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    FOREVER I PROMISE: Chapter 71

    Story written on January 4, 2006 by OCD.
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    HOMECOMING.. Did Tina survive the gunshot? Did their son live? Will Bette return?

     

     

    Previously

     

    “Candace drop the gun!!!!”  Cruz ordered as she fired killing Candace instantly.

     

    “Call an ambulance!!!”  Bette screamed.

     

    Cruz checked Candace to make sure she was dead and called for help on her police radio.  Charles helped Joe to a chair and Whit ran to Bette and Tina’s side. 

     

    “Whit help us.  She’s been shot.”  Bette said as she held Tina in her arms crying.  Whit held pressure on the wound waiting for help to arrive.

     

    Whit, Cruz, Charles and Joe remained at the scene while Bette and Tina were rushed to the hospital.  After giving their statements they were all released.  Cruz was placed on Administrated leave until the investigation cleared her for the shooting.  Arriving at the hospital Stacey was waiting for them.  Whit had called her so she could call Kit and the gang.  Shane and Carmen left the twins with the bodyguard, Bryan and arrived at the ER shortly after everyone else. 

     

    Bette was released after being cleaned up for her cuts and bruises.  She had several stitches but was ok other than the fact that her pregnant wife was in critical condition 3 floors up.  Bette entered the ER waiting area to see everyone sitting there. 

     

    “Come on, let’s get upstairs.  I need to see Tina.  I have to know that she’s ok.  Stacey please.”  Bette said as she pulled Stacey from her seat.

     

    “Bette, Tina’s in surgery.”  Stacey said holding onto Bette’s shoulders.

     

    “The baby, what about our baby?”  Bette said as her tears took over her emotions.

     

    “We don’t know anything yet Bette.  She just went into surgery.”  Stacey said.

     

    “Please I need to be near her.  Can we at least go up stairs to the waiting area?”  Bette pleaded.

     

    “Sure Bette.  Come on everyone; let’s go upstairs so Bette can be there when the Doctor comes out.”  Stacey motioned for everyone to follow.

     

    Several hours went by waiting for the Doctor to exit the OR.  Bette and everyone stood as the doctor approached.

     

    “Ms Porter, Tina is doing just fine.  She is in recovery.”  The doctor said.

     

    “How is our son?”  Bette asked.

     

    “He is in the NICU.  Prematurely born infants are deprived of the final weeks within the shelter and warmth of their mother’s body where they are able to thrive, develop and gain weight crucial to their survival. When babies are born too soon, they struggle to fight against many life-threatening conditions.  We are just going to have to wait and see Ms. Porter.  The chances that your son will make are not very high right now.  I’m sorry I don’t have better news for you.  But your wife is going to be just fine.”  The doctor explained.

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    2. oh i’m so glad you’re back i’vemissed this stroy terrible love our gals and the gang you have created–this would of made a great tv series lots of action and loven going on post soon

    10. OCD, Woo Hoo!!!! I’m sooooooo glad that you are writing again. I have truly missed you and your story. Good for you, hanging in there and things have gotten better. And I say woo hoo!!! again. Looking forward to your next chapter.

    11. My Baby, oh how your words can have such a loving effect on me. I am so happy you are writing again. These past 6 months have been so happy for me being with you. All my love, Boo

    12. Welcome back, OCD. Hope everything’s copacetic with you. Miss your fic a lot. It’s mighty nice that my fave fan fic writers are coming back out of the woodwork/hibernation. Cheers!

    13. whoa.. you’re back!! sweet… anyway, just to let you know that i LOVE this story and have anticipate for your comeback for a VERY LONG TIME… (but it’s worth the wait of course… =D)

    17. Good to see you back OCD and glad you didn’t let anything happent to Tina and the baby. Ok now hope no more drama for now and let the happy coming for them. Ok let see what’s next, thanks!

    19. Sorry it took me so long to comment here. Yes I too am with the welcome back commitee we would like to officially welcome you and plead with you not to be gone so long next time. Hey girl nice job.

    20. did my eyes deceived me? are you really back? LOL welcome back, you were missed, i’m glad things worked out for you…no more drama for our girls, please

    24. I’m glad you’re back. Was a silent reader on your story for a long time. Now I’m posting comments. I’ve missed your story and it was good to see this chapter. It was great. Looking forward to more.

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