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    A Thin Line – Chpt 6

    Story written on March 31, 2006 by zheese.
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    Alice and Bette talk about Helena

    I knocked on Bette’s door and waited for her to answer. If Bette thought she was going to keep me in the dark about what was going on between her and Helena, she had another thing coming. I seriously considered standing to the side of the doorframe, so she couldn’t see me through the windows. She may not answer if she knew it was me popping in unannounced. But as it happens, my fear was unwarranted.

    Holding Angelica on her left hip, Bette opened the door, smiling and saying, “Look, Boo Boo, it’s your Aunt Alice. Say ‘hello.’” Holding Angelica’s arm by the wrist, Bette waved her daughter’s hand. “Say ‘hello’ to your Aunt Alice.”

    Angelica let out a wail of excitement and Bette grabbed me by the arm and pulled me inside.

    “Get your butt in here, Alice Pieszecki,” Bette demanded, smiling. “What took you so long?”

    “Huh? You’re glad to see me?” I asked totally astounded. This was not the reception I’d been expecting. Turning to my Earthdaughter, I tickled her chin as she screeched with joy. “Hi, baby, how are you, sweetie?”

    “Yes, I’m glad to see you, and so is Angelica. Aren’t you, Boo Boo?” Bette replied. “Alice, I expected you here, banging on my door, at the crack of dawn. Is your phone broken? Why haven’t you called?”

    “Excuse me while I get my bearings, Bette. I wasn’t quite expecting such a warm and enthusiastic reception.”

    Turning around and walking towards the back of the house, Bette said, “Follow me into the kitchen. I was about to feed Angelica. Would you like a beer, or a glass of wine?” she asked over her shoulder. “Or maybe you’d like a jar of strained peas,” she joked.

    I laughed, “Damn, you’re in a good mood today!”

    “And why not? The sun is shining, the birds are chirping, I have my beautiful baby here with me, and now you.” Bette was practically singing.

    As she bent over strapping Angelica into her highchair, she looked up at me. I can imagine how confused I must have looked. “Go ahead,” she said. “Grab a beer, they’re in the fridge,” she motioned with her head, “and have a seat.”

    “Uh, what’s going on, Bette?” I asked opening the refrigerator and pulling out a beer.

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    2. “I trust your selections. I look forward to our little tasting,” Helena said. Oh, was it my imagination that I heard innuendo and seduction dripping from that reply? HA! You are getting me so stoked for their in person meeting…hold the reins tighter zheese, these two really want to go at it…

    4. I don’t mind when you change voices at all, quite the contrary. I loved how Bette played Alice like a violin. Got her so excited I’m not sure a severe case of ‘roids would have kept her ass from bouncing in the seat.

    9. OMG, talk about foreplay. This is gonna be good, i just know it. Its strange but I’ve actually started to think that a Bette & Helena get together may not be such a bad idea. I love T&B but hey she’s gone off the deep end, and its time Bette had some pleasure in life. Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

    15. I’m waiting on this date –oop== meeting. Bette and Helena at least Helena will treat Bette like a queen. Queen Elizabeth I’m tired so being silly Thanks

    16. I’ve always loved the idea that it would be Helena, the powerful heiress, who can literally have anything she wants, who has a crush on someone seemingly unattainable to her. Hate/Love is my favourite romantic progression, and Helena and Bette certainly have that going for them! I’m excited to see what direction you’ll take them in (as long as it leads to the bedroom somewhere along the line), and it must be said, your writing style and technique are incredible! You’re clearly very talented, and I’m glad you’re sharing your talent with our little fandom!

    17. Zheese, Another piece of perfection as the slow burn tortuously takes its time in arriving at the main event. The dialogue flows simply and easily allowing an insight into each of the characters and staying true to their voices thus far. This buildup is truly tantazingly as Bette and Helena gradually test each other. They torment and tease one another with the slightest hint of temptation as to what might be. Beautifully written and constructeddd. Thank you so much for this fabulous fan fiction. Can’t wait to see where it leads to next. Your Loyal Fan.

    18. Oh yeah the innuendo was flying! Sweet! Soo..Bette will get all sexily dressed and then drop Angelica off at Tina’s so Tina can she was she will never get again, right???;)

    19. I love it! I love it I love it its all I can say I really can’t wait for a new part to come along this is something Id really want to see happening in the series

    22. Well, I’m grinning as usual. I get so wrapped up in this that when it’s finally over and I’m staring at blank white computer screen I feel bad. I just had to read it again. You seriously have these characters down to a science…to Bette’s playful banter with Alice, and even with Alice’s quirks. Everything was right in sync. Why don’t you high-tail it over to Ms Ilene and hand her this story, telling her that you’d probably make a good addition to the team of writers. Yes, yes, that’s a very good idea. I can’t wait to see what sort of nibbling and tasting Bette and Helena (whoa, almost wrote Tina there out of habit) get themselves into. But, knowing this story thus far, whatever happens will not disappoint. I give this an A plus plus, not that my opinion matters. Oh, and, I’ll respond to your note a bit later, it was very nice of you to respond. Looking forward to the next!

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