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Life: Altered 03.10 ~*~ Ebony Dawn
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“Come to me; In the darkness
of the dawn; I wait in the shadows of the day; Tonight we’ll fly away; We’ll be
lost to all before the dawn.” She sang
softly, imagining her fingers strumming the strings of the guitar. She closed her eyes, blocking out the scene
before her, instead she saw the stage with people in front of her, all moving
to the soft ripping rhythm.
“I lay in wait, knowing you’ll
never emerge; From the shallow grave of the earth; Lost to me now; Like a leaf
in the gale force wind. I know I’ll
never wake; From this dream I’m in; Your life was my reality; Now my dawn is in
ebony.” Quin took a long breath, her
hands cool in the grass, watching as the clouds ran by the earth, creating
images that a child could only see. A
child and a lonely broken soul.
“I lay in wait, knowing you’ll
never emerge; From the shallow grave of the earth; Lost to me now; Like a leaf
in the gale force wind. Cold earth
beneath my body; Icy granite the pillow for my head; Fingers trace your etched
name; Where it all began, where it all ended.”
Quin saw another couple moving two rows over, holding flowers and
crying, and she wondered who’d they were visiting on this warm afternoon. She turned, facing
his name, then the P of their last name.
She cleared her throat and said in a hushed voice.
“I think I’ll throw in another
chorus there, what do you think?” She
asked and then she nodded, and grunted. “I
know, I’m the song writer, your just the audience now right H?” She asked and she got up, dusting off her
jeans and touching the top of the tombstone, kissing her fingertips and then
placing it on the cool face of his name and walking away.
Ebony Dawn
11/2/04
JG Marie
Come to me
In the darkness of the dawn
I wait in the shadows of the day
Tonight we’ll fly away
We’ll be lost to all before the dawn
I lay in wait, knowing you’ll never emerge
From the shallow grave of the earth
Lost to me now
Like a leaf in the gale force wind
I know I’ll never wake
From this dream I’m in
Your life was my reality
Now my dawn is in ebony
I lay in wait, knowing you’ll never emerge
From the shallow grave of the earth
Lost to me now
Like a leaf in the gale force wind
Cold earth beneath my body
Icy granite the pillow for my head
Fingers trace your etched name
Where it all began, where it all ended
I lay in wait, knowing you’ll never emerge
From the shallow grave of the earth
Lost to me now
Like a leaf in the gale force wind
JadedRogue
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After all this time can’t understand why Bette would take Candace to hers and Tina home, that take guts, also in their bed. If she feels so strong for Candace.let her walk off and tell Tina goodbye. She is really pushing Tina into some one elses arms. thanks
I was so touched with Alice’s confession. And she’s such a good friend to Shane, I love them both so much! And someone should just go drown Candace in the pool, maybe Marina can do that haha! The character Quin is also very interesting, she seems to so strong and so fragile at the same time. Really excellent writing here. And I’ll be sure to check out some of your collaborating work too. Need I say it…update soon ;)
Man its good to read this story again..although Im wondering where the girls next door went??..anyway I love it keep it up
sweetie WTF do you mean your taken??? LMAO!!! Of course I’m a huge admirer. your stories are fucking brilliant. I truly enjoy you and wind. OH and the best part is there is no B&T hahahaha love that!!!
I’m sorry, but I need to vent…I really want to choke the Bette in this story. She takes self-centeredness to new lows. She’s cheating, remorselessly, and then adding insult to injury by bringing Candace into their home? Freak!Considering how nonchalant she is being about her affair, I’m also surprised the gang has not found her in a comprimising position yet.*Sigh*I guess Tina is going to be checking into Heartbreak Hotel very soon. Let’s hope Ms. Grey is there to, er, ‘comfort’ her.
yes.the whole in b/t’s house for hells sake. thats really pushing it for me also. now that i know you love angst and drama and pain i know what to look for. wont set myself up to think there will be somekind of happiness. my kind of happiness. so bring it. love your writing. its very good. thanks.
I hate Bette right now!!! I can’t stand that she take Candance to their home and their bed. It’s grose!!It makes me feel sick. I hope Bette feels a lot of pain really soon!! I want see her breakdown and depressed. I hope Tina does not cheat her before kwonwing about Bette and Candace affair!!! Please deserve to kwonw what happens behind her back! Keep going!! And post again soon!
“Did Tina dye her hair dark?” I can’t believe the audacity of Bette so I hope Tina finds comfort (or whatever they call it these days) from Cass. As for Shane, I hope she be back to *ucking & *ucking soon. Please post soon.