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FOREVER I PROMISE: Chapter 71
HOMECOMING ONE MONTH LATER
Casey Michael Kennard-Porter was welcomed home by all to one of Bette and Tina’s famous cookouts. Lara and Dana expecting their first child in a few weeks showed up early since it took Dana a bit longer to get around now. Alice still dating Cruz was helping Kit in the kitchen. Whit and Stacey and Josh were outside by the pool with Bette, Tina,
Finally with the food ready and everything set, Bette stood up to welcome everyone and to thank her growing family of friends for their love and support. Tina smiled as she watched the most important person in the world to her open her heart to express her true feelings.
Tina couldn’t help but think of how things had been over the years. The good and the bad. As she watched over the crowd of friends she remembered her greatest wish. Her wishes that all of their dearest friends would one day find their own true love and know the real meaning of happiness. Finding your soul mate is purely a miracle. Making it work is another. As she reached for Bette’s hand, she knew she had found hers and knew that nothing would ever separate them again.
“It feels just like old times doesn’t it,” Bette asked Shane. Starring at the children playing in the pool, Shane didn’t answer. “What’s going on with you Shane? You seem so distant lately. I know I haven’t had time to talk much lately, but I know you well enough to know something’s wrong.”
Shane stared not wanting to talk about it. Still, Bette was her best friend and she knew they could talk about anything. It’s Carmen” Shane finally answered. “She wants so much more from me than I am able to give.”
“How so?” Bette asked
“Bette, Carmen looks at all of you with your partner’s and children and she wants that too. I’m just not ready for that kind of commitment. I care so much for Carmen but I I’m just not ready to settle down like you and everyone else. Why can’t we just be together for now? Why do we have to make a commitment to show how we feel about each other?”
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Great to have you back and please post soon.
oh i’m so glad you’re back i’vemissed this stroy terrible love our gals and the gang you have created–this would of made a great tv series lots of action and loven going on post soon
what a wonderful surpise to wake up to your post. you have been missed while you were away. glad things are finally looking up for you. :)
glad to see you back and what a great posting…….glad things are going well and keep up the posts
Welcome back OCD…I’ve missed you. Oh, and the story of course. LOL. The chapter was great. Thanks so much.
Welcome back. Great chapter. Can’t wait for the next.
Great to read this again..Please continue.. I like the way it is going..Love your writing have missed it..Post soon Please..
Glad you back..Hope all is well..Great chapter as always…THANKS
So glad to see you post!!!
OCD, Woo Hoo!!!! I’m sooooooo glad that you are writing again. I have truly missed you and your story. Good for you, hanging in there and things have gotten better. And I say woo hoo!!! again. Looking forward to your next chapter.
My Baby, oh how your words can have such a loving effect on me. I am so happy you are writing again. These past 6 months have been so happy for me being with you. All my love, Boo
Welcome back, OCD. Hope everything’s copacetic with you. Miss your fic a lot. It’s mighty nice that my fave fan fic writers are coming back out of the woodwork/hibernation. Cheers!
whoa.. you’re back!! sweet… anyway, just to let you know that i LOVE this story and have anticipate for your comeback for a VERY LONG TIME… (but it’s worth the wait of course… =D)
OMG!!!! OMG!! OMG!! your back hope things are well great post whit stoty comeing up soon i hope post soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thanks so much for this chapter. thanks
Wow – I have just finished reading this Story. Excellent. Pleace come back and contiune this story. I love it. Please contiune!!!!!
Good to see you back OCD and glad you didn’t let anything happent to Tina and the baby. Ok now hope no more drama for now and let the happy coming for them. Ok let see what’s next, thanks!
Welcome back – so good to see your post :o)) Great story, please don’t be a stranger and post soon…
Sorry it took me so long to comment here. Yes I too am with the welcome back commitee we would like to officially welcome you and plead with you not to be gone so long next time. Hey girl nice job.
did my eyes deceived me? are you really back? LOL welcome back, you were missed, i’m glad things worked out for you…no more drama for our girls, please
Great to see your story back, looking forward to what happens next.
I am so glad you are back. Great chapter. Please no drama for a while!!! More soon PLEASE!!!!
im glad to have you back..nice chapter thanks :o)
I’m glad you’re back. Was a silent reader on your story for a long time. Now I’m posting comments. I’ve missed your story and it was good to see this chapter. It was great. Looking forward to more.
Welcome back OCD…I have missed this story. Thanks
havn’t been to the site for a long time a thought I would read some fics I really enjoyed it hope you will update.