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One Way Street/ Mad Dash : Chapter Two
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Tina looks like she had just seen a ghost, her eyes: wide opened, her body: stiff, and she was scared, scared to ask the next question. “You’re Bette Porter? Then, do you know of a James Kennard?”
“Yes, he’s my fiance.” Bette replied. “uh…how.. you know James?”
Tina sighed, “What a small world, indeed. James…. He’s my brother.”
” Wow? No kidding? You’re James’s sister? You’re Tina, then?” asked Bette, who does not look surprise at all.
“Yes.” replied Tina.
Tina suddenly realized that she was still holding Bette’s hand. She immediately snatched her hand away from Bette’s, and was quick to apologize. Bette couldn’t contain herself, and laughs.
“What’s so funny?” asked Tina.
“You.” said Bette, as she moves her chair a little closer to Tina’s, and whispers in her ear,” Just a minute ago, you had your lips on mine. Now, you won’t even look at me, in my eyes.”
Tina didn’t know how to respond especially with Bette so close. She begins hopping away in her chair, which cause her to fall back. Bette biting down her lips, trying her best not to laugh, but it was inevitable. She laughs.
“Ow.” Tina moaned, still on the floor. “Are you going to help me up or what?
Bette gets up from her chair, and helped Tina up, as she continues to laugh. “Are you okay, Tina?”
Tina picks her chair up, and sits back down. “Yeah, I think so.” said Tina, her face red as cherry.
Bette continues to laugh, “Good,” she said, as she wipes the tears from her eyes.
“Stop laughing!” yelled Tina. “I could have seriously injured myself.”
“I’m sorry, I don’t mean to laugh, but it’s just too funny not too.” said Bette.
“Whatever!” yelled Tina, as she jumps up from her chair.
Bette quickly grabs a hold of Tina’s wrist, “Hey, I said I’m sorry. I didn’t mean to laugh. Don’t go.”
“She’s straight, Tina, and she’s your brother’s fiance. Just leave, right now, while you can.” thought Tina.
“Please. Stay. Let’s talk.” said Bette, tilts her head to the side, and pouts.
“Oh, I”m doomed.” thought Tina.
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What the hell are you up to sose!!!!!!…I smell trouble for Tina. And I´m working on my new chapter but nothing has come to mind yet, sorry….but do post soon.
That mad dash image is mad funny. What mischief has Tina been up to previously that her brother feels the need to set up up in this fashion. I await the revelation. Post more soon.
This is so fucking funny and love it. Tina run away from Bette and I know what’s going on here and cant wait to see what’s next, thanks!
The brother,the Mother and the whole gang is in on this. Tina just keep on running. will to go bach home or stay in LA for the holiday love this . thanks
Very intriguing. I agree with BTF. Bette’s gay and she and James are getting Tina back for something (not yet disclosed). Hmmm, it’s so cute how distracted Tina is when Bette is playing with her around James. Post soon.
i love this and no it is not fast enough lol post now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
hmm i smell something fishy..so funny to see Tina running away (literally!) at every chance she got!LOL..post soon=)
i see romantic, i see love, i see story…i don’t see funny…hmmm…i’m glad i could inspire something LOL…so this is all a plan to capture tina’s heart and bette’s gay and not even engage to james? i’m intrigued…post soon but i’m still not invested, nope
“Bette, this is my sister, Tina, and Tina, this is my frie… my fiance, Bette,” said James.
Okay, this is funny as heck. A set up? I love it. What a great concept with this story. Looking forward to more.
AAHHH SHIT!!! there’s something a bruin between these 2. i love it with a twist.i can already feel that this is gonna be awesome!!! oh yeah, mad grazy is just one of many compliments that i will be giving bcuz this story is so awesome already “run, forest, run!” that’s funny as hell. please post soon. PEACE.
So they set up the whole thing for Tee? Poor Tee, like a running rabbit. LOL. I don’t mind a romance, but funny? also great. Why dunt you try both. =D
Whoa WTF. My comment totally got butchered. Anyway I was gonna say that James’ “slip-up” was just plain bad. No one with half a brain would make that mistake if they’re supposed to be proud of the person they’re showing off. Oh and Tina Gump is cracking me up. I think that’s all I had to say.
i love this… and you had me fooled… i am loving it… tina running away every chance she got… this is priceless… and the whole gang is in on it and her mother… my kind of lady… please continue soon…so i guess i have to try harder… but # 2 is a good place to be in… later baby…
Okay this is so interesting and….yes funny!!! I knew something was up when James didn’t intruduce Bette correctly and when he ran out of the house without kissing Bette goodbye…..Tina really has it coming for her and I can’t wait…..I’m already hooked to this story though you had told me otherwise, but I can’t help it :o))
Wow, that was great. Can’t wait to read more.
So is Bette REALLY the fiance? This is very funny. Tina is a nut job. Nice try at a romantic chapter.
This Tina is pretty wacky-seems she must have inherited it from her mother. Did she get some greyhound genes from her father?
So Bette must be friends with James and is tring to hook Bette up with Tina?Right…THANKS..GREAT JOB..POST SOON…
Ok, you got me confused now! somethings up with Bette, she’s not James’ fiancé is she?! No James almost messed it up! All I can say is please continue this soon so I’m out of this confused state! LOL BTW I’m loving your story!
ouvh ..my last comment is bad , really ! excuse me for that…so, good year, thanks, and try to find some time to write this story (and to answers your mails) BYe
VEry nice story!! i’ve read all your stories and yes this one is the best i think, because it’s funny and there’s suspens! I hope you’ll post soon, we all enjoy it…Tee is just so nice :)