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    Life: Altered 03.10 ~*~ Ebony Dawn

    Story written on November 26, 2005 by Janet Marie.
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    Alice makes a confession – Jenny and Marina talk about Shane and see something disturbing – Tina and Cassandra talk and perhaps more – Bette makes a mistake and Candace calls her on it – Quin visits someone close to her

    Life: Altered 03.10 ~*~ Ebony Dawn


                It had been two long days
    since they’d found     Shane in the hospital, everyone had rallied to her side,
    and     Dr. Bree    , as she liked to be called, had been
    rather impressed by the gatherings. She’d told them, and her sister, (whom Bree thought really wasn’t her sister, but she
    brushed past the lapse in truth.)    , that     Shane     was going to be in for a long road to
    recovery even when and if she did wake up. It was evident that     Shane     had taken a beaten that most people
    wouldn’t have lived through.

                Alice sat by the bed, staring at one of her
    best friends in the world, the ventilator at her neck had been removed this
    morning. The hole sewn shut and it was now bandaged, and     Alice     thought that Shane would be impressed with the scar. Dr. Bree had told them that talking to Shane was a good thing, and they were all
    taking scheduled turns to sit with     Shane    . Today was Alice‘s turn, and she was dreading the long 8
    hours that she’d be spending there. Not because she didn’t want to be with     Shane    , just the opposite, but she wanted some
    interaction from     Shane    ‘s part. She needed her best friend right about now.

                “So Tina says hi. 
    Her mom had a heart attack, can you freaking imagine?  So     Tina     is staying there, that is why she’s not here.  We told her we’d hold the fort down for a
    while, think we can handle that?”      Alice     asked, and no answer from the comatose Shane.  Alice pulled the chair closer and she put her
    feet up on the end of the bed and let out a hot sigh. 

                “Hope you don’t mind…  Now if you want Tina, you just gotta say so, blink those *****
    green eyes and she’ll be on a plane in the drop of a hat..”     Alice     quipped and she sat in silence for a
    while, her jaw set and then it came, the tears. 
    She didn’t want to cry, she didn’t want     Shane     thinking she was weak, because Shane never cried, did she?  The frustration of the situation.

                “Damn it Shane! 
    Why did you do it?  Why did you
    mess around with     Steven Jaffe    ‘s ***** wife?  Huh? 
    Damn it, couldn’t you have picked someone else to fall in love
    with?  Of course not, you have to do
    everything the hard way don’t you?  I
    know he did this to you, and there is nothing I can do about it.      Shane    …”  She said,
    wiping away the tears and she sat in the quiet for a long time, then she began
    to speak, her voice low and she spoke slowly.

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    1. After all this time can’t understand why Bette would take Candace to hers and Tina home, that take guts, also in their bed. If she feels so strong for Candace.let her walk off and tell Tina goodbye. She is really pushing Tina into some one elses arms. thanks

    2. I was so touched with Alice’s confession. And she’s such a good friend to Shane, I love them both so much! And someone should just go drown Candace in the pool, maybe Marina can do that haha! The character Quin is also very interesting, she seems to so strong and so fragile at the same time. Really excellent writing here. And I’ll be sure to check out some of your collaborating work too. Need I say it…update soon ;)

    4. sweetie WTF do you mean your taken??? LMAO!!! Of course I’m a huge admirer. your stories are fucking brilliant. I truly enjoy you and wind. OH and the best part is there is no B&T hahahaha love that!!!

    5. I’m sorry, but I need to vent…I really want to choke the Bette in this story. She takes self-centeredness to new lows. She’s cheating, remorselessly, and then adding insult to injury by bringing Candace into their home? Freak!Considering how nonchalant she is being about her affair, I’m also surprised the gang has not found her in a comprimising position yet.*Sigh*I guess Tina is going to be checking into Heartbreak Hotel very soon. Let’s hope Ms. Grey is there to, er, ‘comfort’ her.

    6. yes.the whole in b/t’s house for hells sake. thats really pushing it for me also. now that i know you love angst and drama and pain i know what to look for. wont set myself up to think there will be somekind of happiness. my kind of happiness. so bring it. love your writing. its very good. thanks.

    7. I hate Bette right now!!! I can’t stand that she take Candance to their home and their bed. It’s grose!!It makes me feel sick. I hope Bette feels a lot of pain really soon!! I want see her breakdown and depressed. I hope Tina does not cheat her before kwonwing about Bette and Candace affair!!! Please deserve to kwonw what happens behind her back! Keep going!! And post again soon!

    8. “Did Tina dye her hair dark?” I can’t believe the audacity of Bette so I hope Tina finds comfort (or whatever they call it these days) from Cass. As for Shane, I hope she be back to *ucking & *ucking soon. Please post soon.

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