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    A Thin Line – Chpt 6

    Story written on March 31, 2006 by zheese.
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    Alice and Bette talk about Helena

    She finished tying Angelica’s bib, and looked up. “What do you mean?”

    “I mean, I haven’t seen you in this good of a mood in…in…in like…forever.” I slid the chair back from the table and took my seat. As she sat down next to Angelica and opened a jar of puréed carrots, I studied her face. She was beaming. “Ahhh, does this have anything to do with last night and a certain British beauty?”

    Bette wouldn’t look at me, but I saw the corner of her mouth creep into a sly smile. “Maybe,” is all she would say.

    I could barely contain my excitement, “Oh, my God, Bette, this is so cool! You’re smitten! Have you talked to her today? Are you going out? Oh, my God,” I exclaimed, my butt jumping up and down in my seat, “this is so frickin’ exciting! Tell me everything!”

    “You better pull back on your reins there, Cowgirl, or you’re gonna buck yourself right out of your chair,” Bette said laughing. “Besides there’s not a lot to tell. I think you know more than I do.”

    She spooned another dab of carrots into Angelica’s mouth and shot me an inquisitive gaze from across the table. I took a long swig of beer and started assessing the situation.

    “Aha,” I said, as the light bulb lit up, like Bette’s face, above my head. “That’s what this big welcome is all about. You want information.”

    With a shy smile, Bette tilted her head, and said, “I wouldn’t mind a few morsels from my favorite We-Ho magpie.”

    “Uh, correct me if I’m wrong,” I began, “but aren’t you the one who, just last night, was trying to teach me a lesson about my nosy nature?” I raised my eyebrows at her before taking another long swig of beer.

    “Alright, Alice, if you don’t want to help me, that’s just fine,” she said.

    “Help you? Help you what? I didn’t say I didn’t want to help you.” I was getting excited.

    Bette’s expression grew serious, as well as her tone. “Alice, I’m seeing Helena tomorrow, and…”

    “Oh, my God, you have a date! You and Helena have a date!” I exclaimed with elation. “When did this happen? You didn’t say anything about a date last night when you returned my phone at The Planet. You left so fast. What happened in the car with you two?”

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    2. “I trust your selections. I look forward to our little tasting,” Helena said. Oh, was it my imagination that I heard innuendo and seduction dripping from that reply? HA! You are getting me so stoked for their in person meeting…hold the reins tighter zheese, these two really want to go at it…

    4. I don’t mind when you change voices at all, quite the contrary. I loved how Bette played Alice like a violin. Got her so excited I’m not sure a severe case of ‘roids would have kept her ass from bouncing in the seat.

    9. OMG, talk about foreplay. This is gonna be good, i just know it. Its strange but I’ve actually started to think that a Bette & Helena get together may not be such a bad idea. I love T&B but hey she’s gone off the deep end, and its time Bette had some pleasure in life. Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

    15. I’m waiting on this date –oop== meeting. Bette and Helena at least Helena will treat Bette like a queen. Queen Elizabeth I’m tired so being silly Thanks

    16. I’ve always loved the idea that it would be Helena, the powerful heiress, who can literally have anything she wants, who has a crush on someone seemingly unattainable to her. Hate/Love is my favourite romantic progression, and Helena and Bette certainly have that going for them! I’m excited to see what direction you’ll take them in (as long as it leads to the bedroom somewhere along the line), and it must be said, your writing style and technique are incredible! You’re clearly very talented, and I’m glad you’re sharing your talent with our little fandom!

    17. Zheese, Another piece of perfection as the slow burn tortuously takes its time in arriving at the main event. The dialogue flows simply and easily allowing an insight into each of the characters and staying true to their voices thus far. This buildup is truly tantazingly as Bette and Helena gradually test each other. They torment and tease one another with the slightest hint of temptation as to what might be. Beautifully written and constructeddd. Thank you so much for this fabulous fan fiction. Can’t wait to see where it leads to next. Your Loyal Fan.

    18. Oh yeah the innuendo was flying! Sweet! Soo..Bette will get all sexily dressed and then drop Angelica off at Tina’s so Tina can she was she will never get again, right???;)

    19. I love it! I love it I love it its all I can say I really can’t wait for a new part to come along this is something Id really want to see happening in the series

    22. Well, I’m grinning as usual. I get so wrapped up in this that when it’s finally over and I’m staring at blank white computer screen I feel bad. I just had to read it again. You seriously have these characters down to a science…to Bette’s playful banter with Alice, and even with Alice’s quirks. Everything was right in sync. Why don’t you high-tail it over to Ms Ilene and hand her this story, telling her that you’d probably make a good addition to the team of writers. Yes, yes, that’s a very good idea. I can’t wait to see what sort of nibbling and tasting Bette and Helena (whoa, almost wrote Tina there out of habit) get themselves into. But, knowing this story thus far, whatever happens will not disappoint. I give this an A plus plus, not that my opinion matters. Oh, and, I’ll respond to your note a bit later, it was very nice of you to respond. Looking forward to the next!

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