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Tennis Anyone? Chapter 13
“I’m sorry. It’s better this way Tonya.”
“Well…” Tonya moved slowly out of the living room waiting for Dana to change her mind. She played every card in her hand. She even waited for a while to be called back by the main door and when she wasn’t, she left the house with anger and confusion.
Dana went upstairs to forget everything – including
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This was the moment Dana had been waiting for all her life. Every confusion, every tear, disappointment, questions met and dissolved this instant.
After all the tossing and turning and even getting up for some warm milk, Dana gave up all her hopes to sleep peacefully that night. The break up was intense obviously but all she kept thinking about was how hurt and upset
She decided to go for a drive without choosing a destination but subconsciously the destination was already set:
She sat in her Subaru, parked outside
She sighed deeply, trying not to care at all. Tonya ‘affair’ was over and she didn’t care, it was wrong in the first place.
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“What the *****?”
“Who the ***** is that?” Andrew opened his eyes for a while but went back to sleep without caring at all.
“It’s Dana. Can you come down for a minute please?” Dana asked gently. She sensed it was not a very good idea to face the ‘bright’ mood of ‘morning
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It’s the 4am kiss! Loved it that it’s Dana who intiated the kiss, now go make Alice run after her already lol. Anything pervy comeing soon :p? Great Update!
I love the inversion of the 4am kiss. It’s great to see the story up again!
woo! my eyes lit up when i saw a new chapter of this, and was i disappointed? i think not! brilliant chapter, update like..now!
Hahah nice switch, loved how you also put in both perspectives during their little moment…looking forward to your next post
WooHoo, you’ve updated! *sounds airhorn* I loved everything about this chapter, from Dana drinking warm milk to Alice wearing bunny slippers to then, guttering our minds with intense Danish! I prefer the reversed version of the 4am scene, but for some reason the time was ‘4pm’ in my head. And can I just say, since the ‘bunnies’ made an appearance in this chapter, do I suspect Amy to be in the next chapter? It could be called ‘Cello Anyone?’ Worth a shot. Post soon!
That was great! Please post soon!
Whoa! You have to update! Soon! I finally found the time to start reading fanfic again and I started with yours. 4 am kiss upside down. Nice. Continue, please. :))
Nice reversal. You portrayed their feelings so well. Glad to see you back. Post soon. (NOW!)
Thank you. Now hurry with another chapter please.
I don’t know why, but I keep losing my comments. Great chapter. Please don’t wait so long to post the next chapter, can’t wait to see where you go with this. Loved the bunny slippers. (We just have to love the bunny). Thanks again for a great chapter. Deb
Great 4 am kiss and again great choice to make Dana started the kiss.Expecting now for what will happen next. Thanks and please post soon
that was great and I can’t wait to see what you come up with next for the pair please post soon I love it so much
confused! what a nice way to start my day! Dana banging on ALICE’S door at 4am! and the swapped kisses? Dana’s shy? Alice reassuring her…and molesting her…. sigh. love their interaction. great update!
Great update! I was so excited to see you had written more. This is one of my favorite stories right now. I too loved that Dana initiated this…post soon!
WOW..Luv iT..GREEAAAT chapter..Post so0N!
loved it…thought it was sweet and well written. great chapter!
Love the reversal of the 4 a.m. kiss! I’ve missed this story lately. Can’t wait for more!