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    FOREVER I PROMISE: Chapter 71

    Story written on January 4, 2006 by OCD.
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    HOMECOMING.. Did Tina survive the gunshot? Did their son live? Will Bette return?

     

    “Can I see my wife?”  Bette asked as she felt her knees weaken.  Whit stepped up to hold her.

     

    “Yes, the nurse can take you up to ICU as soon as Ms. Kennard is settled.  The doctor said.

    “How am I going to tell Tina about our son?  He could die without her ever seeing him.  God help me.  We can’t lose another child.”  Bette said as she leaned on Whit. 

     

    “Bette, it’s in God’s hands now.  There is nothing we can do.  You need to be strong for Tina and your children. 

     

    Entering Tina’s room Bette felt her heart breaking.  She sat down next to Tina praying for her to wake up and be ok.  Feeling she had caused this.  It was all her fault Tina had been shot and their son might die. 

     

    Without thinking, Bette stood up and left Tina’s room.  Walking past everyone she lowered her head.

     

    “Bette, where are you going?”  Shane asked.

     

    “Bette, what’s wrong?”  Whit said as she stepping in front of Bette to stop her.

     

    “I need to get out of here.  All I ever do is cause Tina pain.  Now I may have cost her our son.  I can’t take this any more.  I need time to think.  I just need time alone.”  Bette said as she walked out of the hospital.

     

    Getting in her car all Bette could think of was how much she loved Tina and her family.  She also thought of all of the bad she had caused Tina and her children over the past several years.  Driving down the highway Bette could no longer find her happy place any more.  Her thoughts were on nothing more than leaving.  She had caused all of this pain for Tina the first time she allowed Candace to kiss her.  Their lives had never been the same.  It all started because they lost their first son.  Now once again because of her, their son may die.  Bette just couldn’t take any more.  So she drove for hours not knowing where she might end up.  She just knew she couldn’t turn back no matter how hard she tried.   

     

     

     

    FOREVER I PROMISE: Chapter 71

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    2. oh i’m so glad you’re back i’vemissed this stroy terrible love our gals and the gang you have created–this would of made a great tv series lots of action and loven going on post soon

    10. OCD, Woo Hoo!!!! I’m sooooooo glad that you are writing again. I have truly missed you and your story. Good for you, hanging in there and things have gotten better. And I say woo hoo!!! again. Looking forward to your next chapter.

    11. My Baby, oh how your words can have such a loving effect on me. I am so happy you are writing again. These past 6 months have been so happy for me being with you. All my love, Boo

    12. Welcome back, OCD. Hope everything’s copacetic with you. Miss your fic a lot. It’s mighty nice that my fave fan fic writers are coming back out of the woodwork/hibernation. Cheers!

    13. whoa.. you’re back!! sweet… anyway, just to let you know that i LOVE this story and have anticipate for your comeback for a VERY LONG TIME… (but it’s worth the wait of course… =D)

    17. Good to see you back OCD and glad you didn’t let anything happent to Tina and the baby. Ok now hope no more drama for now and let the happy coming for them. Ok let see what’s next, thanks!

    19. Sorry it took me so long to comment here. Yes I too am with the welcome back commitee we would like to officially welcome you and plead with you not to be gone so long next time. Hey girl nice job.

    20. did my eyes deceived me? are you really back? LOL welcome back, you were missed, i’m glad things worked out for you…no more drama for our girls, please

    24. I’m glad you’re back. Was a silent reader on your story for a long time. Now I’m posting comments. I’ve missed your story and it was good to see this chapter. It was great. Looking forward to more.

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