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Tennis Anyone? Chapter 13
“What’s up, Dane? Are you ok? Just come up…”
“I’m fine. Really. Can you come down for a minute?”
“Why Dana? You come up, this is stupid!”
“Please?” Dana begged softly. She didn’t get an answer back so she thought
“Miss ‘content *****’, I presume…” a voice dripping with sarcasm greeted her . Which only proved that
“Hi.” Dana smiled weakly. “Yeah, about that…” she tried to avoid eye contact even though
“Yes, you could say that. What’s wrong with you lately Dana? What? You want everyone to be lonely and miserable except you?”
“No, no
“It was only triggered by-”
“And you come to my house at 4 am to show off with your super consistent relationships like Lara or Miss one and only Tonya? Why Dana, why?”
“Because” Dana started looking down while trying to come up with the proper words. “Because…”
“Because what?”
“Because…” words were failing her. Unsurprisingly, words were failing her again, as always in her life. Her eyes started to fill with tears because of the incapability to ease her best friend. She needed to say how she would hate to see
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It’s the 4am kiss! Loved it that it’s Dana who intiated the kiss, now go make Alice run after her already lol. Anything pervy comeing soon :p? Great Update!
I love the inversion of the 4am kiss. It’s great to see the story up again!
woo! my eyes lit up when i saw a new chapter of this, and was i disappointed? i think not! brilliant chapter, update like..now!
Hahah nice switch, loved how you also put in both perspectives during their little moment…looking forward to your next post
WooHoo, you’ve updated! *sounds airhorn* I loved everything about this chapter, from Dana drinking warm milk to Alice wearing bunny slippers to then, guttering our minds with intense Danish! I prefer the reversed version of the 4am scene, but for some reason the time was ‘4pm’ in my head. And can I just say, since the ‘bunnies’ made an appearance in this chapter, do I suspect Amy to be in the next chapter? It could be called ‘Cello Anyone?’ Worth a shot. Post soon!
That was great! Please post soon!
Whoa! You have to update! Soon! I finally found the time to start reading fanfic again and I started with yours. 4 am kiss upside down. Nice. Continue, please. :))
Nice reversal. You portrayed their feelings so well. Glad to see you back. Post soon. (NOW!)
Thank you. Now hurry with another chapter please.
I don’t know why, but I keep losing my comments. Great chapter. Please don’t wait so long to post the next chapter, can’t wait to see where you go with this. Loved the bunny slippers. (We just have to love the bunny). Thanks again for a great chapter. Deb
Great 4 am kiss and again great choice to make Dana started the kiss.Expecting now for what will happen next. Thanks and please post soon
that was great and I can’t wait to see what you come up with next for the pair please post soon I love it so much
confused! what a nice way to start my day! Dana banging on ALICE’S door at 4am! and the swapped kisses? Dana’s shy? Alice reassuring her…and molesting her…. sigh. love their interaction. great update!
Great update! I was so excited to see you had written more. This is one of my favorite stories right now. I too loved that Dana initiated this…post soon!
WOW..Luv iT..GREEAAAT chapter..Post so0N!
loved it…thought it was sweet and well written. great chapter!
Love the reversal of the 4 a.m. kiss! I’ve missed this story lately. Can’t wait for more!