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Drowning 27
Previously
Dana looked over at Alice and took in the cool confidence with which Alice was speaking. She saw the pure love and adoration in Alice’s eyes. She had in front of her all she had ever wanted. She had Alice, ready and willing to make it work. Ready to stand up and fight for them. Ready to be her girlfriend. Dana was slightly relieved to know that Alice knew the truth, well a part of the truth, enough of the truth to know that Dana really did love her and would never willingly leave her or hurt her. So why should she fight this? Why should Dana not have what she wanted so very badly?
“But Al, she’s messed up. I mean, this girl is really off. I don’t know if this is so smart.”
“Listen Dane, deciding it’s a good idea to fall hard and fast for your best firend wasn’t the smarted thing I’ve ever done, but look at how well it turned out. Sometimes you just have to take a chance.”
“I know, but Al, if this goes badly, it’s really going to go badly. I mean, what if she comes after you?”
“You need to know, if she comes after me, I’ll take care of it. Nothing is keeping me from you. So just remember that. I mean really, Babe, you need to have a little faith.”
“And what makes you think I don’t have faith?”
Alice smiled at Dana and places a soft kiss on the tip of her nose, “Please tell me you’re kidding. Baby, you have no faith that things work out. None at all. It’s amazing we’ve made it as long as we have. But luckily, I have faith for the both of us.”
Dana took Alice in her arms and tightened her grip around Alice’s waist. She looked at Alice, drinking in her eyes, “You and me huh? Yeah, I like the sound of that. She doesn’t hold a chance against us.” Dana leaned down and kissed her. And for the moment, all was right in the world.
Chapter 27
Julia was in the living room lying on the couch with Cara watching the Wiggles. She wasn’t quite fully awake, yet she couldn’t actually sleep. Her mind kept going to Chris, wondering how her day was going. It had been four hours since Chris left The Planet with Bette. No, it was four hours since Tina left The Planet with Bette.
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(72 votes, average: 3.88 out of 5)
someone told you your chapters are too long?? May i emphatically disagree? i’m wracking my brain trying to figure out WHAT Dana has done- i got nothing. post soon! i also want to find out what happened with Tina and Bette. congratulations!
Yay, you’re back and with a prize :D congratulations!, I like that Dana needs grown up. Waiting your next post and trying to guess what Dana has done.
Congratulations on the award… thanks for the chapter..I for one like long chapters…Alice and Dana so cute, Bette and Tina what is going on with these two and will Julia ever get the chance to show or tell Tina how she feels about her? I hope so….Thank you Lucia.
It’s great to see you back!
I love this story, and each time you update. Congrats congrats on the award! You certainly deserve it. :)
Yeah you updated. great chapter so well written and congats on the award. Please post soon i want juwia and chris together pwease pwetty pwease lol. and what has dana done? i am so curious.
Congratulations on the award! And thanks for updating even though you’ve been really busy. Now who said your chapters are too long? You can write an 100 pages and people will read them happily. When are you going to give up the rest of Dana’s secret? Great update!
I love this as i have from the start and I can’t wait to see what happens next but I do hope that it all ends well for alice and dana please post soon
Great chapter, and I agree with capes not your chapters are not too long. You can make them over 10 pages and I’ll still be hanging onto every word. Congrats on the award, you deserve it and it warms my heart everytime I see a danish writer win one. And so far they really have picked another of the best. Great job once again, and can’t wait for the next chapter.
I hate the comment sections doesn’t have an edit botton. The line was “I agree with capes THAT your so on and so on”
Im really enjoying your story.Everyday Im looking at the site hoping you posted a next chapter. Ill keep hoping.