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    A Thin Line – Chpt 6

    Story written on March 31, 2006 by zheese.
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    Alice and Bette talk about Helena

    Angelica was looking at me like I was crazy, like I was the one wearing smooshed carrots all over my face.

    “Alice, if you’ll calm down for two minutes, I’ll tell you what’s going on and what I want to know,” Bette said, wiping Angelica’s orange face with her bib.

    “Okay, I’m calm. I’m calm.” I turned my beer up and took a long chug. “Go on. I’m listening.”

    “Thank you. First of all, I’m not sure I’d call Helena and I getting together tomorrow a ‘date.’ Second of all, nothing happened in the car last night. But Helena did confirm to me that you were right. She told me that she doesn’t know how you know, but she does care about me.”

    “I knew it. Oh, my god, I knew it. I was right,” I said, before Bette scolded me with a stare to quiet me again.

    “We’re getting together to talk,” she continued. “I’d simply like to know a few details, so that I don’t feel like I’m walking into Helena’s completely in the dark.”

    “Hmm, you and Helena in the dark. What’s wrong with that? Sounds pretty hot to me.”

    I’d tried, but I just couldn’t help my little interjection. I knew I’d be receiving a quick admonishment.

    “Alice, you really are impossible sometimes!”

    “Sorry,” I grinned. “Seriously, though, I understand. I’ll help you, Bette. You wanna know how I figured out Helena’s got a mad crush on you, how long it’s been going on, blah blah blah. Right?”

    “How articulate, Alice. Couldn’t have said it better myself. Blah blah blah.”

    I stuck my tongue out at her, and Angelica blew carrot bubbles at me.

    In the next half hour, I busied myself relating my conversation with Helena, my ‘close encounter of the first’ kind, to Bette. I told her how Helena said she’d come to L.A. because she was ‘captivated’ by a woman who she said she’d do anything to win. That she ‘ached’ and was ‘mad with desire.’

    “Helena told me things got out of hand and she did a lot of things she regretted, that she wasn’t proud of. She said she knew her actions had caused a lot of people pain. I could tell she was really sorry, Bette. It was like she’d had an epiphany or something. She was trying to forgive herself for all the heartbreak she felt she had caused.”

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    2. “I trust your selections. I look forward to our little tasting,” Helena said. Oh, was it my imagination that I heard innuendo and seduction dripping from that reply? HA! You are getting me so stoked for their in person meeting…hold the reins tighter zheese, these two really want to go at it…

    4. I don’t mind when you change voices at all, quite the contrary. I loved how Bette played Alice like a violin. Got her so excited I’m not sure a severe case of ‘roids would have kept her ass from bouncing in the seat.

    9. OMG, talk about foreplay. This is gonna be good, i just know it. Its strange but I’ve actually started to think that a Bette & Helena get together may not be such a bad idea. I love T&B but hey she’s gone off the deep end, and its time Bette had some pleasure in life. Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

    15. I’m waiting on this date –oop== meeting. Bette and Helena at least Helena will treat Bette like a queen. Queen Elizabeth I’m tired so being silly Thanks

    16. I’ve always loved the idea that it would be Helena, the powerful heiress, who can literally have anything she wants, who has a crush on someone seemingly unattainable to her. Hate/Love is my favourite romantic progression, and Helena and Bette certainly have that going for them! I’m excited to see what direction you’ll take them in (as long as it leads to the bedroom somewhere along the line), and it must be said, your writing style and technique are incredible! You’re clearly very talented, and I’m glad you’re sharing your talent with our little fandom!

    17. Zheese, Another piece of perfection as the slow burn tortuously takes its time in arriving at the main event. The dialogue flows simply and easily allowing an insight into each of the characters and staying true to their voices thus far. This buildup is truly tantazingly as Bette and Helena gradually test each other. They torment and tease one another with the slightest hint of temptation as to what might be. Beautifully written and constructeddd. Thank you so much for this fabulous fan fiction. Can’t wait to see where it leads to next. Your Loyal Fan.

    18. Oh yeah the innuendo was flying! Sweet! Soo..Bette will get all sexily dressed and then drop Angelica off at Tina’s so Tina can she was she will never get again, right???;)

    19. I love it! I love it I love it its all I can say I really can’t wait for a new part to come along this is something Id really want to see happening in the series

    22. Well, I’m grinning as usual. I get so wrapped up in this that when it’s finally over and I’m staring at blank white computer screen I feel bad. I just had to read it again. You seriously have these characters down to a science…to Bette’s playful banter with Alice, and even with Alice’s quirks. Everything was right in sync. Why don’t you high-tail it over to Ms Ilene and hand her this story, telling her that you’d probably make a good addition to the team of writers. Yes, yes, that’s a very good idea. I can’t wait to see what sort of nibbling and tasting Bette and Helena (whoa, almost wrote Tina there out of habit) get themselves into. But, knowing this story thus far, whatever happens will not disappoint. I give this an A plus plus, not that my opinion matters. Oh, and, I’ll respond to your note a bit later, it was very nice of you to respond. Looking forward to the next!

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