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What is love? – Chapter 21
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“Baby. It’s OK.”
“But it made me so happy that you could say it.”
“It made me happy, too,” Bette admitted. “In fact, you have no idea how happy it made me.”
“I’m sorry. I can’t stop crying,” Tina said, gasping out words between sobs.
“I love you more than anything,” Bette said as she rocked the still-crying Tina.
“Uh huh,” Tina muttered and Bette held her and caressed her until the crying stopped and she fell into a relaxed sleep. Only then did Bette allow herself to go to sleep.
This morning a perky Tina walked in the kitchen, dressed in jeans and a t-shirt, and put her arm around Bette’s waist while Bette put an arm around her. They kissed sweetly.
“What do we have to do?” Bette said.
Tina looked at her curiously.
“You said we have a lot to do today.”
“We’re gonna need a bigger bed,” said Tina approximating Roy Scheider’s tone in Jaws.
“Why?”
“Our bed is too small. We need one that is about 76 inches across.”
“You don’t like being close to me?” said Bette, teasing.
“Babe, there have been times when I thought one of us, or maybe both of us, was going to fall on the floor.”
Tina planted a soft kiss on Bette’s lips, licking her lower lip.
“Imagine what else we could do if we had more room.”
“Hmmm. Hmmmm!” The second ‘Hmmmm’ was said at a higher pitch.
Bette reflected that they had managed to do a great deal in the small bed. And she liked the thought of Tina so close. Even when they pulled away from each other in their sleep, they were still close. Bette only had to move a small distance to put her arm around Tina.
Bette wasn’t quite sure what they could do differently if they had a larger bed, but she would try to think of something. Maybe Tina had something in mind.
“I’m going to measure our bed while you take a shower.”
“You think I need a shower?” Bette grinned.
“Yes, baby. You smell like *****.”
“Wait,” said Bette as Tina kissed her and turned away.
“You need to change shirts. That’s far too ***** to wear to the furniture store,” Bette grinned.
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Great story chapter Pancha enjoyed it greatly. Pancha couldn’t Tina say I Love YOu before anytime she wanted? I don’t understand, what have I missed? Thanks for the post.
oh pancha you… trying to make things very sweet its sickening… heh, just kidding, I love sweets! I also want to see more of Bettes being-dragged-along adventures… like going to bed bath and beyond or something, shes so hopeless but still seems so lovable to tina… yup.
how great was this chappy?? i was laughing at bette, being befuddled. laughing at tina, measuring and testing. bette trying everywhich way to get tina not mad at her. oh this was just great. and the sex wasn’t bad, ahahahaha. thanks
I love to see a peevish(?) Tina + a doting(?) Bette. Yes, I agree they have a lot to learn to complete the definition of love. So we need a lot of more chapters from you. =P
Great chapter Pancha.Wasn’t expecting the NC 17 but I loved it.
what Tina mean is that now i love you is not just 3 words cuz her and Bette are feeling at the same time “i love you” have a meaning cuz everytime she say she will hear i love you too..right???..lovely and funny chapter love it..thanks your great :o)
yea was there something that was holding Tina back frim sayin her ‘i love you’ s?!
I love happy beginnings! Great chapter.
This chapter is funny and a little crazy about Tina. Damn the love scene is hot and love it. Ok post soon please, thanks!
“And Bette stayed inside her lover and moved inside her lover until Tina was spent.”
Now, that is almost biblical in its cadence.
Queen James Version. Ha ha ha.
I luvs me some scripture…
Pancha, I want to lean over and kiss the keyboard that your fingers had trod upon.
Yes, this was a mighty tasty chapter.
“Can’t get enough of it good”
“Kiss Miss Remington Selectric Underwood good”
That’s before most of y’alls time…Heavy metal…
I think I need to go shopping for a bigger bed. Thanks for the post pancha
wonderful chapter, funny and sweet, just the way i like my B&T to be…thank you
Great chapter keep on posting!!!
Are they living now with each other? I thought they just got back together? Great story as always though!!
I just read all your last 3 chapters, and WOW i was rooting for Bette to finally say I LOVE YOU and mean it.. the bed huanting was fun, i was just doing the same thing last week, although i’m the one who needs a new bed, my best friend was Tina and i was Bette..
I think it how Tina teased Bette was so sweet.. ok i better stop, but i’m so happy for both of them.. =D
you are good…!!real good.!
Too, too, good. No, far too good. I love it. Thank you.
Repetitive as I may be sounding, I must tell you again just how delightful and compelling your quirky, vulnerable Tina and doting Bette are. Here is something that you capture subtly that I particularly appreciate: the fact that Tina was the first one to fall, the first one to admit and the first one to yield may have led us to believe her to be “doormat”-ish. However, your writing beautifully makes clear just how much power Tina has in this relationship and, now, how she is secure enough in taht power to display her displeasures and her grouchiness. Bette’s “tolerant affection,” on display here and in the football chapter, are very appealing to me.
The sex was great,but the I love you was the greatest. Poor old Mench is one of my favorite player,reminds me of Dana. The last time the yankee were in town Got Joe Torres autography. Love this chapter post soon
I had to chuckle at Bette ” this is a good bed for a fight, I don’t have to sleep on the couch because I am already in the living room” To funny..Great story pancha, will be waiting for more.