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Tennis Anyone? Chapter 13
That small touch… Maybe a half kiss… Without no hunger at all, just a little reassurance. It could be called friendly, as if… But both knew better.
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This was the moment Dana had been waiting for all her life. Every confusion, every tear, disappointment, question met and dissolved this instant.
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Dana pulled back after a second or two, feeling dizzy and embarrassed. She half opened her eyes, avoiding the brown eyes before her. If she didn’t, she would see the darkest brown of all and the shiniest of the stars on those pair, the tone she longed to see all her adult life after meeting and falling for
“I’m sorry…” she pulled further only to be pulled back into her best friend for a real and hungry kiss.
Dana was lost in the moment, it was as if her whole weight was carried by the strong but soft hands cupping her from her cheeks. She knew she would be waken up in a minute or two. She always did. Whenever she was kissing
“*****” Dana whispered all of a sudden and very much unexpectedly. “Oh *****…” Her eyes began to water even more. “Forgive me Alice, *****!!! I’m really sorry…”
With that she freed herself from
TBC
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It’s the 4am kiss! Loved it that it’s Dana who intiated the kiss, now go make Alice run after her already lol. Anything pervy comeing soon :p? Great Update!
I love the inversion of the 4am kiss. It’s great to see the story up again!
woo! my eyes lit up when i saw a new chapter of this, and was i disappointed? i think not! brilliant chapter, update like..now!
Hahah nice switch, loved how you also put in both perspectives during their little moment…looking forward to your next post
WooHoo, you’ve updated! *sounds airhorn* I loved everything about this chapter, from Dana drinking warm milk to Alice wearing bunny slippers to then, guttering our minds with intense Danish! I prefer the reversed version of the 4am scene, but for some reason the time was ‘4pm’ in my head. And can I just say, since the ‘bunnies’ made an appearance in this chapter, do I suspect Amy to be in the next chapter? It could be called ‘Cello Anyone?’ Worth a shot. Post soon!
That was great! Please post soon!
Whoa! You have to update! Soon! I finally found the time to start reading fanfic again and I started with yours. 4 am kiss upside down. Nice. Continue, please. :))
Nice reversal. You portrayed their feelings so well. Glad to see you back. Post soon. (NOW!)
Thank you. Now hurry with another chapter please.
I don’t know why, but I keep losing my comments. Great chapter. Please don’t wait so long to post the next chapter, can’t wait to see where you go with this. Loved the bunny slippers. (We just have to love the bunny). Thanks again for a great chapter. Deb
Great 4 am kiss and again great choice to make Dana started the kiss.Expecting now for what will happen next. Thanks and please post soon
that was great and I can’t wait to see what you come up with next for the pair please post soon I love it so much
confused! what a nice way to start my day! Dana banging on ALICE’S door at 4am! and the swapped kisses? Dana’s shy? Alice reassuring her…and molesting her…. sigh. love their interaction. great update!
Great update! I was so excited to see you had written more. This is one of my favorite stories right now. I too loved that Dana initiated this…post soon!
WOW..Luv iT..GREEAAAT chapter..Post so0N!
loved it…thought it was sweet and well written. great chapter!
Love the reversal of the 4 a.m. kiss! I’ve missed this story lately. Can’t wait for more!