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One Way Street/ Mad Dash : Chapter Two
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Bette laughs, she could believe what had just transpired. “Oh my God. What just happened? Tina…Tina…Tina. You can run, but you escape me.”
Sometime later, Tina in her car, contemplating, “Oh my…oh my… I’m in so much trouble. If James knew that I kissed his fiance. He’ll never forgive me. What should I do now? I know. Leave. Go back to Vancouver. Yes, that’s a brilliant idea Tina! Leave. I’ll call James, and say that something came up.”
Tina took out her cellphone, and dialed her brother numbers.
“Hello? James speaking.”
“Hey bro, it’s Tina.”
“Hi lil sis, where are you?”
“Oh, I’m at the airport. Something came up, and I have to go back to Vancouver.”
“Really? Then why are you at Mom’s?”
“What do you mean?”
“I mean, look to your right, Tina.”
“Hi James.” said Tina, as she sees James, is tapping on her car window. “Oh my God! I’m at Mom’s? What am I doing here?” thought Tina. Apparently, Tina was parked in front of her mother’s when she stopped to make that call. “Just my luck,” she thought.
James signaled Tina to roll down her window. “Are you going to come out, sis?”
Tina gets out from her car, as she chuckles, nervously, ” Hi James.”
“That’s all?” asked James. “Come here. Give your big brother a hug?”
“I missed you.” said Tina, and gives her brother a hug.
“I’ve missed you, as well. Now, what this about going back to Vancouver?” asked James.
“Um, I lied. I wanted to surprise you…” said Tina, hoping that her excuse will hold up. “What about you? What are you doing here at Mom’s? Aren’t you supposed to be at work?”
” Well, I was on a lunch break. Then Bette, called me to pick her up at the Planet. She needed a ride. Something about her friend running out on her, literally.” James laughed.
“Bette? Bette is here?” asked Tina
“Oh, that’s right. You have not met her yet. Well, she’s in the car. She wanted to check up on mom, since mom was complaining of a headache yesterday. Hold on. Wait here. ” said James, and he runs to his car.
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What the hell are you up to sose!!!!!!…I smell trouble for Tina. And I´m working on my new chapter but nothing has come to mind yet, sorry….but do post soon.
That mad dash image is mad funny. What mischief has Tina been up to previously that her brother feels the need to set up up in this fashion. I await the revelation. Post more soon.
This is so fucking funny and love it. Tina run away from Bette and I know what’s going on here and cant wait to see what’s next, thanks!
The brother,the Mother and the whole gang is in on this. Tina just keep on running. will to go bach home or stay in LA for the holiday love this . thanks
Very intriguing. I agree with BTF. Bette’s gay and she and James are getting Tina back for something (not yet disclosed). Hmmm, it’s so cute how distracted Tina is when Bette is playing with her around James. Post soon.
i love this and no it is not fast enough lol post now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
hmm i smell something fishy..so funny to see Tina running away (literally!) at every chance she got!LOL..post soon=)
i see romantic, i see love, i see story…i don’t see funny…hmmm…i’m glad i could inspire something LOL…so this is all a plan to capture tina’s heart and bette’s gay and not even engage to james? i’m intrigued…post soon but i’m still not invested, nope
“Bette, this is my sister, Tina, and Tina, this is my frie… my fiance, Bette,” said James.
Okay, this is funny as heck. A set up? I love it. What a great concept with this story. Looking forward to more.
AAHHH SHIT!!! there’s something a bruin between these 2. i love it with a twist.i can already feel that this is gonna be awesome!!! oh yeah, mad grazy is just one of many compliments that i will be giving bcuz this story is so awesome already “run, forest, run!” that’s funny as hell. please post soon. PEACE.
So they set up the whole thing for Tee? Poor Tee, like a running rabbit. LOL. I don’t mind a romance, but funny? also great. Why dunt you try both. =D
Whoa WTF. My comment totally got butchered. Anyway I was gonna say that James’ “slip-up” was just plain bad. No one with half a brain would make that mistake if they’re supposed to be proud of the person they’re showing off. Oh and Tina Gump is cracking me up. I think that’s all I had to say.
i love this… and you had me fooled… i am loving it… tina running away every chance she got… this is priceless… and the whole gang is in on it and her mother… my kind of lady… please continue soon…so i guess i have to try harder… but # 2 is a good place to be in… later baby…
Okay this is so interesting and….yes funny!!! I knew something was up when James didn’t intruduce Bette correctly and when he ran out of the house without kissing Bette goodbye…..Tina really has it coming for her and I can’t wait…..I’m already hooked to this story though you had told me otherwise, but I can’t help it :o))
Wow, that was great. Can’t wait to read more.
So is Bette REALLY the fiance? This is very funny. Tina is a nut job. Nice try at a romantic chapter.
This Tina is pretty wacky-seems she must have inherited it from her mother. Did she get some greyhound genes from her father?
So Bette must be friends with James and is tring to hook Bette up with Tina?Right…THANKS..GREAT JOB..POST SOON…
Ok, you got me confused now! somethings up with Bette, she’s not James’ fiancé is she?! No James almost messed it up! All I can say is please continue this soon so I’m out of this confused state! LOL BTW I’m loving your story!
ouvh ..my last comment is bad , really ! excuse me for that…so, good year, thanks, and try to find some time to write this story (and to answers your mails) BYe
VEry nice story!! i’ve read all your stories and yes this one is the best i think, because it’s funny and there’s suspens! I hope you’ll post soon, we all enjoy it…Tee is just so nice :)