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What is love? – Chapter 33
Previously.
The night before the wedding – 15 minutes after the end of the ‘war council’
“Al, Bette’s gone,” said JT who had just knocked on Alice’s door.
“What do you mean ‘gone?’”
“Departed, left”
“*****, JT, I know what ‘gone’ means.”
“Well then, Bette’s gone.”
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The night before the wedding
“OK, what’s our plan?” said Alice.
They decided to search Bette’s room again.
“Search all the bathrooms carefully. Did you look in the hampers?” asked Alice.
“I don’t think Bette can get in a hamper.”
“Well, search them anyway. And the closets. And the balcony. And behind the furniture. Under the furniture.”
They looked at Alice, oddly.
While one group was searching Bette’s room, another group was delegated to check the bar and the bar restroom. The restaurant was closed. They interrogated motel employees. Made black and white Xeroxed copies of a photograph of Bette. And it’s not easy to get a Xerox in a motel around midnight.
Bette was nowhere to be found and no one had seen her. Actually, many of the hotel employees remembered her, even without the photo, but they hadn’t seen her in the evening.
“Is Bette’s car here?” asked JT. They all grew quiet. If Bette had escaped in her car, they would never find her. They ran for the parking lot and JT said later that they galloped like stampeding cattle, except the cattle are more organized. But the car was gone.
“It was parked right here,” said Alice. “I put some of their suitcases in it a few hours ago.”
There was a stunned silence. Finally, Val spoke.
“Al, you don’t think she’s bolted, do you?”
There was another long silence.
“Of course not. She probably just went toget something.”
“Like what, Al?” even Shane was growing visibly nervous. She had been rattled since the manicure experience.
They sadly went back to Bette’s room and sat there. No one seemed to have any ideas. After a while Kit joined them.
“I checked every public bathroom I could find, even the men’s.” reported Kit. “Not just the one in the bar. That excited a few people.”
“Kit,” said Alice, “Bette’s car is gone.”
“Oh, my sweet Jesus,” said a horrified Kit, reverting to a childhood term. She sat down heavily. Another nervous silence settled over the group. No one met any one else’s eyes.
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(90 votes, average: 3.34 out of 5)
pancha, you scared me with the last chapter, So, just want to comment now, Glad you wrote the next chapter so fast. You are really good
just BEAUTIFUL..thanks..
Simple, but full of love. That’s the life everyone longs for. They got married finally! But they still need to work on their relationship, rite? So there’ll still be a lot of chapter awaiting, rite? =D
1st page= DAMN.. 2nd page = aww so fvcking cute.. 3rd page = Simply Beautiful..
Ahh i love your story, I am with Missyang, there is another chapter coming right? I already had to read the last chapter of another great saga, want this one to continue.. Great writing.
I am glad they were together…beautifully done……
Dear Pancha,This is such a beautiful and satisfying story from beginning until now, the wedding. I love the ramp up to the wedding all the attendants freaking out right left and center. Funny, charming and loving. When I get really stressed and unhappy I read your posts just to soothe my brow and they do. Thank you. and keep on going as a public service.
whew, bette is still all there…great chapter, after crazy funny we get beautiful and perfect…thanks
Gosh… those two could not even wait a couple of short days to see each other… at least now after the ceremony, everyone else can rest and of course get TIPSY!!!On with ‘A day in the life of Porter-Kennards’
Thank you.
This chapter is so funny, Bette and Tina are so fucking cute and beautiful, happy for them and let see where they gonna go for honeymoon. Ok let see what’s next, thanks!
Beautiful! Bring on the hornymoon.
I actually thought maybe Tina and Bette had said “f&%$ this s&!$” and eloped somewhere. Bring on the NC-17, er I mean, the sweet honeymoon. ;)
Great stuff pancha!!!
i knew it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! sweet
I enjoyed the wedding and the visual of Bette in tight pants…
Lovely Pancha, just lovely. So full of love for each other. And friends and family and how much they love them too, beautiful. Thanks for the post.
Simply Beautiful and sooooooooooooo nicely done. It realy conveys the depth of their love and grace with each other. GreaT JOB, PLEASE CONTINUE.
very cute!
Great just great funny,romantic and so cute! so not to give the impression im obsessed with Red or anything!!lol but it had to be Red that helped Bette escape her bodyguards!!! am i right or am i jumping the gun again!! either way i loved it thanks
I knew Bette would be with Tina!! I’m glad you had them start their own tradition, pancha. It was definitely in the best interest of everyone involved!
Tina just needs to say it right back to Bette. I.Love.You. Simple.
woooooooooooooooooooo~!! SWEET!
**PHEWW*** THAT WAS SO CLOSE!! u can’t play wit my heart like dat, a girl could pass out at her computer reading your story. but dis chap was beautiful as always. please post soon. PEACE.
awww, how sweet! **sniff, sniff**
Cool, very funny And very cool. If this is the end come back with another one, if its not the end keep going. Thanks