admit and the first one to yield may have led us to believe her to be “doormat”-ish. However, your writing beautifully makes clear just how much power Tina has in this relationship and, now, how she is secure enough in taht power to display her displeasures and her grouchiness. Bette’s “tolerant affection,” on display here and in the football chapter, are very appealing to me.
The sex was great,but the I love you was the greatest. Poor old Mench is one of my favorite player,reminds me of Dana. The last time the yankee were in town Got Joe Torres autography. Love this chapter post soon
I had to chuckle at Bette ” this is a good bed for a fight, I don’t have to sleep on the couch because I am already in the living room” To funny..Great story pancha, will be waiting for more.