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Drowning 27
As she sat on the couch smiling at Cara laughing at the TV, she heard the front door open. She sat there still for a moment, trying to see if she could discern Chris’ mood through any sounds coming, but she heard none. A moment later, Chris came into the living room, her eyes obviously red from crying. As Julia went to speak, Cara saw her Mommy and jumped up off of the couch, “Mommy! You’re home!” She ran to Tina, who bent to pick her up, “Juwia and I had so much fun. We went to the park and pwayed on the swings and we had ice cweam and then we watched the Wiggles!” Tina smiled hugging her daughter. Happy, finding a comfort in the little girls arms wrapped tightly around her shoulders. Peace, that was it, it was peace. After the day she had, peace was welcome.
After gathering herself for a few seconds she kissed Cara on the top of her head, “So you guys had fun. I’m glad. But sweetie, it’s a little late, let’s head back to Aunt Alice’s for bed.”
“Can we stay here with Juwia, pwease?”
Tina looked over to Julia who nodded her head, “Sure honey, but you need to get ready for bed, ok?”
“Cara, I have some pj’s for you and a toothbrush, come with me.” Julia said. She walked over towards Tina and took Cara from Tina. She laid her hand of Tina’s shoulder, “You ok?”
Tina nodded, “We’ll talk about it in a little bit. I’m going to open up a bottle of wine.”
“OK, Come on sweetie, let’s get you ready for bed.” Julia said, walking out of the living room with Cara in her arms.
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Alice and Dana were lying on the couch watching “Better Off Dead”, eating Twizzlers. Nothing like a good cheesy 80′s flick and candy to make a bad day better. It’s mindless, they had seen it a zillion times and it was John Cusack. So that always made Alice happy. If it made Alice happy, Dana was happy. It was a pretty handy little cycle like that. Dana wasn’t much into movies, not like Alice. To Dana, it was sort of just a good escape, no matter the genre or the actors. Alice on the other hand had movies to suit all moods. Certain genres were taboo, never to be seen, some only when she was happy, some only when she was sad, some only when heart broken and so on. She even had actors that were broken into the same categories.
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(72 votes, average: 3.88 out of 5)
someone told you your chapters are too long?? May i emphatically disagree? i’m wracking my brain trying to figure out WHAT Dana has done- i got nothing. post soon! i also want to find out what happened with Tina and Bette. congratulations!
Yay, you’re back and with a prize :D congratulations!, I like that Dana needs grown up. Waiting your next post and trying to guess what Dana has done.
Congratulations on the award… thanks for the chapter..I for one like long chapters…Alice and Dana so cute, Bette and Tina what is going on with these two and will Julia ever get the chance to show or tell Tina how she feels about her? I hope so….Thank you Lucia.
It’s great to see you back!
I love this story, and each time you update. Congrats congrats on the award! You certainly deserve it. :)
Yeah you updated. great chapter so well written and congats on the award. Please post soon i want juwia and chris together pwease pwetty pwease lol. and what has dana done? i am so curious.
Congratulations on the award! And thanks for updating even though you’ve been really busy. Now who said your chapters are too long? You can write an 100 pages and people will read them happily. When are you going to give up the rest of Dana’s secret? Great update!
I love this as i have from the start and I can’t wait to see what happens next but I do hope that it all ends well for alice and dana please post soon
Great chapter, and I agree with capes not your chapters are not too long. You can make them over 10 pages and I’ll still be hanging onto every word. Congrats on the award, you deserve it and it warms my heart everytime I see a danish writer win one. And so far they really have picked another of the best. Great job once again, and can’t wait for the next chapter.
I hate the comment sections doesn’t have an edit botton. The line was “I agree with capes THAT your so on and so on”
Im really enjoying your story.Everyday Im looking at the site hoping you posted a next chapter. Ill keep hoping.