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What is love? – Chapter 21
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Tina went back into the bedroom, changed blouses to a blue tailored shirt with roll-up sleeves. Tina went back to the kitchen, twirled around to show the shirt and Bette nodded her head in approval.
They both smiled, remembering the first time Tina had twirled around for Bettethe first time they stood by the bed, ready to make love.
Bette showered and had just finished dressing when Tina walked into the bedroom to measure their bed.
Bette watched as Tina walked over to the bed and began measuring. She informed Bette that their bed was really 54 inches wide. She showed how wide 76 inches was as compared to their present bed and Bette agreed that that seemed wide enoughfor just about anything.
When Tina saw that Bette was grinning at her affectionately, she asked, “What?”
“I love you,” Bette said quietly.
“You’ve said that a lot in the last few hours.”
“Once you say it once, then it’s pretty easy.”
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It was a sea of beds. If they had been outside, Bette was sure that the beds would have stretched to the horizon. She was no timid shopper but she had never seen anything like this.
As she stood there mesmerized, Tina busied herself checking out beds. She thumped them, pushed on them with her hand, sat on them and periodically asked Bette to join her. Tina was thoroughly at home and Bette just followed her in wonderment.
“Let’s lie down on this and see how it feels.”
They stretched out on many beds and Bette imagined what the bed would feel like if Tina were on top of her or vice versa. They all seemed good if that was how you judged the beds. But Tina usually found something wrong. It was too hard, it was too soft, and they needed to find one that wasjust right.
“I’m living in The Three Bears,” Bette grumbled.
“What, baby?” Tina asked as she gestured that yet another bed needed to be lain on.
“Maybe we could make a decision faster if we really tried one out,” Bette leered.
Tina scowled at Bette, but it’s impossible to frown and smile at the same time. And so a smile triumphed.
But really, Bette was enjoying this almost as much as she had enjoyed the football game and it was shorter-lasting and less sweaty. Of course, there were no great-looking cheerleaders, just a great-looking girlfriend and that was more than enough.
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Great story chapter Pancha enjoyed it greatly. Pancha couldn’t Tina say I Love YOu before anytime she wanted? I don’t understand, what have I missed? Thanks for the post.
oh pancha you… trying to make things very sweet its sickening… heh, just kidding, I love sweets! I also want to see more of Bettes being-dragged-along adventures… like going to bed bath and beyond or something, shes so hopeless but still seems so lovable to tina… yup.
how great was this chappy?? i was laughing at bette, being befuddled. laughing at tina, measuring and testing. bette trying everywhich way to get tina not mad at her. oh this was just great. and the sex wasn’t bad, ahahahaha. thanks
I love to see a peevish(?) Tina + a doting(?) Bette. Yes, I agree they have a lot to learn to complete the definition of love. So we need a lot of more chapters from you. =P
Great chapter Pancha.Wasn’t expecting the NC 17 but I loved it.
what Tina mean is that now i love you is not just 3 words cuz her and Bette are feeling at the same time “i love you” have a meaning cuz everytime she say she will hear i love you too..right???..lovely and funny chapter love it..thanks your great :o)
yea was there something that was holding Tina back frim sayin her ‘i love you’ s?!
I love happy beginnings! Great chapter.
This chapter is funny and a little crazy about Tina. Damn the love scene is hot and love it. Ok post soon please, thanks!
“And Bette stayed inside her lover and moved inside her lover until Tina was spent.”
Now, that is almost biblical in its cadence.
Queen James Version. Ha ha ha.
I luvs me some scripture…
Pancha, I want to lean over and kiss the keyboard that your fingers had trod upon.
Yes, this was a mighty tasty chapter.
“Can’t get enough of it good”
“Kiss Miss Remington Selectric Underwood good”
That’s before most of y’alls time…Heavy metal…
I think I need to go shopping for a bigger bed. Thanks for the post pancha
wonderful chapter, funny and sweet, just the way i like my B&T to be…thank you
Great chapter keep on posting!!!
Are they living now with each other? I thought they just got back together? Great story as always though!!
I just read all your last 3 chapters, and WOW i was rooting for Bette to finally say I LOVE YOU and mean it.. the bed huanting was fun, i was just doing the same thing last week, although i’m the one who needs a new bed, my best friend was Tina and i was Bette..
I think it how Tina teased Bette was so sweet.. ok i better stop, but i’m so happy for both of them.. =D
you are good…!!real good.!
Too, too, good. No, far too good. I love it. Thank you.
Repetitive as I may be sounding, I must tell you again just how delightful and compelling your quirky, vulnerable Tina and doting Bette are. Here is something that you capture subtly that I particularly appreciate: the fact that Tina was the first one to fall, the first one to admit and the first one to yield may have led us to believe her to be “doormat”-ish. However, your writing beautifully makes clear just how much power Tina has in this relationship and, now, how she is secure enough in taht power to display her displeasures and her grouchiness. Bette’s “tolerant affection,” on display here and in the football chapter, are very appealing to me.
The sex was great,but the I love you was the greatest. Poor old Mench is one of my favorite player,reminds me of Dana. The last time the yankee were in town Got Joe Torres autography. Love this chapter post soon
I had to chuckle at Bette ” this is a good bed for a fight, I don’t have to sleep on the couch because I am already in the living room” To funny..Great story pancha, will be waiting for more.