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Life: Altered 03.10 ~*~ Ebony Dawn
~*~*~*~*~*
wake up. There was no way that
even at the Planet, she felt listless. The
thought of someone beating up
turned around, and
“She’s going to be all right,
get her down, or in the way of a ***** woman.”
small suitcase that was on the bed.
“I just hope that she does
wake up from this
the room, it over looked the back yard and
“Yes. They said they couldn’t come, I guess they
aren’t a very well off family, money, and such.
Her dad is dead, I didn’t know that.
Her mom was sweet to
live way out in
family to take care of her.”
“
close. She ran away when she was
younger, 13 years old and she hitchhiked to
is the little to nothing I know about
and she cocked her head to the side, her eyes wide in surprise.
“
questioning. Her head cocked to one side
as she stared out the window, drinking in the sight of what was before her,
astonished beyond words.
“What is it
walking to the window. She placed a hand
on
glass and her eyes growing wide.
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(8 votes, average: 4.13 out of 5)
After all this time can’t understand why Bette would take Candace to hers and Tina home, that take guts, also in their bed. If she feels so strong for Candace.let her walk off and tell Tina goodbye. She is really pushing Tina into some one elses arms. thanks
I was so touched with Alice’s confession. And she’s such a good friend to Shane, I love them both so much! And someone should just go drown Candace in the pool, maybe Marina can do that haha! The character Quin is also very interesting, she seems to so strong and so fragile at the same time. Really excellent writing here. And I’ll be sure to check out some of your collaborating work too. Need I say it…update soon ;)
Man its good to read this story again..although Im wondering where the girls next door went??..anyway I love it keep it up
sweetie WTF do you mean your taken??? LMAO!!! Of course I’m a huge admirer. your stories are fucking brilliant. I truly enjoy you and wind. OH and the best part is there is no B&T hahahaha love that!!!
I’m sorry, but I need to vent…I really want to choke the Bette in this story. She takes self-centeredness to new lows. She’s cheating, remorselessly, and then adding insult to injury by bringing Candace into their home? Freak!Considering how nonchalant she is being about her affair, I’m also surprised the gang has not found her in a comprimising position yet.*Sigh*I guess Tina is going to be checking into Heartbreak Hotel very soon. Let’s hope Ms. Grey is there to, er, ‘comfort’ her.
yes.the whole in b/t’s house for hells sake. thats really pushing it for me also. now that i know you love angst and drama and pain i know what to look for. wont set myself up to think there will be somekind of happiness. my kind of happiness. so bring it. love your writing. its very good. thanks.
I hate Bette right now!!! I can’t stand that she take Candance to their home and their bed. It’s grose!!It makes me feel sick. I hope Bette feels a lot of pain really soon!! I want see her breakdown and depressed. I hope Tina does not cheat her before kwonwing about Bette and Candace affair!!! Please deserve to kwonw what happens behind her back! Keep going!! And post again soon!
“Did Tina dye her hair dark?” I can’t believe the audacity of Bette so I hope Tina finds comfort (or whatever they call it these days) from Cass. As for Shane, I hope she be back to *ucking & *ucking soon. Please post soon.